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722742 No. 722742 ID: 26a346

Chapter 1
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No. 726685 ID: 2f5847

>>726680
This. We are mice not men. Let us bond over cheesy goodness.
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No. 726706 ID: 55c4cf

Your cousin looks like she is stressed or worried about something and pretending to in a good place for you specifically. I wouldn't push it right now.

Tell her that you're happy to be in town with her. Let her show you around. Go out to eat if you're hungry.
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No. 726707 ID: fafe46

>>726706
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No. 726713 ID: 26a346
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726713

You been on the train for a few hours so you ask your cousin about eating.

Sure enough she obliges you and leads you to a cute little cafe a little ways down from the station.

It's called Francine's~

Before you go in you give your parents a brief phone call. Tell them that you made it and met up with Candy. They say they love you and tell you to enjoy your vacation!
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No. 726714 ID: 26a346
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726714

You take a seat outside on the patio and you both order.

You order a glass of water and some cheddar biscuits. They're not AS GOOD as your cheddar biscuits. But for city folk they're pretty decent.

Candy orders Cheese, grapes and wine.

You ask her what's there to do in Pawpulpus?

"Well, If you're visiting for a while you gotta get registered at City hall so you can get a credits card....there's also plenty of shopping, I can show you all my favorite boutiques. You're my guest so don't you even worry about spending a single credit~ Oh and later tonight I can show you the hottest club. I love three blocks down from~" She sighs as she swivels her wine around.
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No. 726715 ID: 094652

How about a summer job? Anyone hiring?
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No. 726716 ID: bb78f2

Swivel your water around in your glass like a classy dame
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No. 726722 ID: 350a50

>>726716
Yeah, mimic her swirling her drink.

Ask what the club's called.
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No. 726724 ID: a075ba

>>726714
Shopping could be fun but you don't want to impose too much having her buy a bunch of things for you!

And sure, you'd love to go out and have a good time with her tonight.
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No. 726727 ID: 180f83

Ask at what part of the city these locations she wants to show us are at. We want to avoid the north side if we can.
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No. 726729 ID: 74cce7

>>726714
Ask if she knows any pet stores nearby. Not to buy, just look at the cuties.
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No. 726731 ID: 6a9d1a

Expel liquid violently from every orifice.
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No. 726735 ID: a22f87

well she seems to have things planned out pretty well, don't see why you can't go along with it. But don't try to buy to much if she's paying. You're still her guest after all and shouldn't take advantage of her generosity.

Also catch up with her. I mean you haven't seen her in years so might as well ask her how the things have been since you two last saw each other.
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No. 726756 ID: 6d1754

>>726735
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No. 728139 ID: f542b1
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728139

[animated]

You swirl your glass mimicking Candy.
It's actually a little embarrassing to watch...
You ask about the club and mention maybe staying for the Season and getting a job.
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No. 728141 ID: f542b1
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728141

Candy stops swirling her glass of wine.

"Oh it's a nice little hot spot. Just a block from where I live. It's called 'The Woodland'. Just on the North side of town."

"As for a job, well you'd need to Register at Town hall for a work permit. Even if it's just a season. They like to keep tabs on the Citizens here. It's no farm sweetie."
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No. 728142 ID: f542b1
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728142

Oh no! Candy lives on the north side of town!
You sweat nervously. How do you tell her she's living on a bad side of town?!? Well obviously she's a nice mouse, it can't be that bad....So we don't say the north is bad. That'd be rude without being there first.

"I'd love to go shopping and hit The Woodland with you! So what have you been up to since you left Plainston?"
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No. 728143 ID: f542b1
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728143

"Well let me tell you. At first it was really hard. But I managed. Now I work in physical therapy and pharmaceuticals. I have a really nice apartment, and I'm actually seeing someone~ Maybe you'll see'em if you do hang around for the season~"
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No. 728144 ID: 79a07e

>>728143
...Clever way of putting her professions.

Hoo golly, Miss Molly, you are in for a ride.

Be careful. Very careful.
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No. 728150 ID: 2f5847

We are a simple country mouse and are glad she's helping sick people get better.

This is gonna be the bestest vacation ever, and Candy's gonna teach us so much cool city stuff!
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No. 728154 ID: 180f83

chew on your button to calm your nerves if you need to.

ask about her boyfriend/girlfriend.
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No. 728156 ID: cea69d

Be careful! Olly mentioned anyone could be in the pocket of the undercity ruler- who better to help out a mouse down on their luck than the boss of the city? Candy mentioned hard times, and now shes working with drugs! In the North side of town ! Just be on your best behavior and don't let your guard down!
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No. 728170 ID: 398fe1

>>728143
Ask to see her business card!
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No. 728172 ID: 204140

Wink knowingly.

even though you don't really know.
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No. 728175 ID: 2f5847

>>728172
>>728154
I support these.

We should trust our cousin, because she helps people.
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No. 728176 ID: 4fa90a

Physical therapy, ask if she can talk about some of her clients. No names of course, just what ails them and how she's treating them.
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No. 728177 ID: a075ba

Ask how one goes about obtaining employment in the exciting fields of hands on physical therapy and pharmaceutical distribution. Did she have to go to school?

Day one in the city and we've already met two drug dealers, a working gal, and a smuggler. And we've only met two people!
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No. 728178 ID: 6d1754

>>728154
!
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No. 728202 ID: 350a50

>>728176
This.
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No. 728281 ID: 55c4cf

Let Olly know that you have to go to the north side of town through text and send some worried emoji.

Ask Candy how long she has been seeing this someone.
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No. 732483 ID: 26a346
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732483

Oh gosh! How nerve-wracking! You're cousin is a professional! It makes you feel like you haven't really accomplished much in your life...having been a steady farm girl.

As you chew your button, you ask her about her boyfriend. Afterall in all your postcards to and from this is the first you've heard of this!

You also ask to see her business card. Because you would love to know if your cousin is doing well!

While you talk a lizard comes and clears the table of your empty plates and glasses.
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No. 732484 ID: 26a346
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732484

"Oh darling, he is just wonderful! He's tall and handsome. He's very sophisticated and has the most refine tastes. I guess that's why we're dating~" She sighs.

"We actually met at 'The Woodland' " She continues. "We've been dating for probably a few months now~"
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No. 732486 ID: 26a346
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732486

As for business cards go....Candy actually has one!
It's pink! And scented. It smells sweet like honey suckles and strawberries.

It's pretty.

You have acquired Candy's Business Card.
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No. 732496 ID: 398fe1

>>732486
Ohhh, she was talking her job up but not THAT far up. Massage parlors can be legit, and it makes sense for her to dress like that if she's running one. Bring them in with a bit of skin, but you don't have to give them the skin.

So yeah, your cousin is gonna be fine to hang out with. She must not be in a bad part of the bad part of town.

Tell her about the snake you met on the train!
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No. 732500 ID: 2f5847

>>732496
We tried that. >>726677

Look on the bright side, Molly, you just met your first Skink!
…by which I mean your waiter.
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No. 732509 ID: 180f83

time to get registered at City hall
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No. 732510 ID: a075ba

>>732486
"Oh Wow, it's so nice! You must be really good at what you do to have such nice cards!"

>You're cousin is a professional!
Maybe you can become a professional too? I mean, she did it in a relatively short time since she left!
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No. 732516 ID: b2d501

You'll think about it. For now, time to hit the bed.
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No. 732518 ID: 2f5847

It appears to be light out. I say city hall.
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No. 732523 ID: dfdb1e

When you're done complementing your cousin success, and getting anxious by your comparative lack of, change the subject to something else.
It would be nice to know what she does for fun. Maybe ask for advice on differentiating the gender of reptiles.
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No. 732546 ID: 55c4cf

Molly, do you even know what you'd LIKE to do professionally yet? You can't compare yourself to others until you at least know what you want to do.
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No. 732557 ID: e4f856

It's ok Molly, everyone develops at their own pace. It doesn't make you better or worse than anyone else.
Ask what made her decide to go to the city! How did she feel?
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No. 732566 ID: 79a07e

>>732486
...boy, did we take that in the wrong direction.

Well, neat! Massage parlors can be nice- easy to work out the kinks.

And...well, okay, maybe she lives on the border of the bad part of town. Thinking about it, I was in a similar situation for a while where I was living in an apartment in a kind of 'no-man's land' between the ghetto and decent middle-class.

So, what do you figure you two will be doing for fun? Big place like this, you're probably gonna have to decide where to go in advance.
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No. 767480 ID: 26a346
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767480

>>732496
>>732509
>>732518
Your cousin is so amazing! She's a professional masseuse and she owns her own business. Not only that she just paid for your lunch! Your vacation is going great! You haven't had to pay for anything!

You ask her to see the city. Maybe the city hall first to get one of them there ID or work permits for the duration of your trip.
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No. 767481 ID: 26a346
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767481

Naturally you hold her hand and walk with her. It's a pleasant day, the sound of the city is just hustling and bustling and full of life. Not like the sleepy country you're used to. It's nice.
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No. 767482 ID: 26a346
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767482

You arrive at town hall. It's huge. It's very modern art...and a little scary. Something about it seems predatory. On each side of levitating monolithic ovoids. Hundreds of feet above. How modern!
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No. 767489 ID: 398fe1

>>767482
Looks like an owl! Ask what the mayor's like.
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No. 767493 ID: 55c4cf

Make a joke about modern art.
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No. 767495 ID: 9145ba

Headbutt statue.
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No. 767501 ID: 094652

They Might Be Giant( robot)s

but who cares.

You may want to reconsider registration. If they tag you, you'll miss out on many profitable opportunities.
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No. 767502 ID: b69589

>>767489
This.
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No. 767517 ID: 9876c4

Oh, hey, it updated. Welcome back.

A backwoods gent once told you that local regulation is like being swallowed by a barn owl, except it never ends.

But we're having far too good of a day for such notions.
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No. 767522 ID: 26a346
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767522

>>767489
Gosh! With such a huge building, You can't help but wonder what the mayor is like.
So you ask Cousin Candy.
She's quiet for a moment before she turns to you with an answer.
"Well I don't know much, but"She starts to explain. She explains how no one knows exactly how long the mayor has been in office. And how their appearance in the public eye is few. But there aren't really any complaints by most citizens. Just the illegal crowd. Not that that doesn't make sense.
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No. 767524 ID: 26a346
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767524

>>767493
"How positively Modern of them." You say as if you're making some witty joke.

You're not funny. That was a bad joke....was that even a joke?
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No. 767526 ID: 26a346
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767526

>>767524
"Actually, town hall is the oldest building in Pawpulpus. If you want I'll take you to the library later and show you the history of the city..."Candy laughs uncomfortably.
Look what you've done. With your bad joke and all.
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No. 767527 ID: 180f83

Oh no, quick! salvage that bad joke with another bad joke, like
"Libraries? How positively retro of them."
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No. 767528 ID: 9876c4

>>767527
Look up at the structure. Deadpan.

... Ain't that a Hoot?
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No. 767531 ID: b744c5

>>767526
Just apologise, smile and hold her hand. She’s uncomfortable, but I wouldn't say it's because of your joke. Whatevers going on, hopefully she'll tell you in due time.

Just do your best to not worry about it right now.
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No. 767533 ID: b15da4

Emergency plan B: Headbutt tall rodent.
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No. 767565 ID: 094652

And nobody finds that strange? When was the last election, anyway?
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No. 767747 ID: b1b4f3

>>767526
We gotta apply for the work permit!
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No. 767931 ID: df6309

>>767495
>>767533
Oiy fuck off! Stupid suggestions that will be ignored are my thing.

Ahem, salvage the situation by turning yourself inside out.
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No. 768882 ID: 26a346
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768882

>>767527
>>767528
Oh NO! You're dying kid! You try to quickly salvage this. "Librarys....ain't that a hoot!"
SHOOT YOU MESSED IT UP! You're spiraling!
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No. 768885 ID: 26a346
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768885

>>767531
>>767533
Your cousin looks at you with concern! She asks is everything okay? Is this to much? She offers to mail you in an application if you're just not down for it...or something.

OH NOOOO SHE THINKS YOUR A SPAZ NOW! INITIATE SELF SAVING!
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No. 768887 ID: 26a346
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768887

YOU STRAIGHT UP KNOCK THE WIND OUT OF CANDY WITH A HEADBUTT!

situation defused.
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No. 768889 ID: 26a346
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768889

As soon as candy get her air back. She glares down at you.
"Y...you're lucky you're family."

Her voice is ominous and has an alluring sound of sweet velvet death to it.
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No. 768890 ID: 26a346
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768890

You apologize and say you're ready to continue to go get the licence. But maybe you should proceed with caution.
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No. 768893 ID: c441c1

Go forth while attempting to hide your shame.
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No. 768894 ID: cc58b1

nervously chew on tail to alleviate stress
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No. 768896 ID: 55c4cf

Tell her to hit you as hard as she can.

Toughen up.
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No. 768899 ID: b744c5

>>768893
This, mostly. Seems like that was a stupid idea.
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No. 768951 ID: 180f83

Go up to the building, and knock on the town hall door, like any polite city person obviously would.
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No. 768956 ID: 91ee5f

Tell her to headbutt you back! It's only fair that she gets to do it to you!
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No. 768992 ID: 7aa8c3

See this is why you don't headbutt people, all it does is make them angry, to get out of awkward situations you need to make everybody else feel as awkward as you so you need to do something to confuse or disorientate them.
Keep this in mind as you enter the building then go and disembowel the first person you come across, this will leave everyone feeling as awkward as you are normally do.
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No. 769045 ID: 79a07e

>>768992
Ignore this.
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No. 789639 ID: 26a346
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789639

Now you've gone and done it. You're flustered. Face red. Ears Red. Your cousin sees this and and comforts you.
"Hey Hey, it's okay. They weren't that bad." She chuckles.
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No. 789640 ID: 26a346
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789640

To relieve some stress you begin to chew your button. It does seem to help you feel better before you make your way towards the town hall.
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No. 789641 ID: 26a346
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789641

As you walk, you feel strange passing by one of the pillars with the floating egg like monolith. It's as if something is watching. Although there is nothing her to really watch you.
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No. 789642 ID: 26a346
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789642

You knock on the massive door of Town hall. Candy tells you that it isn't necessary. The door opens on it's own....technology sure is neat.
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No. 789643 ID: 26a346
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789643

Town hall is dark. Town hall is empty. Town hall is warm. Honestly it's a little unnerving that the only light is coming from another egg like monolith just hovering behind a figure at a desk. A soft snoring coo reverberating around the huge empty room. The desk sat between two climbing tubes that disappear into the ceiling. You can't see what's at the top.
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No. 789644 ID: 398fe1

>>789643
Introduce yourself to the owl.
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No. 789645 ID: a363ac

>>789643
Try to introduce yourself to the Owl receptionist. but cry because your puns aren't up to snuff.
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No. 789650 ID: 143250

Ask if we should wait until the poor owl's awake. You wouldn't want to be rude and wake the poor guy up if it is his break time.
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No. 789667 ID: 9876c4

Hello my jokes are very bad so I need a permit for them, and also a license to kill incase I tell a really bad one!

Also I'mnewhere.
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No. 789772 ID: 26a346
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789772

You enter the hall and approach the desk. There is a soft hum that you didn't notice before. The receptionist is taking a nap.Probably because she's an owl....Owls make you uncomfortable. They always have.
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No. 789773 ID: 26a346
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789773

You gently cough. But she doesn't wake up. You want to introduce yourself....but nothing you can do if she's sleeping.
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No. 789775 ID: 26a346
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789775

SUDDENLY Candy slams her hand on the desk.
"Yo, new resident checking into the city! Wake up Glossy!"
The Owl snaps up and shuffles her feathers around!
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No. 789778 ID: 143250

Shyly wave hello.
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No. 789779 ID: 26a346
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789779

The Owl clicks her beak and smiles before her face sours at the sight of Candy.
"Oh...it's you."
Candy smiles and leans in. It's not her usual sweet smile. There is something...not quite right about it.
Candy-"Glossy, long time no see."
Glossy-"Indeed. Ya know, I had such hope for you."
Candy-"I could say the same about you."
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No. 789780 ID: 26a346
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789780

Suddenly the tension breaks and the pair laugh.
Glossy-"Still licking the boots of that cat?"
Candy-" Oh you know it,Still preening the Mayor's tail I see~"

It's a little weird.
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No. 789781 ID: 9876c4

>Mice abusing owls.
That's just not right, although it's probably sorely overdue.
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No. 789782 ID: 26a346
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789782

You wave timidly and gain the Owl, who's name you assume is Glossy.
"Hello, um Nice to meet you. I'm Molly. I'm from Plainston." You introduce.
"She's my cousin." Candy chimes in.
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No. 789784 ID: 26a346
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789784

"Ah I see. Are you on Vacation? Just visiting Pawpulpus?"
She looks right at you. She is kinda cute for an owl.
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No. 789790 ID: 143250

Yep. a vacation.
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No. 789794 ID: 094652

"Yes. Registration papers please."
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No. 789819 ID: 02aa5e

>>789784
Cuter than Olly? I doubt it.
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No. 789825 ID: 3abd97

>Owls make you uncomfortable
Look she's even smaller than you, don't worry about it.

>She is kinda cute for an owl.
Yep.

>Are you on Vacation? Just visiting Pawpulpus?
Yup! That's it. A visitation vacation.
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No. 789900 ID: c00eaa

Inquire about licking cat boots.
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No. 789917 ID: 144af2

>>789900
Don't inquire about this. I think we know what that means, and if we don't we'll find out soon enough anyway.
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No. 789925 ID: 8159df

The two of them have the same neck decoration, it must be in style at the moment.

>>789794
>normal suggestion
>kome
>>789900
>weird suggestion
>not kome
What?
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