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10594 No. 10594 ID: fb5d8e

>BEGIN CHAPTER 21
>"THE HIEROPHANT, REVERSED"



>Find previous chapters and volumes in /questarch/
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No. 10971 ID: d2ea61

>>10969

"You should probably come down from there..."
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No. 10972 ID: 72ee5e

>>10967
When were they married? Out of curiosity. He also said " returnink after twelve years vhith husband!"
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No. 10973 ID: f44349

>>10970
continue with
"I'm so sorry.
I didn't mean it like that I just...
I panicked. I knew there was going to be trouble and I needed to go help and...
I just... I guess I don't know how to say 'no' to such a beautiful face."
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No. 10974 ID: d0213f

>>10969
"Hey, I just saw a bunch of heads explode..."
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No. 10975 ID: 670155

>>10972
... Oh crap in a hammock.

"Princess darkmoon has returned"

"I am prince mudy Latral"

>prince
>princess

Fffffff
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No. 10976 ID: bde1b8

All this time is wasted,
pretending we're in love~
But that's alright,
cuz you know I love being with you and making you cry~

Now don't let go
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No. 10979 ID: b8a70c

They woke her up with Tot in the first place, we were snuggling Raital, there should be no issue.
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No. 10980 ID: 7cfa17

>>10969
Instead of doing the boring ol' explanation routine, how about Mudy sings her a little jingle about invasions to one's privacy and the word 'no'?
Given that he's such a legendary bard, he could make it sweet sounding instead of infocommercial-like.
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No. 10981 ID: c80cec

>>10979
These folks don't seem like the type that would care if you kept a harem, you know what I'm sayin'?
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No. 10982 ID: 6164e0

We are a bard, and we have a kickass magic flute

Lets serenade her some to get her to relax, and then try talking with her.

Just play a soothing and relaxing piece, full of warmth.
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No. 10983 ID: d2ea61

Let's explain that our body is ours, and we have the say on how and when it is used. Just as she has for her body. She's doing wrong if she forces herself on us against our will. No matter how much she wants it, she must respect us if she wants this to work.
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No. 10984 ID: fb5d8e
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10984

>"I.. I had no right to say that."
He slowly walks over to Raital as he attempts to find the right words.
>"I'm so sorry. I didn't mean it like that I just..."
Mudy sighs.
>"I.. I panicked. I knew there was going to be trouble and I needed to go help and... I just... I guess I don't know how to say 'no' to such a beautiful face."

Mudy can hear Raital sniff. She raises her head slightly.
>"No, Latral.. I.. It's all my fault. I just love you so much.. So much.."
She whipes her eyes.
>"You're so perfect and cute and beautiful and sweet.. So eloquent.. So smart.. So.. So strong of heart.. Latral... I think I love you /too/ much."
She shifts a bit, but does not turn to make eyecontact.
>"What we do.. It's not normal for brothers and sisters to do.. Latral, I.. I feel like I forced you into this for my selfish desires. My love for you is so overpowering...
>Maybe..
>Maybe it's better if we seperate again."
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No. 10986 ID: d2ea61

>>10984

This can work. We just need to make it. Not all things come easy, but they're all the sweeter for it.
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No. 10987 ID: bde1b8

>>10984
Play her a song to convince her otherwise.

Make sure its the first song to pop into your mind.

Make sure its the best and greatest song in the world.
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No. 10988 ID: bffa2a

>>10969

"... I'm sorry for what I said, please forgive me Raital. I tought I was needed but I made a mess of even that... Please come down, I want to talk about this."
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No. 10989 ID: f42c4e

>>10984
Raital... no. To run now, would mean we may forever be apart. And to be forever apart would crush me and my very spirit, Raital. All relationships have their hardships. We can't run from it, we have to solve it. Please Raital let us solve this.
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No. 10990 ID: d0213f

>>10984
"Your recent behaviour has been rather strange indeed. Perhaps we may use a few days apart - I do not want hurt you either, Raital."
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No. 10992 ID: bde1b8

>>10984
"If we separate something will probably rape me. Please stay."

Explain the sandworm incident, preferably in tears.
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No. 10993 ID: 7b9042

>>10984
No, she just needs to keep her emotions in check, that's all. DON'T SPLIT UP THE PARTY
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No. 10994 ID: 6164e0

>>10984
'I think we can learn to be together, Raital. And if we can't then we can rest content in the knowledge that we tried, and won't ever have to wonder 'what if?' later. Now do you mind if I join you up there?'
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No. 10995 ID: d2ea61

>>10984

"But I can't do this alone. I need you. You understand how important this is, much more so than the others. If you leave me, what will I do? How will I achieve anything? I need somebody I can rely on. I need you, in more ways than I can name. We just... we just need to work on things."
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No. 10996 ID: 1afd58

>>10984
"Raital... I understand. I know what you mean, and no, it's not normal for siblings to do the things we do. But... the way things have been going, the dangerous lives we both live... if we part now, we might never meet each other again.

Raital, I need you in my life. I need you with me. I need you in my arms at night and your hand in mine during the day. I need to see your beautiful face and hear your beautiful voice. I can't be away from you again, Raital.

If you want to slow down on the non-sibling love, then we can. If you want to forget that I'm your brother and just love me as Mudy, we can do that too. But don't say you want to leave me, Raital. We can never do that. I can never stand to be away from you again, Raital.

I love you."
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No. 10997 ID: 95484a

>>10984
"No, my dear. You cannot simply run away from every problem. Only by facing and overcoming them can you gain true strength. We can work through this together."
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No. 10998 ID: f44349

>>10984
"No.
You never forced me into ANYTHING.
We both wanted it.
And I... I don't care if it's normal. I love you. That's all that matters to me.
Please, don't go. I can't stand being apart from you. We can work through this, Raital."
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No. 11001 ID: da5997

>10894

"Raital. You are as much a part of me as the name Latral. You complete the parts of me I never knew were absent until YOU were absent. I swore to you that I love you. Our love was strong enough to break Kuhral's magics. Stronger than earth, stronger than time. It is YOU that I love, and should you leave? I will salt the earth and burn the skies to find you, and to return to your side. I will chain time and turn back the Kraken Sea. I will lash the very fabric of the world to my will, and stir the stars from their firmament to bring us back together.

Now give us a smile, kid.

We love you."
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No. 11004 ID: 72ee5e

You guys are all lucky I'm not writing this. Raital would definitely contract Aeris-syndrome somewhere down the line with her taking off all the damn time.
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No. 11005 ID: d2ea61

>>11004

Then we are lucky indeed.
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No. 11006 ID: bffa2a

>>10984

"No, please don't go... You haven't forced me into anything. I don't want to lose you again after all I went trough to find you. I love you more than anything, we can make this work! It just takes time and understanding. Don't go."
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No. 11007 ID: 873b02

>>11004
Reaver's not cool enough to kill her off.
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No. 11008 ID: fb5d8e
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11008

>"Raital.

>I... I understand. I know what you mean, and no, it's not normal for siblings to do the things we do. But... You never forced me into ANYTHING. We both wanted it. And I... I don't care if it's normal.

>Raital, I need you in my life. I need you with me. I need you in my arms at night and your hand in mine during the day. I need to see your beautiful face and hear your beautiful voice. I can't be away from you again, Raital.

>You are as much a part of me as the name Latral. You complete the parts of me I never knew were absent until YOU were absent. I swore to you that I love you. Our love was strong enough to break Kuhral's magics. Stronger than earth, stronger than time.

>We can work through this together, Raital..


>I love you."
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No. 11009 ID: 670155

>>11007

in before Lulu flies out of the sky with darkbeing...

"Besides, if you left i'd probably come after you."
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No. 11010 ID: 72ee5e

>>11007
Way to jinx it though
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No. 11011 ID: 873b02

>>11009
>>11010
Haha, if only. That won't happen.
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No. 11013 ID: d2ea61

>>11008

"You should probably come down. Come down, please."
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No. 11018 ID: d2ea61

>>11017

Let's back off. Slowly.

"Your eyes are awfully red right now..."
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No. 11019 ID: fb5d8e
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11019

>"Latral...

>You .. and your silver tongue... .."
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No. 11020 ID: 6164e0

>>11017
Okay.

Time for that song!

A nice, mellow, calm song.

Lets play like our pelvis and/or life depend on it!
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No. 11021 ID: d0213f

>>11019
Shuffle a few steps back.
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No. 11022 ID: f21281

>>11019
fuuuuuuuuuu-

So basically it's "Let Raital Rape Us" or "Let Raital Rape Us In The Not-Good Way"
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No. 11023 ID: bffa2a

>>11019

"... Raital? .. Please.. I love you."
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No. 11024 ID: 2abfb1

>>11019
>silver tongue
That sounds like a proposition.
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No. 11025 ID: d2ea61

>>11022

We're past choices, and it's looking like we're going to get the latter.
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No. 11026 ID: 7cfa17

>>11021
Nah. Don't show you're not confident around her. That would invalidate the whole damn speech.
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No. 11027 ID: bde1b8

>>11019
"...Would you like me to play you a song?"
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No. 11028 ID: fb5d8e
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11028

Mudy attempts to slowly back away, but feels a crushing blow land on him. He falls back onto Cheryl, unable to move.

>"Oh, Latral! Latral! I love you too!"
, Raital cries out.
>"Latrallll... My sweet little brother.. I'll never ever let go of you again, no matter how loud your protests."
She affectionately rubs her nose against his head.
>"We'll stay together for all eternity."
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No. 11029 ID: d0213f

>>11028
"Ow, ow, ow, ow, ow - this hurts so much."
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No. 11030 ID: d2ea61

>>11028

There's very little we can do, is there?

Ok, let's take no part in this. Let's remain limp - in our limbs - and not move. She can damn well do the rape herself if she wants. She won't get help from us.
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No. 11031 ID: a5dc18

Whoa whoa whoa there, lets not say something hasty that we might regret later...
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No. 11032 ID: 7cfa17

>>11028
Did she just FRONT ELBOW DROP on us face first? God damn that must be painful.

Roll for damage.
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No. 11033 ID: 670155

Pat her on the head and say "well...we'll..work on that.."
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No. 11034 ID: f44349

>>11028
...Apparently that worked a little TOO well.
Oh well. Crazy clingy is better than gone. :3

Suggest that we get back in our tent.
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No. 11035 ID: bffa2a

>>11028

OKAY, not what I expected but we can live with that. We will just have to accept she has "fiendish" appetites and accomodate.

"Show me"
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No. 11036 ID: b8a70c

>>11028
"Raital, Raital.. It's okay to let go, we just have to be there for each other at the end of the day."
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No. 11039 ID: 6164e0

>>11028
Fuck, this is not going very well is it?

We really need to talk to her about restraint, and do it soon so this whole fiasco doesn't get repeated. Just because we love each other doesn't mean we need to jump each other all the time, fun as that may be.
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No. 11040 ID: bffa2a

Don't upset her again tonight. Let's give her time to learn self control. Hopefully before we die.
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No. 11043 ID: 670155

She's probably not going to listen to us until after the rape or unless we call for help...from...bladetree?
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No. 11044 ID: 6164e0

>>11036
That's a great sentiment

'We don't need to prove our love and affection at every turn, for that could lead to our friends and dreams suffering. Knowing that we will be there for each other tomorrow, and the day after, and the day after, having that faith that the other will love you just as much a day from now as they do right now, that is a true bond.

Now, we have the rest of the trip to ourselves barring interruption, why don't we go back to our tent?'

A loving and gentle lecture and giving in to her immediate demands.

Hopefully the new tactic will help start to stabilize the relationship.
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No. 11045 ID: d2ea61

>>11043

She's horny and has a power level about tenfold bigger. I don't think we want to see dead elves now. Any more than we already saw, that is.

I don't think we're fully conscious right now either.
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No. 11057 ID: fb5d8e
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11057

Mudy strains himself to pat Raital gently.
>"R-Raital, Raital.. It's okay to let go, we just have to be there for each other at the end of the day."
, he whispers to her.
>"We don't need to prove our love and affection at every turn, for that could lead to our friends and dreams suffering. Knowing that we will be there for each other tomorrow, and the day after, and the day after, having that faith that the other will love you just as much a day from now as they do right now, that is a true bond."

Raital raises herself slightly to look Mudy in the eyes. He catches the rare sight of a smile on her face.
>"I know, Latral.. I-I'll never blame you for not touching me like I touch you. Your temperance is part of your charm.."
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No. 11060 ID: 6164e0

>>11057
>Raital Smiling
>Smile not shown

SON OF A BITCH

I won't be able to stop imagining what that smile looks like with a kobold mouth now.

Oh god, the middle has to stay up, so the only thing that can happen is the sides retracting up.

A kobold smile is :< becoming :3
Dear god, that is adorable.
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No. 11061 ID: fb5d8e
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11061

Raital lifts Mudy from the ground and happily carries him to their tent.
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No. 11063 ID: 1afd58

>>11057
I love you, Raital.

Now... let's go make love again. We have time now, and we are young and in love. There's no reason to say no now that we have time.
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No. 11064 ID: d0213f

>>11057
Why does every Raital interaction play out like a soap opera? I thought Mudy was a bard, not a Shakespearean actor.
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No. 11065 ID: 670155

d'aawwwwww
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No. 11066 ID: b57bb2

We need to do something about those nosebleeds. She doesn't seem to suffer any damage from it, but it's damn messy.
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No. 11067 ID: 6164e0

>>11061
Oh god, the smile is too cute.

Blood makes it just a bit creepy though.
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No. 11068 ID: 670155

How the heck do they get that out of their clothes anyway..
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No. 11070 ID: 6164e0

>>11061
Ah, I see we are STILL wearing her panties.

I wonder what her response will be to that.
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No. 11073 ID: 6164e0

>>11068
It flakes off when it dries maybe, somehow.
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No. 11074 ID: f44349

>>11061
SHE :3'd!
HOORAH~
MISSION ACCOMPLISHED
QUEST OVER
EVERYONE GO HOME
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No. 11075 ID: f21281

>>11066
But her blood gives us power~

Do you not remember the level-up? Any part of our body that was covered in her blood was improved.
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No. 11076 ID: bffa2a

D'awwwwww, that's our girl. Mudy look shellshocked right out of 'nam.
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No. 11077 ID: fb5d8e
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11077

>"Well, I thank thee for thine counsel, milady. I feel like I will be able to deal with it better now."
>"Nay a problem, lad. Ye gonna be allright?"
>"Aye, milady, I shall just stretch mine legs for a moment."
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No. 11078 ID: b57bb2

>>11075
We should get a bathtub installed then.
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No. 11079 ID: fb5d8e
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11079

>"Y-you know.. It's okay if you called me 'big sister' during it.."
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No. 11080 ID: 873b02

>>11079
Slay the wicked, Bladetree. Slay them all.
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No. 11082 ID: 6164e0

>>11077
>>11079
Yep, we really need to work on that blood thing.

But still, I find this developement hilarious.
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No. 11083 ID: f42c4e

>>11077
"Counsel" eh? Wink wink, nudge nudge, say no more.
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No. 11084 ID: 4714be

>>11079
Incoming >8I
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No. 11085 ID: 35cea2

Evil lurks before thee Bladetree. Will thee shirk thine duty and let these sinners live?

Or will you do what must be done, and prove thyself a true Paladin?
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No. 11087 ID: bd7486

oh no, poor Bladetree... his moral code will lead to either great or terrible things for us all. Probably just more >8|
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No. 11088 ID: 670155

Pop out and give him a thumbs up...and an awesomeface.
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No. 11089 ID: 6164e0

Some of these comments make me very happy we can only control Mudy, and not, say, Bladetree.
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No. 11090 ID: d0213f

Evil lurks within the group. You must act, Bladetree, smite the evil. Become a true paladin.
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No. 11092 ID: fb5d8e
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11092

>End of chapter 21
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No. 11094 ID: 5dd4ce

Quick, we must PVP Bladetree before he can call forth his hammers! God, I've played too much Diablo 2.
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No. 11096 ID: 873b02

>>11092
That's the way. You know what must be done.
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No. 11097 ID: c7a59a

The Skullking is evil, of that there is no doubt. But just because Mudy is her enemy does not make him righteous.

What fellowship hath light with darkness, righteousness with unrighteousness? Slay the wicked before ye and kill the Skullking with your own two hands!
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No. 11098 ID: f21281

>>11079
"Ahh! Raital, c-careful with that...it's sensitive~"
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No. 11099 ID: 1afd58

Ahn! Ahn! Onee-sama~
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No. 11100 ID: 6164e0

>>11092
Uh huh.

From the perspectives of Mudy or Raital, they haven't seen any of the bits about Bladetree and his views on their relationship, have they?
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No. 11101 ID: bffa2a

>>11092

Better watch out that vein, sir. That can't be good.
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No. 11102 ID: 1afd58

>>11100
They saw him making faces when he commented directly on the nature of their relationship back at the well.
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No. 11103 ID: 6164e0

>>11092
You know, we can probably make Bladetree stop caring if we can get him some action while we talk with the Dark Elves.

I mean really, being a knight who never got to marry the girl he wanted, now watching two half-siblings have bloody, bloody sex all the time would be a great deal easier to deal with if he was getting some too.

Probably. Or he would snap and try and kill us. But since it seems inevitable that he try and do that soon anyway...
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No. 11104 ID: 670155

>>11103

Well, he's either macking it up with axebeard. Or we could use an elaborate plan to set him up with kuhrel..
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No. 11105 ID: da5997
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11105

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No. 11106 ID: bffa2a

>>11105

This is canon.
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No. 11107 ID: d0213f

>>11104
I don't think he would enjoy being a plaything of a choatic evil wearcat. Although, lawful hot dickings, etc.
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No. 11126 ID: 7eda8b

Nice job blowing our once chance to make Raital back off.
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No. 11130 ID: 6164e0

>>11126
Both Mudy and Raital are young and inexperienced at love. I doubt that was the last chance for anything right there. Both are exploring how to make relationships work, and on at least some level are aware of that.

There will be more chances (pending Deus Ex Machina) to normalize the relationship.
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