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111417 No. 111417 ID: d1d42a

Thread for discussing King of Pentacles

numerous questions and complaints have been voiced
probably best to have them answered outside of quest
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No. 126989 ID: daa216

All seems good to me. Had the right amount of story versus battle.
No. 126999 ID: 9876c4

Because it wasn't a straight red vs. blue skirmish, there was less erotic tension than the prequel.

But this is necessary for the story to grow.
No. 127002 ID: eeb7d9

I think it's going pretty good so far. There is a lot of characters to face. I feel it might be a little overwhelming, but it might just be me. I have no complaints besides that.
No. 127015 ID: 2755f5

thank you everyone for the support!
I always aim to put in a decent amount of nudity, but with the nature of quests it's difficult to know what direction people will choose.
maintaining a cohesive narrative makes it difficult too.
suggesting lewd actions helps a lot too!

what do you mean by "erotic tension"?

it is a lot of new characters especially in this chapter, next chapter expect to see more familiar faces
No. 127017 ID: 9876c4

Each side was trying to defeat the other, but also to see their enemies naked.
There's a lot of this tension between taxmen and terrorists, not so much between inquisitors and a giant, or undead and anybody.

Strip poker with 6 nuns wouldn't be as interesting as strip poker with 3 nuns and 3 barbarians. Shame and lust raises the stakes dramatically. But I know this isn't always possible, sometimes the world needs to be built before those players can live in it.

Does that make sense?
No. 127237 ID: 2755f5

yes! you want to see nuns stripped by barbarians.
this may happen . . .

there will typically be more sexual tension when both male and female characters are involved, it also depends on the nature of the opponents some are more perverse than others
No. 127239 ID: 2755f5
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>"What did you do before all of this? As in what was your job at the hive before joining the Freedom Fighters. What is your specific reasons for joining them? How were the relations between members of your little raiding party before you got captured? Particularly is there any chemistry between you and Dolan?"

Icker:'back in Abeilia I was a brewer for my hive, it was my job to create honeys and other salves or potions.
When the freedom fighters begged my hive for aid I was selected as the most viable candidate.
It has been a difficult task for me, the other freedom fighters have trouble seeing the difference between service and slavery, they are a weird sort flighty and perverted, living in chaos.
It took me a while but I've learned they are good people, Dolan seems to like me . . . maybe to much, I think he wants things that I can't give.'

No. 127366 ID: 2755f5
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Ladis Oropesci

Teroth's Labor shortage following the undead invasion has brought all sort to the kingdom.
hardy folk looking to start a new life.
much to the surprise of the surface dwellers many Ichthians of the Talon Sea also came in to seek work.

Ladis is a child of these pioneers, hatched in the shallows of the Ivera Province.
her family is well integrated with the native Terothians, and are recognized as skilled messengers.
Ladis is hearty and proud, her hard work earned the recognition of the Hatchely & Hearth Adventuring company.
It was not long before Lady Vivian Hearth hired the Ichthian on as her personal attendant
No. 127367 ID: 2755f5
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nude version
No. 127969 ID: e9d41b
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>"Princess Reefa: How was your first meeting with Duchess Kalez? Any impressions that first meeting left on you? Have things changed since then or stayed the same? What issues (if there are any) are you two unable to agree on?"

Reefa: 'I've know Aunt Kalez my whole life just about, she married my uncle before I was born.
I used to think she was a monster when I was rather young, my uncle explained how foolish I was.
I later found out she didn't think much of me either, she'd penned me as petty and shallow.
I've since learned how appearances can be decieving, Aunt Kalez is loyal to this kingdom and she'll do whatever it takes to keep it safe
but I'll prove to her that she was also wrong about me, that my love for this kingdom is as great as hers, and it's protection my only desire

No. 128371 ID: e9d41b
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Icker on display
No. 128376 ID: daa216

Well the sign isn't wrong there.
No. 128389 ID: 7e3ccd

Now that's what I call a bad end. (assuming it's canon)
No. 128392 ID: e9d41b

it's canon in that Icker is a prisoner of Kalez's minions

however it's far from the end of Icker's story!
stay tuned to the current chapter to find out more!
No. 128399 ID: 54c395

After rereading the first chapter I have a new found appreciation of Eeyfel hope we see more of her soon!
No. 128403 ID: e9d41b

with Eeyfel it's a little uncertain when we get back to her, as it depends a lot on what route the story goes
No. 128417 ID: 54c395

How much of the story do you have predetermined and how much do you just make up as the quest progresses
No. 128418 ID: e9d41b

I had a preset plan, but people jumped the rails almost immediately
so I have a new idea how things will go but elements change with every unexpected choice.

I do have long term plans and themes that will be reached one way or another
No. 128460 ID: e9d41b
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Garrin and Garcio reveling at a tavern
No. 128463 ID: 54c395

No. 128678 ID: e9d41b
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>"A few questions for Mother Sabria on the undead. Were the undead always here existing in the world and only now gathered in large numbers to become noticeable or did they just show up out of no where. It's also said that anyone who dies usually comes back as one of the undead, is there some special ritual or crude method to ensure the body doesn't become an undead? Lastly, are the bodies becoming undead on their own or is someone bringing them back?"

Mother Sabria: 'Thank you for inquiring, I will assume you are a young sheltered child as this is crucial information you should already know.
but the truth can never be heard often enough.

It is with endless regret that I admit that these abominable creation have plagued this world for an eternity.
it was Absolon; Demon lord of Despair who brought death to our world,
not a day had passed before his brother Churzegar; Demon Lord of hungers exploited this curse.
The fiend offered mortals freedom from death and freedom from the judgement of the gods that it brought.
cowards, traitors and every sinner imaginable flocked to this promise and damned themselves everyone.
every demons deal has an unthinkable price, one inflicted upon the innocent and guilty alike.
the guilty suffer as slaves to the demon's hunger, the innocents murdered so that ever more can be offered this curse.

however, all is not lost. The depraved servants of Churzegar would have you believe every corpse will serve him.
This is a lie.
There are four methods to assure the dead will not rise.

the first and most important is that the demon lords are bound to the hellish realms, they have no power but what mortals give them.
mortal souls can only hear the demon lord's offer if a particularly corrupt servant offers a connection through fell magic

the the second, only those who fear death, only those who fear judgement will accept his vile offer.
a pure soul, who knows the gods will accept them will never become such a monster.

the third is through divine power of the gods, which only the most devote servants can wield. such power can bring judgement to a soul even in the mortal realm.

the forth is more complicated, but I recommend it for those you doubt the innocence of, which honestly should be everyone.
and more importantly the already risen.
it is a complicated method, which I will only cover the basic concepts of here.
we strip the bones of weak flesh with holy acids, and bleach the bones with the purifying rays of the sun
then entomb the bones in a vessel that cannot rot, stone will suffice if you can do no better.
you're local church will be able to provide you with further details, and texts on the topic.

Stay loyal to the true gods, and always strive for virtue.'

No. 128853 ID: e9d41b
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Help design an outfit for Garrin, Reefa or Garcio!
No. 128857 ID: 9876c4
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Nothing to see here, just a medical professional and his rancher friend taking their ward for a ride...
No. 128861 ID: daa216
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Nothing says art like mspaint and a laptop touchpad. Basically drew some janked up herder clothes. Seeing with all the animals with them, the will want to use that as a cover. Also because I'm the deviant who suggested they steal the scribe's outfit for the princess, I left the middle dummy blank.
No. 128862 ID: e9d41b

being a deviant is excellent and encouraged!
No. 128873 ID: 2870a3

a paper doll, and no steve shirt? what is this, some sort of timeline where the joke fillaly over? it cant be!
No. 128874 ID: 41e231

We can only pray that it might finally be laid to rest
No. 128876 ID: e9d41b

agreed, it dying on april fools day seems like destiny
No. 128877 ID: 9876c4

I thought mine would cause more of a stir, tbh.
No. 128895 ID: a664e3
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In spite of the holiday, here's a serious suggestion. I tried to give them very unassuming looks, and I think I did okay. Garcio may stand out with the contrasting vest/shirt and the ripped sleeves, but it fits his louder more brash nature well.
No. 128901 ID: 080aaf
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You're right! Steve shirts are so passé. Tee shirts aren't even periodically appropriate! Introducing the latest in womens' fashion, the Steve Skirt!
Also comes in poncho flavors!
No. 128902 ID: 080aaf
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En cuanto al pájaro, una broma diferente, que refleja su necesidad primordial de polinizar la delicada flor de la princesa.
No. 128913 ID: 688dd6
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No. 128929 ID: 54c395

I’m a fan of this
No. 128936 ID: 8275cf
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Icker meets a wasp at the ball
No. 128938 ID: b1b4f3

What's with the manacles?
No. 128940 ID: 9876c4
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I like the little handbag.
No. 128941 ID: ad51b8

they look like they're going to be good friends
No. 128942 ID: daa216

A character we will meet later?
No. 128943 ID: 8275cf

She's an escaped convict

I wasn't planning on it.
she was created to show what a wasp in my setting would look like
however there's a good chance her design will find it's way into the main story
No. 128946 ID: 080aaf

I look forward to us meeting her.
No. 129029 ID: 8275cf
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>"Sir Garcio, how long have you served in the king's army? What was your first meeting with Sir Garrin like? Any strange or funny stories you two were involved in?"

Garcio: 'Oh it's gotta be twenty years since I got taken in as Garrin's squire, and we've been inseparable ever since.
his first day of training started with a lecture that changed my life, taught all about how much you can get away with if just do a good job with the important stuff.
this idea has probably given us a thousand glorious adventures! like the time we to strip those Binder nuns in the public square just to get the keys to the chapel,
or when we had to pretend to be foreign princes and the local farm girls showered us with affection, LOTS of affection if you know what I mean.
And then there was that strange event where goblins were smuggling stolen wine into the kingdom, which we had to confiscate of course.
All in the name of the crown!
hah! it's GOOD to be working for the king.'

No. 129030 ID: 54c395

How old exactly are Garrin and Garcio
No. 129031 ID: 8275cf

Garrin is about 44 and Garcio about 31
No. 129124 ID: 54c395

How old is Reefa?
No. 129125 ID: 8275cf

Reefa is 27
No. 129150 ID: 094652

To the undead travelers, is your hunger separate from your power source? Have you considered magic surgery to reconnect the part of you that induces horror hunger into something... more lively? Lots of dancing especially in the pelvic area perhaps?
No. 129183 ID: daa216

Afraid questions like that require coin kome.
No. 129184 ID: 8275cf

it's true I will reserve in character responses to patron donation.
No. 129185 ID: b9ddbd

I appreciate Garcio's penis.
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