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127013 No. 127013 ID: fc3e27

Quest: https://tgchan.org/kusaba/quest/res/915048.html

Disthread for my first ever Quest! I'm very new to this and probably really awful, so I'd love feedback and suggestions. Actually, the quest will probably die without them. Especially if I keep railroading this badly. Haha.
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No. 127018 ID: 2755f5

the wolf girls are real cute
No. 127021 ID: 9712ff

Thanks lol
I used to draw those for money
No. 127022 ID: 9712ff
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No. 127023 ID: 66ec08

just read it and i’m enjoying it already — my first feedback/advice, not just for quests but also as an artist in general, is to can the self-deprecation. you’ll feel better.

also don’t worry abt “railroading” when you’re only a handful of updates in! not every quest is a complete sandbox. clearly you have a plot in mind, and you’re getting us there. if we need to be scooted around a little bit to get into proper position for the story, that’s not railroading, it’s just proper guidance of your audience.

chill out! you’re doing great.
No. 127025 ID: 6d3b59

Aw, thank you! That's good to know. I'm terrified I'm doing something wrong haha

And I just straight up don't like my art. It's serviceable, I suppose.
No. 127026 ID: 66ec08

that’s a relatable feeling, and one that just means your eye is more skilled than your hand. you have the critical taste to know what you want from your work but your hand hasn’t caught up yet. it will!

fwiw, as a reader i’m really enjoying your art style. also, quests are a great way to improve anyway, since it’s just constant repetition.
No. 127027 ID: e6f27c


you're kinda cool
No. 127028 ID: 0c3c2c

I was asleep when you put up the paper doll. Give me an hour or two and I'll have an outfit designed for Eth. They seem rad and I hope they don't get killed by this isopod immediately.

Also, if you still draw wolfgirls for money I will pelt you with it to draw more.
No. 127030 ID: 9712ff

no u

go ahead! any outfit is better than one designed by me lol
and i will draw wolf girls for free if you'll be my friend
No. 127031 ID: 9712ff
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No. 127032 ID: eeb7d9

I am liking where this thing is going. Keep it up!
No. 127033 ID: 9712ff


Ayy I recognize you! I hope I can keep it going strong!
No. 127036 ID: eeb7d9

Hehe, kinda hard to miss that name, huh?
No. 127042 ID: 0c3c2c
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Heyo! This is late, but here's Eth in a pretty mundane surcoat, standard and traditional for wear by knights on duty, say they were suddenly awoken and slammed on their armor as fast as possible. Also gave her historically inaccurate steel lamellar! I'll probably have a few more to upload by tomorrow, though I might be a spot ill.
No. 127043 ID: 8e6b7b

Oh fuck thats really cool

Matrix eth

Looking forward to more!
No. 127044 ID: 930d12

I think she looks really cool in the lamellar, it's very interesting to look at.
No. 127049 ID: eeb7d9

It kinda looks like a norman knight's standard gear. I like it, seems easy to draw as well if you put a tunic on top of the chain mail.
No. 127054 ID: 0c3c2c
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For all your 'I will reap the souls of lizard-kind' needs!
No. 127055 ID: eeb7d9

This reminds me so much to "The Cat Lady".
No. 127056 ID: 0c3c2c
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"In time, she became a queen by her own hand, but that is a story for another time."
No. 127057 ID: 0c3c2c
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There's another, even more blatantly lewd version but it would be impolite to draw erotica of other people's characters without asking them first.

Also, the tiara is because she's winning a swimsuit contest.
No. 127065 ID: c7c0c5

Erotica away. I'm into it.

Also DAMN these are goooood
No. 127071 ID: eeb7d9

That was hilarious, i want to listen to the story of THAT!
No. 127074 ID: 0d5ab6


Thats in the sequel~
No. 127077 ID: 4f591e
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No. 127103 ID: eeb7d9

>Your heart has hardened a little.
Hey is this like, the choices we make affect Eth's personality? Can we make her more heartless or kind ro stuff like that?
No. 127105 ID: 5ca8ce

No. 127106 ID: 0c3c2c
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Roger that!

Thanks, I super appreciate the compliments!

>With the death of the last of the royal line and the near total destruction of the royal guard, the lizards quickly claimed the land, wiping out all hope of resistance in mere hours.

>'Ethelyne' as she was now called fought bravely but eventually lost consciousness from blood-loss and lack of oxygen amidst mountains of fallen foes, waking to find herself in chains.

>Now considered the last ranking official of the fallen monarchy, Eth was claimed as a rare prisoner and subjugated to endless public humiliation and exhibition, made to suffer unendurable indignity.

>In time, as the years passed. her captors grew careless around the now-surely-broken once-knight, the weakling mammal no match for superior lizard mating.

>Shortly thereafter, an exotic slave failed to show up to her regular shows and was impossible to find anywhere. No one ever connected this with the appearance of a rebellion of young and idealistic lizard-hybrids, or their mysterious queen...
No. 127107 ID: 5ca8ce


No. 127108 ID: 0c3c2c

If you'd like to discuss art further, I can always give you an email or discord address.
No. 127111 ID: ac8b4a
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So, funny story

Reno was the first character I designed for this

Guess what my design process was
No. 127113 ID: eeb7d9


No. 127114 ID: eeb7d9

Is that motherfucking Katia Managan? You made a PRINCESS based on Katia FUCKING Managan?
No. 127119 ID: 0c3c2c

This is the best.
No. 127149 ID: e63e6d
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Ignore this.
No. 127154 ID: eeb7d9


I know you said to ignore this, but are you ok?
No. 127155 ID: a9af05

No, you can't make me ignore this!
No. 127156 ID: e63e6d


Its just so I can link a self portrait in my wiki page haha

im as okay as ever
No. 127157 ID: b1b4f3

Just one thing:
Cutscenes are traditionally marked in the subject field, with "1/2" then "2/2" or something similar.
No. 127158 ID: e63e6d


That... makes a lot of sense, actually. Sorry! And thank you!
No. 127159 ID: 094652

That was awesome!
No. 127162 ID: 2fceed

A shame I was late to the party, I wanted to suggest having the princess "chance upon" the lewdcuts to try and elicit a nosebleed.
No. 127164 ID: edfbdc

Okay so the listed stat increases are a hardened heart and playfulness. Currently Eth is on trend for some kind of lewd assassin which is interesting if not a little worrying.
No. 127165 ID: 864e49

Did you know that:
Upper Þ and lower þ use to be used in old English to represent the th sound and the name of the letter was thorn? So Thorne can be spelled Þorne or just Þ.
Upper Ð, lower ð means eth and was used interchangeably with þ because fucking English.
Both are still used in Iceland to this day.
No. 127169 ID: e63e6d


Yep! I'm very interested in linguistics, actually. So I name characters after letters.

Also worth mentioning that Ȝ is a thing
No. 127172 ID: edfbdc

The letters being the names I figured out, but the fact that those two letters are interchangeable is very interesting.
No. 127174 ID: 094652

Aaand it looks like you spelled Porn but fancier.
No. 127175 ID: e63e6d

They aren't actually interchangeable, technically. Thorn describes an unvoiced fricative (THing, THrough, THin, faiTH), whereas Eth is a voiced fricative (THat, wiTH, THere, broTHer). The difference is fairly slight, though, and not one most people even notice.
No. 127176 ID: edfbdc

Huh, well, I don't understand the words describing it, but I get the gist. Or the feel of it, I guess.
No. 127177 ID: bfb318

The quest is cool!!
Do you have a gallery or Twitter or anything that people can follow for more of your art?
No. 127178 ID: b7d7f0



Don't expect too much I never upload haha
No. 127184 ID: eeb7d9

Man, i am missing the updates!
But i liking my annon companions suggestions. So yeah, quest is going great!

So, if i counted right, Eth's heart is: 1 hard and one playful. I love it. And apparently, her kink is seducing princesses. Noice.
No. 127187 ID: 0c3c2c
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Time for more low-grade fanart! This time it's Thorne.
No. 127190 ID: 094652

Former is placing your tongue right behind your teeth to make a 'th' sound with maximized pressure through the tiny noise hole. Latter is vibrating your tongue during the 'th' so it makes tiny bee noises with that pressure instead.
No. 127191 ID: b7d7f0

Yes. Apply pressue to Eth's tiny holy, and vibrate your tongue at Thorne ;3
No. 127193 ID: eeb7d9

I was learning English! And you ruin it!
I already know how to eat pussy, i don't need that!

Funny thing, i am studying to be an English teacher, so this kinda helps.
No. 127195 ID: edfbdc

Thanks, that helps solidify it!

And that just makes what I said also sound dirty. I thought this was a Christian discussion thread.
No. 127197 ID: 481e44
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The Official EthQuest Soundtrack can be found at: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLE4uqL42ny_20A1k93PcnZnKsq3UMO5QY

Chapter 2 is at: https://tgchan.org/kusaba/quest/res/916309.html
No. 127199 ID: 15a025

Just finished reading the first thread tonight. It's was a pretty exciting start! Looking forward to reading some more!
No. 127214 ID: 6fb3de
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No. 127215 ID: edfbdc

I can't believe that Eth is secretly a Satanist
No. 127223 ID: 6fb3de
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Snek boi
No. 127224 ID: 70be57

No. 127254 ID: b1b4f3

Man, Eth is getting fucking owned left and right.
No. 127263 ID: bb78f2

Eth is a huge loser
She's the best
No. 127266 ID: 6b2719
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Maybe the people playing her are losers
No. 127267 ID: eeb7d9

Maybe you shouldn't listen to ALL of us ALL the time. But at least is funny to see you get scolded.
No. 127310 ID: bddb0f

Cool quest and good drawings. Thumbers up.
No. 127311 ID: 1618ba

its been brought to my attention i made a spelling mistake in my last update. oops lol
No. 127315 ID: 6e7032

I was about to say, does Dana often call Eth a slut
No. 127317 ID: c4ee45

That was also a mistake, it was Thorne. English is not my native language, and I should probably write at 3 AM less often (and maybe I should start proofreading). Apologies!
No. 127318 ID: eeb7d9

Ohhh so it was that. It did came kinda off, but it was too hilarious to actually pay attention. Just imagining Dana saying that, was too good.

What is your mother language?
No. 127319 ID: eeb7d9

Ohhh so it was that. It did came kinda off, but it was too hilarious to actually pay attention. Just imagining Dana saying that, was too good.

What is your mother language?
No. 127321 ID: c4ee45

No. 127322 ID: 158da5

It's fine! The art made it plenty clear. It's very good so far, and that's a mistake tons of people might make, it's so minor.
No. 127326 ID: eeb7d9

Huh, i wasn't expecting that, but it kinda makes sense?
No. 127330 ID: 827ddb

How so?
No. 127332 ID: eeb7d9

I am not sure how to explain it exactly, but it just made sense to me when i started to see animals in the story and the map you made. And i just thought: Wolfs in the north and the the center, lions coming from sowehere else, probably south east; lizards from the south in a desert that use cimitars; and then you have the bird people from the east.

Wolves = europeans, Europe is full of those and are really important in the mythology and culture.

Lizards = south asians (Moors, Persians, Turks, etc) live in the desert and use scimitars. They also tended to invade Europe frome many sides.

Bird people = it is more of a speculation, but i would guess they could be the east assians (Russian, Mongols, ect) birds are important there, they were use as hunting animals and the feathers are very used to make arrows, they were very fond of their bowmanship.

Sooo there you have it. When you said you were German, it kinda make sense to me, taking in account your Quest. I don't know if you took inspiration from that, but that is what i interpreted.
No. 127334 ID: eeb7d9

I could actually keep going, the more i think about it, the more similarities i find.
No. 127335 ID: eeb7d9

AAAND i fucked up my name again. Great.
No. 127336 ID: 6fb3de
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Uh... not really...? The area I live in used to have both wolves and lions, but has neither now. Only lizards and birds.

I based it more on traditional fantasy stories. The lizards were heavily influenced by the Aiel from Wheel of Time, who are aesthetically arabic, but functionally more like picts than anything . They're also a standin for the standard goblin/kobold/troll race most high fantasy tends to have.

Also the map looks more like westeros or north america than anything lol

But if that's your reading it's totally valid, I'm all about death of the author
No. 127337 ID: eeb7d9

Well, i guess that i was a bit off then. The more you know, i guess! It doesn't make it less interesting. I was going for a more historical point of view. Probably because i've been playing too much Medieval II tho.
No. 127339 ID: eeb7d9

Sooo, nanquest 2 confirmed?
No. 127341 ID: 522b9d

wrong author, yo
No. 127342 ID: 574817

That's what YOU think
No. 127343 ID: eeb7d9

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No. 127348 ID: 12b116
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fuck the police
No. 127351 ID: eeb7d9

And then all of started to howl. No one can stop the howling.
No. 127352 ID: ad51b8

it's how the snake people hunt down escape wolves. They just find a spot that will carry their voice the furthest and then just howl and wait and see if they can't hear any wolves howling back and then just follow their ears.

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