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57823 No. 57823 ID: d696db

This title page really has nothing to do with the story.
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No. 57824 ID: d696db

Hello readers and thank you for your interest! Before I start chapter 2, I'd like to hear what you all have to say about the beginning. I think it ended up feeling pretty slow, and the combat took way longer than I'd originally intended. Thoughts?
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No. 57843 ID: 6a1ec2

What is this...?
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No. 57861 ID: d696db

Chapter 1: http://www.tgchan.org/kusaba/questarch/res/414896.html

Since it doesn't look like I'm going to get any responses, chapter 2 will begin shortly.

Recap:
Joanna Clareton and her 4 soldiers (Jason, Mikael, Murdon, and Dani) discover the truth behind the monster attacks on their home - a rival city has placed a large curse on the nearby fauna. They destroy a small part of the curse, weakening it. We meet a woman named Kroma who tells us that she and Joanna are Valorkin - they have special powers that come at a cost. Chapter 2 will open with meeting a new Valorkin.
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No. 57863 ID: bf54a8

oh THAT. okay yeah, it was pretty cool.
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No. 58237 ID: bf54a8

so apparently if someone cries out in pain and it startles a wild animal it's okay to hate them.
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No. 58319 ID: bf54a8

welp, hope killing a deer was worth letting a kid die.
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No. 58338 ID: bf54a8

looks like everyone vanished cause they felt bad...
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No. 58362 ID: d696db

looks like this thread just isn't very active! maybe more people will want to talk later. if you have any questions about the current story though just let me know, as i'm not sure whether or not i'm making everything clear.
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No. 58363 ID: bf54a8

no it's clear, it's just people hate failure.
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No. 58367 ID: 6a1ec2

God I love that title page.

She's gathering all the flowers!
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No. 58696 ID: 4a328b

http://www.authorama.com/english-fairy-tales-29.html

TLDR; Mister Foxes are bad news guys
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No. 58698 ID: 6a1ec2

>>58696

I don't know, that Mr. Fox seemed like a pretty upstanding dude. Kills pretty British wives and doesn't afraid of anything.
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No. 60537 ID: 4c7bc9

Part 2: http://www.tgchan.org/kusaba/questarch/res/439697.html

And summary: We meet another Valorkin, Rouan the orc hunter. He learns that a Reptilian (lizardfolk) tribe called the Stonespires is in trouble because they are missing their sacred spear. Rouan and a boy named Muko track the spear into the dangerous swamp and find the Grexan orc that stole it. On the way they meet a suspicious creature named Mr. Fox and save some reptils from a bogeyman. They take the spear and the orc thief captive, right before he can escape through a portal back to Grexis. They free Mr. Fox on the way back to the tribe, who is revealed to be a shapeshifter and disappears. They decide to release the orc thief as well and throw a party. Rouan talks to Half-tail, an important tribe member, who gives him a fang necklace that used to belong to Half-tail's brother.

Joanna and co accept a super secret mission to convince a dragon to attack Grexis. They begin training for the trip.



I'm going to be running the quest BULLSHIP (the one with Quigley the minotaur and ARENA) before I start ValorQuest Ch3 so I can kind of get more practice at making quests, and also because I have some fun things planned for it.

I'm starting to feel like ValorQuest was way too ambitious for my first quest, due to plot complexity / number of characters / etc etc etc. Anyway BULLSHIP will probably be updating multiple times a day for a few days a week.
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