Corrections, the Proofreadening: the Sequel!
Alien Amongst Aliens 2:
- Page 3, panel 2, Bormac doesn't have the scaley texture he usually has. Panel 6, one of his horns doesn't have the line to mark where it meets his head.
- Panel 4, panel 2, Bormac's covers have slipped down his body somehow, and he has no eyebrows. Panels 4 to 6, no scale texture.
- Page 7, panels 6 and 9, Bormac doesn't have his cheek scales.
- Page 10, panel 7, the door to the crawlspace isn't shaded.
- Page 15, panel 6, Bormac has no nostrils. This happens elsewhere but in smaller shots where it come off as just style, but this panel is a closeup.
- Page 16, panel 2, nostrils missing again, also the background is filled in behind Bormac's neck and back.
- Page 20, panel 5, the pomi running after the toya has no tail.
- Back Page, panel 1, the belenos is missing a line for the top of their head.
Polo Interlude Part 4:
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