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86774 No. 86774 ID: 939c7f

Here's the second discussion thread.

I'm starting another one seeing as the last one is so cluttered and filled up that it can be hard to find snippets of info among all the commentary.

I'll post a few segments of text blocked into four parts. I'll try to keep it concise and legible.
blue text means that it's an errata, that it was changed since the last edition and that this is whats to be followed.

After the blocks the thread will be free and open to discussion. Have fun~
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No. 86775 ID: 939c7f
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86775

Part 1 - the story.

a quick rebuttal of the plot for those who might have missed parts or be new to it...

You are Gatling, a magical knife who can posses and control anyone you are jabbed into. You met Eadoo (the main character) in the forest after she found you along the road, she only noticed you were magic when she killed a jackalope with you, where upon you began to speak.

Eadoo wished for money, power and bitches, but most of all, to be king. You promised to give her these things in due time. Returning to her home you found a broken cart along the road. Inside was a princess named Rosalin. Eadoo agreed to help her as best as she could.

You got back to Eadoo's house only to find that her children have been killed by something terrible. Eadoo and Rosalin ran away into the night and got caught by Boogeymen. you stabbed one and took its body. Killing the rest you escaped to a tavern.

Rosa and Eadoo entered leaving you outside and met an ornery She Gnoll named Shenzi. Eadoo protected an elf from the monster but in that challenged her to a duel. After winning, Eadoo won the life of a gnoll monk named William and banged the elf, it was super hot.

The elf told of a crown, a throne and a scepter that combined would make Eadoo king of dragons. Eadoo decided that she would find them and left the next day for them.

the next day Rosalin was attacked by an eagle and taken away. Eadoo chased after her but was stopped by Martin. a knight looking for Rosalin. Eadoo convinced Martin to help them and together they found the princess and saved her. Where upon Martin asked Rosalin to marry her, but she denied her because she thought of martin as too much of a sister.

On the way back the team fell upon Shenzy again and managed to get Gatling inside her. Using her a puppet, You tried to convert the gnolls to Eadoos service, but only a few joined. Onion, Liver, Bacon, Banzai and Ed. The rest swore vengeance.

after finaly getting to town, Eadoo met an armless beggar, who was latter named Alanna. and took her in as her daughter. Alanna proved to posses magical abilities over love and caused a young elf to fal madly in love with her. This disturbs Alanna to this day, because the elf girl is very clingy and sensual and Alanna is not a pedophile.

In a tavern you meet a friendly demon named Eanreig who joined the cause and martin got mad and left, leaving his squire, Roland, behind. Roland turned out to be of holy decent and seeks to help Eadoo against his will, due to a magical blade.

It was agreed upon that you would do side quests for the town while you prepare to storm the castle and take the town as a foot hold for eadoos new empire of love and tolerance.

One such quest was to kill a monster in the forest. You sent out a scout team and fought it. After defeating it, you tried to take its body but where sucked in. inside its mind you wandered around and tried to make sense of its strange ego and affection/hatred for "the master" only to find that it was you she loved/hated.

You managed to free the monster from its madness, only to find a kobold named Trixy at the heart of it. She falls in your arms, wildly in love and completely submitted to you. claiming to have known you once before and to be your one true love.

You wake up and the others meet Trixy, she makes a poor impression on them and rubs off as rude and self centered. though useful. You loot a near by cave and return home for more questing.
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No. 86779 ID: 939c7f
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86779

Part 2 - Game mechanics

Eadoo quest runs like a typical quest, you suggest actions and talk to the characters. Though Eadoo quest has Rpg elements and stats blocks as well as dice rolls.

Each character has a class and level. Every level the character gets to assign two +5's to his stats and choose an ability. Each ability leads to two more abilities and with every level the options grow making rather versatile characters. Two characters with the same class can end up completely different as such.
Characters who meet specific prerequisites can multiclass. this is simpler with a tutor. When a multiclass character levels up you must choose what class to level up and then assign ability points accordingly.

there are ten stats in the game
-Weapon skill represents how good the character is at fighting.
-Ballistic skill represents how good the character is at aiming.
-strength represents how much... you all know what strength is!!
-Toughness means how much he can endure physically...
-Dexterity represents his ability to do complex actions like tying knots and doing backflips.
-Agility represents how fast he can do things.
-intelligence s how smart the person is... note, it does not reflect how much they know, simply how well they solve things or figure things out.
-Charisma is the characters power to woo and attract others. as well as lie or deceive.
-Fellowship is the characters faith in others and their respective faith in him. his abilty to be loved beyond the superficial.
-willpower is the characters ability to never give up and resist mental stress and trauma... kinda like Sp Toughness...

When asked to make a stat check, the player rolls a d100 and adds or subtract bonuses or maluses. the player wants to roll under his stat total, so low is good and high is bad.

When in combat, Attackers will roll Ws or Bs depending on how they attack and defenders can either dodge or parry.

if they dodge they apply 1/3 of their dex as a malus to the attackers Ws or Bs.
if they parry they apply a fraction of their Ws as a malus to the attackers Roll.
if they parry with a weapon, they use 1/4 of their Ws
if they parry with a small shield they use 1/3
if they use a large sheild they get 1/2
and if they use a tower shield they get 2/3 of their weapon skill.

if a hit lands the attacker adds their strength to the amount they rolled under their final attack value. this is the damage they deal.
*two handed weapons use 1.5 of the users strength

Armor reduces damage taken but also reduces agility and dex. which is troublesome since Agi determines who acts first.

a characters health is equal to five times their toughness, though they may be wounded by an attack that deals 1/3 of their total health in one hit.

if a character takes twice is armors defense in damage, the armor will likely break and require repairs.

a critical hit causes X3 damage and automatically wounds. a crit failure results in unpleasant outcomes.
the odds of scoring a crital hit or critical failure is 1/10 of your success and failure rate.

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No. 86780 ID: 939c7f
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86780

part 3 - quests

through out the story a few quests have poped up, some important some not so important.

-Main quests-

become king!
Eadoo yurns for kingdom and you've sworn to help him

Riches beyond reason
Eadoo wishes for power and wealth. help her acquire these.

All the bitches!!
Eadoo desires a Harem at her service. Find an ever growing number of men and women to serve her many needs.

Encroaching danger
Eadoo's tainted son, Kaleb will need to be dealt with, as he was turned into a monster and slaughtering everything in its path.

-side quests-

Take the castle
Castle Arimasho was promised to eadoo proved she can take it.

Bring Rosalin home
Princess rosaling needs to return home after being kidnapped.

a map to treasure
The map you posses leads to a magical sword, how ever it will not be easy to get.

Gnomish taxes
Gnomes are being dicks to your peasants to be, kill them. Deal with them.

Rampant owlbear
there's an owlbear in the Forrest killing hunting game, kill it.

Taken by trolls
a little girl was abducted by trolls, kill them.

funding for lizards
an unreliable peasant wants money to start a lizard farm, investigate his intentions.

Iron Root Wall
send emissaries to iron root to help smooth over trade roots with them.

Strange soldiers
strange soldiers have been seen on the outskirts of a near by farm. investigate them.

find mah chickens
chickens have been taken by orcs. kill them.

Fey moods
the dwarven smith has fallen to a fey mood and needs copper cables, bones and star metal. The first two are abundant, but star metal is rare.

spooky scary
there are skeletons in the grave yard that dance at night. Kill them.

Love for a goblin
rekindle trade roots with the goblins so that some fool can get off with a goblin

dire situation
there are dire boars in the forest. kill them. Disperse the miasma for optimal results.

Gone mining
A dwarf wants his son back from the mines, go get him

Out for blood!
help a half orc avenge his fallen father in the castle.
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No. 86781 ID: 939c7f
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86781

part 4 - bios

Here I'll post what needs to be known about characters and their stats and abilities.
I'll post in a few days. so feel free to post and ask about stuff if there's any questions.
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No. 86829 ID: c3c794

its good to see the new thread is up! can't wait for the continuation of the story.
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No. 86836 ID: dbe554

Could we get a link to the former thread for better remembering of former topics?
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No. 86854 ID: 939c7f

>>86836
Why yes, here it is... http://tgchan.org/kusaba/questdis/res/68642.html
you can find it easily on the wiki page... http://tgchan.org/wiki/Eadoo%27s_Quest

I will update the info on the wiki page soon.
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No. 86855 ID: 939c7f
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Eadoo
Level 6 male/female Kobold Rogue

Weapon Skill:31
Agility:42
Ballistic Skill:59
Intelligence:32
Strength:20
Charisma:54
Constitution:27
Will Power:38
Dexterity:44
Fellowship:56

-Watery eyes [+10 to factors of cuteness]
-Adorable Allure [+10 to seduction]
-Balefully Unlucky [Eadoo's expended his luck, he suffers +10 to all luck checks, however being one with luck he can bend it for others around him.(+/-10 to any luck check, so long as it doesn't affect himself, when he does horns or a halo appear momentarily)]
-Seductive Nature [+10 to seduction]
-Magnetic Personality [+10 to attracting followers]
-Succubus kiss [mystical ability] [can bend subjects to her will during or directly after an act of passion]

Eadoo is a strange yet likable kobold. She's very passionate about becoming a monarch and wishes to be a good and loving ruler. This is especial so after the death of her beloved children. She is blessed with an impressive phallus, which was a gift from her father, who traded in the lives of her nine sisters so she could have a powerful and magical body, but because he cheated she only got the D. Eadoo is reasonably smart despite having only lived twelve years, how ever she knows very little. She does not know how many months there are in a year or even when exactly her birthday is, claiming it to be "two days after the snow melts". Yet she is able to figure things out reasonably quickly and make sense of complex situations.
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No. 86856 ID: 939c7f
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86856

Gatling
Level 8 male/female Sentient Shard

Weapon Skill:30
Agility:28
Ballistic Skill:21
Intelligence:42
Strength:32
Charisma:56
Constitution:45
Will Power:70
Dexterity:22
Fellowship:64

-Telepathy [Communicate telepathically with allies within short range]
-Multy-possession [Dominate up to 2 hosts at a time]
-Recal [instantly recall to an ally's hand within a short distance (same as telepathy)]
-Soul Eater [Gatling's voracious appetite permits him to eat and meld with his victims. But in this, Gatling can now control his hunger, to an extent (Gatling can roll to avoid devouring their prey entirely and can avoid corroding his host)]
-Inner contempt [Gatling can make a will save to ignore the effects of self loathing]
-Spiritually distant [any attempt to locate, spy upon or commune with Gatling via divination (scrying, tarot etcetera) is increased in -difficulty by two tiers. Gatling cannot yet prevent or control this]
-Self loathing [HATE!! Burned into my mind like hot iron! On each inch of my memories written a thousand thousand times Hate hate hate, but for you... HATE!! HATE!!! (plus 15% critical hit chance, when rolling to wound yourself.)]
-Woundless [Gatling can elect to not cause injuries when inserted]
-Self control [+20 to resist devouring souls]

You play as Gatling, a strange amalgamation of many souls, little is known about Gatling, where it came from, what it is, why is it? Gatling appears as a dark blade, able to posses anything it is impeded into and even capable of eating their souls, claiming the body for more private use. the soul is then added into Gatling's ever expanding ego... where you once a victim of Gatling's hunger? or perhaps something far more sinister is at hand~?
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No. 86857 ID: 939c7f
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William
Level 8 male Gnoll Monk

Weapon Skill:51
Agility:55
Ballistic Skill:36
Intelligence:45
Strength:45
Charisma:43
Constitution:36
Will Power:19
Dexterity:41
Fellowship:50

-Well Trained [William learns faster than most. Bonus to exp. (10%)]
-Beginner's Immortality [William trained to solidify his body. Longer life span, better pain resistance (+10 will)]
-Intermediate Immortality [William trained for four years to achieve greater solidity. Longer lifespan, stronger body and mind(+20 con./will)]
-Immortality Achieved [William mastered the art of immunity. Constant deflection bonus(30%) can be focused to 80%) nearly endless life, body of steel (+20 con./will)]
-Spiritual Stepping Stones [William has opened his mind to the incorporeal. Can detect magic and spirits]
-Housing for Hosts [William can accept souls and spirits within for some time.]
-Temple-like Soul [William can house multiple spirits or one of greater size.]
-Food for the Gods [William can house a god within his body]
-Broken Beyond Repair [William's arm will never heal, -40 to all checks with the right arm.]
-Shattered Spirit [William will not trust the likes of women. -20 will]
-Unfit [William has not trained properly in years. Intermediate Immortality, Immortality Achieved, Temple-like Soul and Food for the Gods temporarily lost.]

William is a unusual gnoll. He and his brother were abandoned from birth on a "shoaling" temples doorstep (I'll find a fantasy name for it later). Being raised into monks, it was determined that only one of them was the hero in the temples prophecies, and they both fought for that title. William eventually proved his worth and housed two mighty deities, in such he had to make a pact, forcing him to obey set rules at the peril of his very life. Angered by his failure his brother formed a more personal bond with a deity of his own and ravaged the temple, slaughtering all, save for his brother, who he tossed across time, beckoning him to let his anger consume him. Years later he was abducted by Shenzi, tortured, undermined, broken, raped and forced into slavery, before being saved by Eadoo.
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86858

Martin Jonson
Level 3female male Human Handmaiden
Level 2Squire
Level 1Pirate
Level 6Knight

Weapon Skill:53
Agility:43
Ballistic Skill:43
Intelligence:34
Strength:40
Charisma:45
Constitution:46
Will Power:38
Dexterity:62
Fellowship:47

-Plant Worthy [Martin knows a fair deal about plants and flowers (+10 to Int in regards to plants and flowers)]
-Folding Pro [Martin has spent time in the pantry (+20 to Dex in regards to folding)]
-Tolerance [Martin has been given orders and trained to not complain about them (+10 to Will in regards to not complaining)]
-Weapons Training [Martin has been trained to wield most close combat weapons (+5 to ws and bs)]
-Horseback Training [Martin has been trained to ride horses (+10 to Dex to horse riding)]
-Rope Swinger [Martin knows how to swing about a boat (no malus to checks while swinging)]
-Diplomat [Can persuade others to join his cause (+10 to Fell)]
-Additional Manliness [Martin has upped his manliness (+10 to seduction of opposed sex)]
-Adept Rider [Martin has improved as a knight (+10 to riding)]
-Master Rider [Martin has mastered his horse (+20 to riding)]
-Fencer [Martin has found a fondness for the rapier (+10 to Ws when using rapiers)]
-Bravery Unbound [Martin backs away from nothing (+15 to Will in regards to bravery)]
-Feminine [It's easy to mistake Martins sex]
-Homophobe [Martin takes great discomfort to gays (as it is not the way of god)]
-Low Testosterone [Martin simply cannot grow a mustache]

Martin Jonson "the incredibly handsome and seductive", previously known as Olivia, was born a master carpenters daughter. she met Rosalin in the rose garden, while her father made simple repairs to the kings royal dining table. Upon crossing the princess's eyes for the first time she fell madly in love with Rosalin vowing to spend every moment she could with her, and with their respective fathers permission, Olivia became Princess Rosalin's personal hand maiden and only friend. One evening Oliva risked her life to save Rosalin from a terrible fire and was promised what ever her heart desired in return, by the king. After considerable thought, Olivia asked to be a man so she could marry his daughter, a wish that the king barely managed to make good on. Olivia trained for three years in the arts of manliness and, with Gods blessing, was branded as a man in every right. After which He took on the name Martin and began training to be a knight, vowing to serve his beloved princess till death.
How ever, after finally getting the kings blessing for marriage, Princess Rosalin proves reluctant, seeing him as her sister and nothing more.
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Shenzi-Marie “Predatorra Veldetta” Jackalina, Ferocious leader of the last course, grand Bitter And Violator of the black claw, JinTao and Sir Indrik Solomon the just daughter of king Eadoo.
Level 3female Gnoll Princess

Weapon Skill:45
Agility:46
Ballistic Skill:18
Intelligence:24
Strength:61
Charisma:74
Constitution:55
Will Power:24
Dexterity:40
Fellowship:58

Musical nature [+10 to musically handle animals]
Song Bird [+10 to singing]
Native Dancer [+15 to dance and flexibility]
Liquor Addiction [-20 to avoid consuming liquor]
Liquor Withdrawl (temp) [-5 to cha, will and fel]
Spontaneous Basher [No malus for improvised weapons]
Thalassophobia [-20 to all actions when in the ocean]
Gutted Alive (two ranks) [-10 to all actions when fresh organs are visible (-20)]
Peachy keen [Passive +20 to Cha and fellowship]
Spontaneous musical [The princess can begin a musical number that compels other to join in (resist Dc is charisma based)]

Shenzi, was born into a broken land to a broken tribe. Tortured by her mother, into being the worst, most vicious, most cruel monster she could possible be, because to be weak is to be dead... Shenzi took on many of her mothers traits, aquiering a taste for bloody murder, torture and most of all, Rape. After killing her own mother and eating her heart, she took her late mothers tribe by the throat, renamed every member and personally violated each member profusely, cutting out the weaker gnolls in the process. after claiming her mothers band, she ran amok the country and made a powerful name for herself.
Shenzi is a cute gnoll princess, she loves her mother Eadoo and her father gatling. She has many friends and loves to play "games" with them, but they sometimes say she plays too rough...
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86862

Banzai-Tonio “sapien Legatus” Ferron, Novice diplomat of port royal and bridge maker
Level 4 male Gnoll Merchant

Weapon Skill:31
Agility:32
Ballistic Skill:32
Intelligence:52
Strength:30
Charisma:50
Constitution:38
Will Power:28
Dexterity:40
Fellowship:34

Versed in Mercantile [+10 to appraise]
Currency Bound [Banzai knows the fairs of most currencies and can convert them easily]
Diverse and Cultured [+10 to knowledge: local]
Of many Tongues [Banzai knows two additional languages(Elven and Dwarven)] Gnoll,common,elven,dwarven and merraid in all
Novice Diplomat [+10 to diplomacy]
Bridge Maker [-5 to opposing malus when treating with xenophobes]
I Want the Gold! [-5 to resist the temptation of wealth]
Scheming merchant [Banzai can't ignore his plotting mind]

Banzai managed to escape his tribe early in life as a slave, he was fortunate enough to be the slave of Vandeur dentdure, a powerful and very influential merchant. After proving his worth to his master, Banzai acquired vital mercantile skills of his own and eventually bought his own freedom. Free and rich, he set off to return to his homeland, hopping to help his people rise above the status of "monster" and reenter the society of men... his dreams were shattered by his sister...
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No. 86864 ID: 939c7f
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Nisse, The blind half troll.
Level 4 female nisse alchemist.

Weapon Skill:46
Agility:29
Ballistic Skill:55
Intelligence:60
Strength:42
Charisma:33
Constitution:41
Will Power:39
Dexterity:35
Fellowship:31

Basics of acids [+10 int to alchemy checks]
Medicinal science [+10 int to health checks]
I'm a doctor not a barbarian [+15 int to health and alchemy checks -5 to ws and bs]
Advanced sciences [+10 to health and alchemy checks]
Blindsight (Nisse's sense of smell is so acute, she can perceive shape and distance on smell alone[+10 Bs and Ws against blind status])
Blind [-30 to bs and ws]

Nisse was born from the sacrilegious bond between a troll and a gnome. For this affront against all that is holy and good, her father was publicly executed and her mother was tortured for being a troll and then killed by fire, Nisse's uncle saved her by giving her to traveling gypsies before being tortured extensively and killed when he refused to reveal the location of the child. Nisse was born blind and left at an orphanage somewhere only to be picked up later by the same gypsies when she was older. Nisse grew passionate about alchemy and the workings of the world, before slumbering into a terrible depression. Seeing herself as an abomination she saw nothing but death in her life, how ever this pushed the strange bastard to seek a joyous life of excess, gluttony, lust and debauchery, seeking to enjoy her life to the absolute fullest while it lasts.
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Eanraig Deferran, The fire bat out of hell, raging monster of justice.
Level 7 male ashtouched Pyromancer

Weapon Skill:58
Agility:42
Ballistic Skill:24
Intelligence:34
Strength:58
Charisma:20
Constitution:78
Will Power:60
Dexterity:45
Fellowship:37

Basic pyromancy [ean can cast basic fire spells]
fire dancing [ean can manipulate opens flames with a will save]
advanced manipulations [+10 will to fire dancing]
advanced fire dancing [+10 will to fire dancing]
flaming capoeira [Ean can use his will(plus bonuses) instead of Ws and add his Ws modifier to the total]
Pheonix fist [Ean can concentrate his love, anger and all of his sorrow into a single punch adding his will to his str.]
Pheonix rampage [ean can strike his foe with a volley of blows each with a fraction of his burning heart]
Chains of hell [after braving hell's half acer and retunring with his life, ean is still bound to the flames and can summon his chains at will]
Of water to wine... er... ale [ean's touch turns regular water into strong, disgusting ale]
chauva [ean harnesses the healing flames to his command]
Noblephobia [Ean despises nobles like plagues and rot, -20 cha when dealing with nobles]
flaming acupuncture [ean can heal latent trauma with warm needles]

Eanraig was born and raised on farm alone with his mother and father, he lived a simple life up until the inquisition fell upon his fathers transgressions in marrying an ashtouched and bringing another into the world. After witnessing his beloved fathers crucifixion Ean developed a stark hatred for the power of order and vowed to see it brought to its knees. After serving terrorist groups and pleasure cults for many years, he found his hatred to be more focused towards, corruption, the abuse of power and vile racism. how ever his wrath for injustice grew to a boiling point when he died and fell into hell. outraged at the sheer injustice of his fate. He scolded the devil, saying that even if he wanted to be good and see heaven he couldn't and that it was the devils fault the he grew devious and cruel. His wrath was so great that the devil himself felt nervous, if only for an instant, and sent him back to earth to achieve a way to heaven, if only to get him off his back. Upon being reborn he set off on a new, better life.
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No. 86867 ID: 939c7f
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Alanna Crepe, The armless.
Level 3 female human sorceress (lover)

Weapon Skill:22
Agility:33
Ballistic Skill:39
Intelligence:34
Strength:26
Charisma:43
Constitution:37
Will Power:45
Dexterity:35
Fellowship:31

Mana pool [Can gather mana from the elements to a maximum of her will bonus]
Ghost blast (Can fire a blast of harmless raw energy[Energy can be charged with elemental mana for additional effects])
Armless soul (Alanna's lay lines deformed due to her amputations [Lay nodes reside in her throat as opposed to her palms])
Lover [have a passive 5% increase to charisma and fellowship.] (They are unusually radiant and charming.)
Basic spells [caster knows a few more spells for her mastery]
developing soul [caster's mana pool increases by 2] (without training the caster's mana pool is one tenth her will)

-Spell list-

Minor charm [gaze effect - Subject becomes enamored by the caster and will not attack her, a successful charisma check can push the subject to her will. - Mana cost (1 love) (1 converted)]

Mother's kiss [touch effect - The caster kisses an open wound to make it better, subject is no longer bleeding and the wound is no longer painful. Subject is however, not immune to pain. - Mana cost (1 love)]

Love's arrow [Ranged touch effect - fire two magical arrows, those struck are enamored with each other, foes are paralyzed by each others gaze in combat. - mana cost (2 love)]

Soporific musk [AoE (5 feet + 5X feet) - Release a barely perceivable scent, all those caught inside (friend or foe) become drowsy, docious and mildly aroused. (Allies can become resistant to the effect after a day of training) - Mana cost (1 love)(1 wind)(X converted)]

Alanna can barely remember what her life was like before the incident. her earliest memory is waking up in the forest with only one arm. She later lost the other to gangsters who needed the satiation of vengeance after she failed to repay them. All hope was lost, until Eadoo benevolently saved her and took her in as her daughter/concubine lover? she quickly discovered her powers as a sorceress when she was charged with love and accidentally caused a young elf to fall madly in love with her. a cursed fate that would haunt her dearly, seeing as the childlike woman proves rather promiscuous. Still her life has improved a million fold and she has found a new lease on life.
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Roland Dechambleau, aspiring champion to be.
Level 2male Human noble
Level 3Squire
Level 3 holy diver

Weapon Skill:44
Agility:37
Ballistic Skill:43
Intelligence:38
Strength:43
Charisma:47
Constitution:30
Will Power:59
Dexterity:39
Fellowship:28

Rudimentary knowledge [+10 to basic knowledge checks]
Basic swordplay [+10 weapon skill when in single combat]
Basic weapons training [no penalties with most weapons]
advanced swordplay [additional +10 to ws when in single combat]
basic cavalry [no mallus to riding]
Midnight sea [durendina can commune with Roland to gain a temporary +15 to any given stat]
Gone too long [Roland can elect to commune at will]
Blade of the divine [Can turn any manufactured weapon into his holy sword]

Roland is the illegitimate nephew of Duncan, the holy king of the imperium of man. Being raised to become a knight and bring honor to his land, Roland always managed to stay at the top of his class and surpass all expectations whilst also failing to care about his family's desires. Distant and introvert, Rolands life would change forever when he met a beautiful sword in the middle of a sparkling lake...
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No. 86872 ID: 939c7f
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86872

Angel, The sticky fingered rogue.
Level 5 -?- human Theif

Weapon Skill:32
Agility:54
Ballistic Skill:33
Intelligence:35
Strength:32
Charisma:43
Constitution:26
Will Power:26
Dexterity:59
Fellowship:29

Basic stealth [+10 to sneaking]
Basic lockpicking [+10 to lockpicking]
Basic stealing [+10 to sleight of hand]
Advanced stealth [Additional +15 to sneaking]
Advanced stealing [additional +15 to sleight of hand]
Kleptomania [-15 will to resist stealing]
Sticky fingers [+20 to sleight of hand when unconsciously stealing (Angel at times pockets objects without knowing it)]

Little is known about Angel... Just about everything about angel seems a little off. angel seems kind at times and devious at others, angel loves to steal but feels terribly about it, angel has many secrets and is ready to share them openly, yet never does. Oddly, angel's sex is difficult to pin point, having subtle features from both genders and no prominent features from either. Angels voice is snakelike whilst also not unlike a bunny rabbits.
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No. 86873 ID: 939c7f
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86873

liver. The cynical bastard

Level 4 Gnoll Fighter

Weapon Skill:51
Agility:34
Ballistic Skill:33
Intelligence:40
Strength:44
Charisma:23
Constitution:59
Will Power:38
Dexterity:31
Fellowship:28

Basic weapon training [no malus when using martial weapons]
Advanced weapon training [+10 when using a martial weapon]
Basic armor training [no malus when wearing light armor]
Advanced armor training [no malus when wearing medium armor]
Specialized weapon training: Hammer [Gain 15 str and Ws when attacking with a specific weapon type]

Liver has a serious case of the Grumpy Dumpies.
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No. 86916 ID: 4f004c

>>86873
>Liver has a serious case of the Grumpy Dumpies.
Clearly we must have absorbed a small bit of his soul/aura just from being near him, which gave birth to the Anon that became Grumpy Dumpy.
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No. 86964 ID: 939c7f

Im sorry if the next chapter is slow to come out... I have mild third degree chemical burns on my hands. I'll draw as soon as they heal.
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No. 86971 ID: 939c7f

>>86964
Wow my boss was exaggerating when she said that!! 1st degree, 2nd at best. shouldn't take more than a few days to heal.
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No. 86980 ID: 4f004c

>>86971
Pretty easy to mix up the degrees when you're in pain.
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No. 87583 ID: de7b6f

I'm brand new to this quest but, I have read all of it. Is there anything I should know before I participate?
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No. 87649 ID: 939c7f

>>87583
not really no. if you read the prior threads you should be set.
I sometimes reference my other quests so looking them up can help, but it's not mandatory
Ex: Trixy is from Cunnyquest.
As you've probably noticed, I'm rather lewd, so yeah... be aware for pervy bullshit. and deviant pervy bull at that. But that's what sets part of my tone. it's just not the same without the strange and absurd sexual undertones
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No. 87650 ID: 939c7f

>>86980
oh and I actually have third degree burns now, but it's above the elbow so i can still draw
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No. 87717 ID: c6d510

>>87650
Ouch.
Burns seem like a painful thing.
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No. 87735 ID: 939c7f

>>87717
Burns like fuck fr a few hours, but then it only hurts when touched or when you clean it.
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No. 87742 ID: c6d510

>>87735
Still. I rest my elbows on the table basically constantly and that seems rather painful.
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No. 87762 ID: ea0ad9

Flynn, I swear you're like a secret love-stalker or something. Constantly throwing me-stuff into things in a way that I just absolutely love.

Look at this you're turning me into a narcissist! (I suppose it does beg asking: Was that "Tokoshoran" again, or just another short-haired green-caped man?)
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No. 87771 ID: 939c7f

>>87762
Haha thanks I guess?

I used tokoshoran in her story because she/you shared a dream about him and he was fresh in her memories, which is why she imagined him in her story.
the fact that you love jack though is a coincidence, not even an amazing one at that, everyone loves Samurai jack~
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No. 87780 ID: ea0ad9

>the fact that you love jack though is a coincidence, not even an amazing one at that, everyone loves Samurai jack~
True enough.
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No. 89333 ID: d3be40

What happens if they have twins?
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No. 89334 ID: cef479

Will I need to repost things from the other thread?
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No. 89395 ID: 939c7f

>>89333
if they have twins then you have two embryos that Aiden can use. he does have stasis room for about a dozen or so.

>>89334
what would you be reposting?
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No. 89396 ID: cef479

>>89395

The picture of Hel mostly.
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No. 89399 ID: 939c7f

>>89396
oh no no, its fine, I have backups of them and when they become relevant they'll appear with stats on the second thread. unless I misunderstand your intentions?
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No. 89402 ID: cef479

>>89399

Alrighty then~
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No. 89420 ID: b9d767

>>86860
>Shenzi is a cute gnoll princess, she loves her mother Eadoo and her father gatling.

If she becomes the mother of Gatling's new host body by Eadoo, we are going to have one hell of a family tree.
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No. 89588 ID: fc3f9f
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89588

>>89420
This is definitely a new one, even by royal standards.
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No. 89591 ID: a19cd5
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89591

>>89588
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No. 89592 ID: c6d510

>>89588
That is indeed a tangled loop.
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No. 89593 ID: 3dd384

>>89420
>>89588
allyouzombies.png
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No. 89625 ID: 46df9e

>>89588
It's not that new, I mean Fry also became his own Grandfather.
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No. 89626 ID: 7c9681
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89626

>>89588
Now obviously, the most logical progression from here is for us to have a son with Shenzi who will be the royal heir, inheriting our prowess and multiplying Shenzi's physical ability again.
Then, when that son comes of age (quickly, considering species), Eadoo can bear them a new body for us, doubling both Shenzi and Eadoo's genetic benefits in our own body and simply have Aiden remove the horrific birth defects from our freakishly inbred intergenerational gene whirlpool.
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No. 89763 ID: 05d909

I've got a question about the rules, does Gatling imbue his stat bonus to anyone wielding him, or just weapon skill, and the stat bonus is for possess-ees?

Also, this quest continues to be high on the quality level, having both excellent art and being fun to be involved in. I'm not so much a fan of the Trixy thing, it's not that I don't like some porn in the art but Trixy just feels like pandering, and while the rule is have fun and do fun things, I'm just not a big fan of the character. I adore the fact the characters are so... disagreeable. Different. It seems like a decent amount of effort goes into giving them personality and motivations.
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No. 90073 ID: 939c7f
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90073

Happy Easter!

Eadoo and Trixy help Eadola get into the holiday spirit after a long isolation! Things have however, as usual, taken somewhat of a lewd turn~ Enjoy!
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No. 90110 ID: 3181a5

I just realized that we are Nephilim.
Darksiders version
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No. 90309 ID: df6309

I have some questions that may or may not have already been asked:
1) What will happen to us if we agree to be the star metal for the smith?
2) If we put a blade into our created body can Trixy use it as a focus? Can we learn more about being a focus?
3) What exactly happens when we take over someone? Can it be dangerous for us? Can it be resisted?
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No. 90312 ID: 939c7f

>>90110
I've never played darksidders so I don't know.

>>90309
>I have some questions that may or may not have already been asked:

- sure ask away.

1) What will happen to us if we agree to be the star metal for the smith?

- something cool and powerful, but you might find it inconvenient at times.

2) If we put a blade into our created body can Trixy use it as a focus? Can we learn more about being a focus?

- if you learn counterspelling to redirect the spells or if the body has the blade infused in his body, at which point he becomes the focalizer... powerful spellcasters bind a part of their souls to objects, usually weapons or magical trinkets, as such their spells become more powerful when focused through these devices, for whats more they can channel their spells from a distance. if the bind between caster and tool is very great the mage can even cast spells from across the world, so long as he knows where his focalizer is. That in mind, there needs to be a bond between the mage and his tool for it to be a focalizer, you can't just snap your fingers and says some magical words for it to happen.

3) What exactly happens when we take over someone? Can it be dangerous for us? Can it be resisted?

- it could be dangerous, souls are fickle things, but most people never train their souls much, too focused on their bodies.
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No. 90423 ID: 8d99f5

But if we give a blade to the smith will we still be conscious in what ever he makes? Will it be more powerful or have special abilities compared to other starmetal? Will be able to make another blade to replace the one we sacrifice or will we be down a knife?
Also can we fuse our knives together to make a bigger blade.
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No. 90426 ID: bd8b82

>>90423
the last one would make sense, considering the knives are all probably shards of a sword. willing to bet powers of the larger blade would be stronger.
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No. 90435 ID: 939c7f

>>90423
>But if we give a blade to the smith will we still be conscious in what ever he makes?

- Yes

Will it be more powerful or have special abilities compared to other starmetal?

- More powerful? yes. If not only because a bastard sword is stronger than a knife, and would benefit more from your flaming ability. The sword retains all the abilities the knife has, some abilities change slightly to accommodate the new form and some become less practical.

Will be able to make another blade to replace the one we sacrifice or will we be down a knife?

- this would cost you a knife, as it would be transformed.

Also can we fuse our knives together to make a bigger blade.

- Maybe maybe~
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No. 90464 ID: 8d99f5

You brilliant bastard.

We should make a magic golden hammer and find a hobbit called felix and give it to him.
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No. 90491 ID: 6ac522

Looks like Pipo's getting a religious experience one way or another.

What would have occurred with a crit failure, anyway? The possibilities are vast and terrible.
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No. 90539 ID: 939c7f

>>90491
>What would have occurred with a crit failure, anyway? The possibilities are vast and terrible.

Little Pipo would have found a new religion~
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No. 90554 ID: 6ac522

>>90539
Something like this?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_dm0Ksl7isc
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No. 90558 ID: 939c7f

>>90554
hopefully not.
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No. 90720 ID: 94b817

Awhile ago when we were deciding who would knock up Eadoo I suggested we run a train on her and I kind of want to ask if its not to much trouble could you possibly maybe make an illustration of that please?
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No. 90728 ID: 939c7f

>>90720
I'll see about it, but I've got some paying commissions that need attending to
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No. 90729 ID: c717e8

>>90720
>>90728

I think we've had discussions before about what amounts to basically asking for free porn.
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No. 90844 ID: 2c759a

I know it's not your fault but sometimes it feels like random rolls exist for the sole purpose of fucking us in the ass.
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No. 90848 ID: 2c759a

wow, it literally fucked us up the ass. fine i get it, no more complaining.
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No. 90850 ID: 0ee153

>>90844
>>90848
>thinking it happened as punishment for complaining

No one cares if you complain or not, the author did it for fetish bait/shits and giggles. It's pretty much a porn quest.
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No. 90852 ID: 05d909

I think it's kinda lame that our situation is adequately resolved by a crit failure. If anything the situation should've escalated.
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No. 90856 ID: 939c7f

>>90852
I actually contemplated that at first. I figured she'd break free, fuck you and kill off the guards... In hind sight, I'm not sure why I decided not to? It was literally a last second decision that went in without much thought... I feel kinda shit about it now. sorta wish I could retcon it by erasing and reposting it, but there's already replies out... *grumble*
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No. 90859 ID: 939c7f

>>90850
Also, not trying to piss into the wind here but: quest for nobility, struggles with racial/gender/religious/ethics values, open wounds surgery, in depth race creation, death of family, questioning: what it is to be a person, actively questing to save a town from it's self, life and death scenarios, Stealth mechanics, inter dimensional/4th wall breaking romance, Level based Rpg mechanics and much more... One in three chapters have sex scenes in them... Porn quest the quest for porn~!

... I was about to end my tangent with: "I don't even care what you think!" But I realize that I clearly do care since I wrote a response in an angry stupor... Heh... Well mister, if your goal was to troll/anger/insult me, you have succeed~! if you simply wanted to state your opinion on the matter, I'm glad you managed opened my eyes to my internal opinions. I won't be changing the formula, because I like it how it is. But I'm glad you showed me a side of me I was unfamiliar with. ~Thank you~
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No. 90860 ID: 939c7f

>>90856
on this matter: would 2c759a, Shock_Ridzen and d90668 mind if I erased and reposted the last post to negatively reflect the crit fail?
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No. 90861 ID: bd8b82

it's probably a "that ship has sailed" situation, just be more mindful of why you have an action happen in the future.
if it does get changed then good luck.
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No. 90862 ID: 939c7f

>>90861
You're right, I was stupid to implement a game mechanic that permits failure and not act upon it. I'll be more stern with myself and let things unroll as the dice gods demand it in the future. My apologies, I have failed today as a Dm.
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No. 90863 ID: d90668

Go for it. The current events while entertaining are not really a proper failure. Probably should not listen to me though because I wanted her to kill the guards anyway.

Not sure how we are going to fix this mess. Half the people want to try and play nice with the racist guards planning on murdering our whole group.

As for you running a porn quest I think you have done a excellent job of making a good quest that happens to have porn in it. So keep up the good work. Your writing has improved a lot over the last year.
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No. 90865 ID: bd8b82

>>90863
yeah that is another problem. the majority of people said go nuts, then when she went nuts some people tried to backtrack. changing your mind mid-murder does not work.
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No. 90866 ID: 2c759a

i love the story, i just get annoyed by the times we get pounded by the random number.
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No. 90867 ID: 05d909

Don't listen to the guy going on about it being porn quest, we all know you have both depth and character invested into this quest.
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No. 90868 ID: 0ee153

>>90859
None of those things you listed are mutually exclusive with porn. The quest deals with strong sexual themes, including a great many paraphilias, and Trixy the 4th-wall-breaking character specifically lusts after the suggestors/their in-universe avatar. I was not implying that the quest had no depth or originality, only that large parts of it were sexual and that it was aimed at a specific audience.
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No. 90869 ID: 939c7f

>>90868
thank you~ I'm glad you're not trying to get my goat or harass me, I just kinda reacted to what you said. It even surprised me! All in all I'm glad this conversation happened.
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No. 90870 ID: deeae2

>>90859
>>90868
>>90869

If I could weigh in, I'd say it's not surprising that some people's feeling is "porn quest for the porn", despite it not being true. The emotional reaction which leads them to say that deserves examination. Certain sexual events are clearly key parts of the plot, and I understand that it's sometimes used for effect - some particularly discomfiting things are presented because the readers are supposed to be discomfited, as part of the experience. Or at least that's a theory, I can't read quest authors' minds.

However, at some points the quest can seem to turn to sexuality not for any of these reasons but just because you (the author and the suggesters) want to, and similarly sometimes fetishistic elements do the same thing. I wouldn't blame people for, as they read, occasionally getting that unpleasant "oh, someone's getting off on this" feeling. And though it's very hard to quantify, there is a certain feeling one can get from a picture that the artist had a "personal interest" in. Something about "camera" focus and the amount of detail lavished on certain things; it's not easy to describe. But, and I feel I'm being indelicate but I've come this far, it is a feeling I get off some parts of the quest. In short, my point is that some people reacting negatively was to be expected. It was signed up for.

Another short way of saying it would be: it's not a porn quest for the porn, but parts of the quest can still come off as being porn for the porn.
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No. 90874 ID: 939c7f

>>90870
on a rested head I see your point and even agree with you, there is porn my quests, legitimately, I was childish in my reactions when the word, "porn quest" came up. it is to be expected that people will react to the pornography in my quest, but that's just part of what makes me and my quests, me and my quests. There are sex scenes, there is porn, sometimes more graphic than others, like in the first chapter with Ophelia the elf (Much porn, very sex, Wow) and like 0ee153 said, porn and plot and not mutually exclusive.

Thank you, all of you, You've all helped me put things into perceptive. I'm grateful the only person who got mad was me~
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No. 90878 ID: c717e8

>>90874
>on a rested head I see your point and even agree with you, there is porn my quests, legitimately
>but that's just part of what makes me and my quests, me and my quests

So long as you're willing to accept the consequences of your artistic decisions, they remain entirely your right to make. And so long as you make sure to keep the more potentially off-putting moments of your quests contained, as a matter of basic courtesy to the people who share the site with you but who don't share your tastes. I've seen people expressing opinions about casually scrolling down the first page of /quest/ and being slapped in the eyes with something they weren't wanting to see.
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No. 90897 ID: 939c7f

>>90862
Oh I remember now what the point of having her pass out after fucking Gatling was! As a result of the critical miss she's too exhausted to use her magic, which was the point of calming her down. Seeing as a regular miss would have lead to more attempts at calming her, a crit miss negates the action entirely.

>>90878
Also, you're right, I should be more liberal with the spoilers button. The site is for everyone to share and I should respect peoples retinas. I'll remember to click it in the future~
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No. 90899 ID: bd8b82

still questioning the logic behind telling someone to kill people then telling them to stop killing people when they try to kill people.
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No. 90900 ID: 2c759a

I think that's just the nature of what we are, with so many differing opinions it can be hard to keep a consensus. That can manifest in some backpedaling at times.
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No. 90908 ID: 05d909

It's not about her killing those two people, it's about her making a lot of loud noises, taking on a demonic form, throwing magic around and wrecking the place, etc. What happens when more guard show up in a few minutes. What happens when they decide Trixy is Concu's friend and decide to execute her for complicity in this?

We are supposed to be stealthily building support for Eadoo's kingdom of equality, quietly removing troublemakers would've been a positive for that, instead we have a big stinking mess on our hands.

Basically if we can't magic these corpses away and make everyone forget they were there, we are going to have to cut Trixy loose from the group.
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No. 90983 ID: bd8b82

>>90908
except that isn't quite how it works. if you have an attack dog, you can't point and yell ATTACK! and then get upset it hurt someone.
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No. 90986 ID: d90668

>>90908

You really can't fault someone for getting a bit pissed off when assaulted in her room by racist guards intent on killing her. Yes it would have been nice to subdue them non lethally but shit happens.

Now we know she has rage issues when hurt and if not for a really unlucky roll of the dice we would have not had many problems subduing here.

It does show that we need to make sure to concentrate on improving our mental stats and ability to control people. Thus far we have been mostly taking over weak willed individuals. But would be nice if we could be sure of taking over anyone we run across.

As for Trixy I am sure people will both berate and console her once she wakes up and confuse the crap out of her. But thus is the problem with being a multi minded supernatural entity.

Oh and I love the dice rolling system you use. The stat weightings make sense and its nice to have stuff not go our way at times. Scrambling to fix things when we get a unlucky roll helps move the story in interesting directions.
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No. 92609 ID: 5f7625

I'd like to point out that were I running this, that critical rage failure would result in the entire team getting an owlbear enema, followed by the town immediately afterward.
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No. 92617 ID: 0ee153

>>92609
That's super.
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No. 92627 ID: bd8b82

kome, a violent attack to a sleeping person has an extremely high probablity of killing them since they are unable to even attempt to dodge.
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No. 92669 ID: 5f7625

DId you flub that roll on purpose?
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No. 92675 ID: 939c7f

>>92669
I flubbed the roll?
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No. 92676 ID: 939c7f

Well shit. my mistake, I did not do that on purpose.
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No. 92677 ID: 5db480

I have to say that the luck aspect of the quest makes for some crazy situations. It derails our well laid plans but gives us entertaining holes we have to dig our way out of.
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No. 92687 ID: 5db480

>>92676

Quick roll here and We can see what we might have missed out on.
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No. 92688 ID: bd8b82

as a good woodworker would say "measure twice, cut once". a quick double check never hurts, but you can't change your cut once you start.
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No. 92689 ID: bd8b82

also, i really think we need to look into getting shards put back together. while the ability to be in multiple places at once is useful, i am willing to bet that a larger amount of our metal in one blade would be more powerful.
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No. 92707 ID: 5f7625

You know, the total lack of punishment for our failures makes our victories kinda hollow. Why even employ a numbers system if the consistent policy is nothing that's going to actually cost us something real is going to happen?
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No. 93381 ID: 939c7f

Okay so I was reading the post and looking over the picture, just now. And something just wasn't quite right, Something felt off... Then it hit me!! Alanna's goddess form is basically just a furry anime chick!
I based her design Off of a Celtic fertility goddess... But I guess she looks like she fell out of e621... *sigh* Oh well...
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No. 93383 ID: 0ee153

Is there any particular reason kome is allowed to post? Universal refusal to acknowledge? Pity? Am I missing something?
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No. 93384 ID: 939c7f

>>93383
He's allowed to post for the same reason you are. we may differ but we are all equal [save for the admins, they are gods]
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No. 93387 ID: c6d510

>>93384
All posters are created equal, but some are more equal than others
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No. 93391 ID: 9db5b5

>>93381
Out of curiosity, what goddess? Also officially requesting indecent art / fanservice with her dream form. And all your characters for that matter.. do you have a site or email you share?
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No. 93392 ID: e4ea3c

>>93391
>requesting

does somebody have to get grumpy around here
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No. 93398 ID: 0b04d9

>>93392
Um I'm also kind of requesting contact info so I can maybe commission? Is that not allowed? I don't know how else to talk to the author.
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No. 93399 ID: 939c7f

>>93391
She's based around Epona (Celtic horse themed fertility goddess) Her design was partially inspired by cernunnos seeing as tg following my quest appeals to the "all of the above" crowd... The added breasts were kinda for no reason, just to push the fertility goddess thing. Her "Costume" came out of no where. I originally wanted her to be "basically naked" but as I drew she ended up completely naked...

Still glad at least someone likes it~
If you want a commission you can email me at the following address:
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No. 93400 ID: 939c7f

flynnmerk@gmail.com
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No. 93566 ID: 939c7f
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93566

Well I mistakenly thought it was ass day, silly me. So here's some butts.

Big ladies, little men
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No. 93571 ID: 0c255a

There's nothing wrong with having sex in a story but honestly sometimes there's a bit to much here. Just wish we didn't concentrate on it so much, I'm much more interested in the overarching story progressing.
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No. 93577 ID: 412e1d

>>93571
It's what sells. Just look at Enemy Quest. At least Eadoo has swords and sorcery.
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No. 93581 ID: 7b7ab3

>>93577
>Implying Enemy Quest is nothing but sex
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No. 93586 ID: 0b04d9

>>93571
You're entitled to your opinion, but I don't really think so. Generally it's been minimal sex during the day - you know, when most people are actually getting stuff done. Then at night, as people are bedding down, we go waltzing through their dreams and naturally tend to see some of their various ways of unwinding and scratching their itches. If you worked all day, then went invisibly stalking through your neighbors' bedrooms each night you'd probably think they had a little too much sex too. There's a bit of extra nudity and half nudity that could be censored; but it doesn't get in the way of the story at all. And it doesn't feel forced or fanservice-y. I think it has a good balance right now. Story progression is on the slow side, but that's because it's a complicated quest with a boatload of characters who the author actually tries to develop. It may take us a year to take that castle, and we'll probably see some demon tits while doing so; but by the time it happens I'm confident we'll also see a dozen side arcs resolve and most of our group's personal journeys take them to new and interesting territory. I think it's good writing for this medium, actually - better than a 2 month rushed and simple story.
sorry for the wall of text
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No. 93594 ID: 939c7f

>>93586
thanks~ I'm glad you see it that way.
Another point is that tg didn't have to peek on everyone dreams, you could of just slept, And for whats more, lots of the "sexual themes" have underlined meaning and story value. Take Angel for example...
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No. 93597 ID: ea0ad9

>Big ladies, little men
Except for our Queen-king. She's a little lady and a big man.
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No. 93626 ID: 939c7f

some one is going to say: My god Eadoo quest always degrades into smut and sex for no reason.
And to that I say: Yes, at the moment it has... The sex scene here is just for fun on my behalf and for those who care.
The chapter ends after the scene and next chapter might take a few weeks or even months before I can reasonably jump back into it. There shouldn't be much plot from this point on, so feel free to ignore it, if kobolds plowing at your beck and call is not your thing. [or maybe there'll be a stinger?]
Also I don't like shamelessly plugging myself... but I do commissions...
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No. 93628 ID: dbe554

There's something adorable about that last image.
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No. 93708 ID: 29f8bf

...hey BWTBH?
If it's not too much to ask, can you spoiler the text in the sex scene updates like Brom does?
It's a really nice feature for those of us not so much into it.
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No. 93727 ID: 939c7f

>>93708
sure, I don't see why not. I'll try to remember to do that.
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No. 93744 ID: 5f7625

About the too much sex thing, I sort of half agree. There's no doubt this quest does plenty of fan service, but the characters are so well fleshed out that I generally don't mind.
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No. 93757 ID: ad936f

I like the quest, but your grammar is horrendous. Every instance of "busyness" should be "business". "could of", "would of", or "should of", should be "could've", "would've", or "should've". You also seem to get your theirs, they'res, and theres mixed up. Say what you will about the sex in this quest, the real perversion is your abuse of the English language. Unless this is style thing? Either way I found it mildly annoying.
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No. 93763 ID: 5a02f7

Constructive criticism is one thing; loading it with insults is another.

In the end, BWTBH has made us an awesome quest with tons of content, impressively-fleshed-out characters, and lots of fan-service. If you could do any better, you're welcome to try. In the meantime, be grateful for what you've got.

If you sincerely want to improve the quest, try phrasing your complaints in a way that you don't sound like a jerk.
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No. 93766 ID: 939c7f

>>93757
I am sorry, my grammar is not exactly perfect. Mainly because I am self taught in English.
I spoke in English before French, being from an English family, but I learnt to read and wright in french and then applied what I got from school to English as I didn't have and still don't have a formal English education, as a french Canadian.
Still, excuses don't heal wounds, I'll try to fix my grammar up for the sake of my quest, but I won't make promises.

>>93763
Did I miss something? maybe there was a post but it got deleted?
Because it sounds like you're yelling at the grammar natzy, which is all fine and dandy, but I don't think he deserves it, my grammar are terrible~!

Also, would it bother anyone if I shortened my name to Broken Halo?
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No. 93769 ID: f68a09

Look the big issue I can see is that everyone who reads this quest, whenever the topic of sex comes up, says something like "oh well yes there's a lot of it, but I don't mind because I like the rest of the quest so much".

The thing is we really don't need to see that when a fade to black is an option; and judging by the slowdown of suggestions during the sex scenes and the firestorms of controversy they always kick up we don't particularly want to interface with it. It's not really working with the quest to get as graphic as you've been getting, especially since it's clear that for many the main draw (by their own admission and yours) is all the stuff AROUND the sex, which in itself is something to be handwaved and tolerated as a side effect. If the only defense for an element of the quest is "everything else is good" or "See if YOU can do any better" that's not good!

Now obviously this quest is your baby and if you want to keep going with the lewds then keep going, but it's getting kind of (pun intended) masturbatory to have all roads lead to bonetown. It feels like you're shoving our face into it (another pun intended).

I know in the past when this has come up the recommendation has been to just ignore it, but the other big issue (and I'm not sure how much you'll care about this one since you clearly have your dedicated readerbase and the damage has been done) is that with its unnecessary eroticism Eadoo Quest has really alienated a lot of people. Most people who don't read it hide the thread, and offsite it's become a strawman quest for the kind of furry perversion most people assume tgchan is chock full of. I don't think it's a controversial statement to say this quest would have a significantly greater following without the atmosphere of weird fetishistic stuff all around it.

It makes me really sad because reading this thread it seems as if there's something worth championing beneath the dicks and (apparently) the grammar but I can't get more than a few posts through it before I feel an overwhelming need to take a shower. And this has been the reaction shared by almost everyone I've talked to about it outside of its narrow ring of fans. If this doesn't seem like a problem to you then carry on, I suppose. Just saying: in my opinion and in the opinions of many others this quest is hamstrung by its lewdness.
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No. 93772 ID: 939c7f

sorry, gonna rant now...

>>93769
I can't argue with you... Well I could but I'd be wrong, but ultimately I don't want to argue.

It's very true, all of what you're saying. But I feel like sometimes, I get a bit of a bad rap. Because a lot of the "pointless sex" is actually really important. Ex: The first sex scene with Trixy, given a chapter or two it becomes a plot point and evolves, not only into moral and social conflicts but a deeper concept of story telling. DurMeg worships eadoos cock, with religious like fanaticism, because she believes it is a godlike emblem that will revolutionize and alter the world as a whole and her being casual with cum all over her face tells a lot about who she is. Pipo X Yulfa is kinda obvious why there's more than pointless sex at hand. Angels backstory is rife with sex, but it's not pointless, it molded him/her. Roland and Dina bdsm adventure is just herpderp sex, but there's character there~ Roland is overly conservative and Dina, despite being a being of purity and nobility, is deeply interested in mortal sins. Nisse's sexuality is really important to her backstory but I wont get into right now, because it's a big spoiler...
Not to say that every nipple in my story is important. The sex scene at the end wasn't needed at all. and the eadoo double blowjob doesn't help my point in the slightest.

As much as I could just glaze over these parts, I feel the need to make them shine even brighter. Sex is important in psychology. Another point is that I can't fade to black and say: sex happened. The fact that you see everything is important. The sex scenes with Trixy, are in first person for a reason. Fact: it was very hard to draw it like that, it is not for my personal perverted desire that I chose to draw those scenes in pov.

Here's a little factoid. It hurts me inside every time I read: I don't like the sex but it's okay because the story is good... Eadoo quest isn't Lewd or perverse; it's sexual, or at least it's supposed to be. And to me these responses are akin to telling me: You're a bad artist and story teller. It's like saying: silent hill 2's casting is bad, because the main character sounds weird. It's supposed to be, it's meant to be, if you take it at face value you're not getting the point... But then again I am a bad story teller and artist so it's normal that no one's getting the hidden messages.

Ultimately, I do think you're right though. It's a real shame that the sexuality draws away the crowd. hides my story from the masses. I don't like the idea that my quest is a gateway drug for yiffyyaffers to get into tg. I do feel like my story is held back by it's nature. And as much as I can say: I really hope that tg will be mature about eadoo's magic pernis but lets face it. Eadoos arcane cock will never be taken serious, because it's a penis. It has to be a penis, the story wouldn't make sense if it wasn't. But you can't make a good clean story about an all powerfull magical penis. it's a fool's errand, but it's the one I take, because I'm stupid like that. I knew what I was getting into (more or less) and I understand the reactions its getting. I never expected Eadoo quest to get a huge following and I don't think it ever will and I'm okay with that.

I'm not angry, I'm sad. I'm sad because you're right. To deny you would be wrong, but to follow you would be going against myself. It's a shame but I have to stand by myself in my madness. But thank you. I'm very glad that we can talk on either side of the fence without yelling or bickering. It means a lot to me...

But! Little facts: All roads lead to bonetown? False! Tg chose to have a dickgirl. Eadoo was initially rather conservative but curious, tg helped guide her towards a sexual life. Instead of letting her breasts regress naturally, tg influenced Eadoo to keep them, by breast feeding. Tg chose to have Dina and Roland commit bdsm. Tg did not pull the arrow out of Pipo. Tg never bought pants for any of the gnolls. Tg decided to have sex with Trixy when she was sleeping. Tg told Pipo to have sex with both Shenzi and Eadola. Tg did not make much effort to remove the love curse from Concu. NeoShenzi was a pure child, Tg made no effert to keep it that way... All roads lead to bonetown, when tg drives and bonetown is on the map. Although I made little effort to take the wheel.

Pop quiz: Why was the sex scene with Trixy in first person?
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No. 93774 ID: c0d921

>>93772
>All roads lead to bonetown? False! Tg chose [a bunch of things]

Let's be a little clearer about this. We did start off with the "choose your sex" option, and that was pretty legit. Most of the time when a quest starts with a character creation segment, and sex is one of the things to choose, some people will put forth and/or vote for an option besides just male or female.

Dickgirl was chosen, but also, you chose to allow that as an option. Which in turn, sent the message: "this is the kind of quest that will have dickgirls in it". And when you made that clear, it selected your audience for you! The kind of people who kept reading are the kinds of people who don't mind having dickgirls in something they're reading.

Now, I'm not wanting to make blanket universal statements, but I don't think it's too extreme a theory to suggest that, maybe, the group "people who want to read about dickgirls" has quite a bit of overlap with "people who will make more sexual suggestions".
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No. 93775 ID: 939c7f

>>93774
You're not wrong. I feel like I'm saying that a lot today... I want to point out, when I said: All roads lead to bonetown, when tg drives and bonetown is on the map. I in no way mean to say: It's all because of tg that there's dicks in my story.
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No. 93776 ID: 0ee153

I dunno, for a story about magic cocks it's been taking itself surprisingly seriously. The premise is fairly eyebrow-raising, but the execution hasn't been objectionable. I genuinely think that one of the few things stopping people from taking it seriously is the grammar. I understand that English isn't your first language, and I'm not complaining that you need perfect diction, but fixing it would likely present a better image and improve people's perceptions of the quest.
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No. 93779 ID: 228874

>>93775
And the wall of tits / drawings of constant bulging dicks has nothing to do with it, you think?

The whole tone of this quest points to porn. Nbd but it's true
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No. 93780 ID: 228874

Also i think we're all getting that the sex is psychologically important but you have to get there are a lot of ways to show it that don't make it seem like you had a big boner drawing it the whole time

I mean one time this girl fell out of a tree and you took the time to draw her exposed butthole. Not condemning it but you get why this turns people off right?
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No. 93781 ID: 5a02f7

>>93766

I thought I was defending you, but it seems you eat humble pie rather well.Now, pass a piece if you don't mind; it seems I need some myself.

Mmmm, IT'S SO GOOD. Tastes like wasted tears and shame~
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No. 93783 ID: 939c7f

>>93780
Well see that's my point. Like I said in my wall of text: But then again I am a bad story teller and artist so it's normal

maybe the message would work better if I didn't suck as a quest author. Sure people tell me every time these rants come up: naw flynn, I like your stuff. But I still see my short comings and so does everyone else.

And yes there is sexy lewed stuff that is not tg's doing and has no hidden meaning.

>>93781
1 hillarious
2 I'm sorry...
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No. 93784 ID: 5a02f7

Nah, brah, you're cool. I just like to try to be funny.

And I'll go ahead and say that I like your art and storytelling, and that it's not terrible.

Mine, on the other hand... Well, all artists think everything they make is crap.
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No. 93785 ID: 939c7f

>>93784
nah bro, your art is great! It's amazing I love it, but the one problem I have is that your amazing grammar makes me mad jelly...
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No. 93799 ID: ad936f

>>93781
Fuck your humble pie, I'm proud to take every opportunity I get to be vulgar and condescending on the internet. As far as lewdness goes however, I'm fine with it because I'm a huge pervert, although it does make me nervous to read it with my roommate in the room.
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No. 93807 ID: 939c7f
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93807

Dethl and Hel were desinged by Miasma. thank you.
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No. 93812 ID: cc08c7

>Has had shitty day
>Comes home
>Sees this

FFFFFFF. I think my day just got a bit better. <3
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No. 93821 ID: 5f7625

I posted earlier that I like the quest despite it's sexual content, and apparently that's not a good a thing, so I should elaborate.

I like some sex in a good story. It always makes it better because it's an important part of most peoples lives. It's hardwired into us that we enjoy sex and sex is good. It's an important motivation and when added to a story about characters it adds further depth.

I even liked a lot of the sexual content this chapter, but I have to say, when there's this much of it it loses it's impact. When Eadoo got laid by elf barmaid after winning a great victory over old Shenzi, that was a capper to a fun and cool escapade, but this episode we had sex with trixy two or three times, there was 4 or 5 other situations that were revolving around sex. I want sex to be in this quest but as anyone who's been reading for a while knows, the focus of the quest isn't sex. Say what you like about how it applies to the characters and their development, this quest has other focuses, and if every character's story becomes sex centric than this isn't a good story, it's a sex story.

That seems kinda harsh, but I think it's true. I do love your quest, I think you are a great writer and this is one of two quests that keeps me coming back to tgchan.

And as for you "pop quiz", the reason Trixy sex scenes are from first person is because Trixy is aware of tgchan and is fucking us, the audience, rather than just Gatlings spiritual form. You perv.
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No. 93840 ID: 939c7f

>>93821
I'm sorry, I didn't mean to make anyone feel bad. I was in a particular state when I went on that tangent.
looking back I see that there was a pronounced amount of sexuality and a fair amount of it was wholly unnecessary. I will show more restraint in the future... Not to say there wont be perversion and sexuality, but before I put something like that in, I'll ask myself: is this necessary?

and your analogy of the pov scene is a little more than half right...
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No. 94095 ID: 5f7625

You gonna share the other half?1
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No. 94123 ID: a5c2b3

Personally I like the sexual aspects, but don't think it should dominate all the actions of the story. That doesn't mean it should be cut out, just more focus on story and characters.
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No. 94338 ID: 939c7f

credit to O-den for the pose and proportions in the title page. Love his work~
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No. 94616 ID: 939c7f
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94616

Speed paint of Eadoo and Trixy accompanied by surprisingly fitting music by WWE & Rev Theory

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8oHWaGEQLJc
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No. 94622 ID: 678ad2
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94622

And now we MUST get something like this for Eadoo.
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No. 94628 ID: 5a02f7

I want to advocate for buying the "I love her" perk next time we level up. I have a feeling that it will eventually come down to a decision where we have to pick a side, and the wrong choice will lose Trixy. In a strictly utilitarian sense, we can't afford her as an enemy, and she's too useful a pawn to let go. Better to cement our relationship as soon as we can. Besides, I'm sure there's some hidden mechanical benefit to it as well.
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No. 94649 ID: a107fd

>>94628
Seconding this.
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No. 95058 ID: a5c2b3

>>94628
Hmmmm, maybe that's what we need for personal outright magical (as in casting spells) capability? Given she HAS pretty much submitted herself to us in just about every way, such an link to her may be what we need to draw on her power ouself.

And with so many possible perks available to us, we should probably pick a particular direction to take ourselves in. Looking at the perks Gatling has, I see them in four groups:
Martial: enhance fighting capabilities
Mental: Telepathy, possesion of many bodies, understanding
Spirit: hiding magically, nomming on souls (which we should probably do more of), and whatever our connection to Trixie is
Body: advanced control of what host bodies do, manipulation of involuntary bodily responses, and using Pleasure/Pain to buff self, may also be useful for subverting unwilling hosts.

That's how it appears to me, though I did speculate a bit. Maybe I'm too used to abilities being in chains & trees. So does anyone else have any idea what direction they want to go in?
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No. 95108 ID: 939c7f

>>95058
you are absolutely right, the abilities in this quest are in fact chains and trees, as well as your assumption on trixy sharing her powers with you, (it was stated in the quest when she explained about binding with you) and you're analogy of Gatlings powers is quite right, in my mind how ever, Gatlings three trees were spirit body and mind, martial being part of body. here's a little hint for ability choices, there are prestige classes that can be unlocked by maxing specific skill chains.
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No. 95109 ID: ec5b46

With regards to the I think I love her trait, I think we should avoid that, largely because of who Trixy is. At some point Trixy is going to do something that completely fucks us all. Not just the little messes to clean up type stuff we've seen so far, an active choice of herself or us over the entire group and what they are trying to build. It's just... thematically correct for the character.

And beyond that I don't dig on it story wise. I know when these anonymous post quests have a little T&A dropped in front of them the instinct is fuck everything else, more sex. Reality is, as a character Trixy showed up out of nowhere and is less a love interest and more a willing thrall (we did edit her brain if you've all forgotten so readily). Maybe you guys like the submissive girls but I'm not into that so much.

There's also the fact that choosing Trixy in this manner is a big fuck you to the rest of the quest. It's like saying we are more interested in sexy demon-bold than we are the quest we've been on the whole time.
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No. 95110 ID: 5a02f7

>>95109

But that's why I think it's so important to bind Trixy to us. The tighter of a leash we have on her, the less damage she'll be able to do when she inevitably fucks us over.

It's going to happen. It's just a matter of how big the destruction is going to be.
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No. 95264 ID: ad936f

>>95108
Prestige classes you say? I think we should go full mental in that case, with willpower (that's the one that helps us soul-fight right?) as the stat we get every level. Physical stuff isn't that important, because we can always build and capture powerful bodies. We may want to take a few soul related perks to make the body snatching process go smoother, but hopefully having a high will will take care of most of that for us. Mental shit is great because mind reading is always way overpowered, and useful in diplomatic situations too, if we keep it a secret (we should).

>>95110
>>95109
Trixy is basically a yandere. Although Trixy diverges from the standard yandere template by being less psychotic and more of a loose cannon. The way you deal with yanderes is either to tell them off before they get too attached or to get them close and submissive enough to you that you don't have to worry about them doing stupid shit like getting jealous and murdering people, or, more likely in Trixy's case, pissing off someone we were trying to ally with. It's far too late to do the former, and Trixy's far too useful not to do the latter. I think that we should get [I think I love her] next level, access to Trixy's magic is way too good to pass up (and yet another reason why physical ability based perks are useless). As long as we keep a close eye on her (do we still have a knife in her?), and we work on her rough personality towards people who aren't us we should be able to at least prevent truly catastrophic actions on her part. Hell, if she's able to cast through us we might not ever need her to go anywhere in person, that'd probably stop most Trixy related disasters before they even started. We'd have to make frequent personal visits to her if we went with that plan though.
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No. 95395 ID: 939c7f
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95395

Bring lil Trixy's dreams to life and snuggle up with her in the real world~! Her life would be complete, if only she could touch you...
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No. 95428 ID: 939c7f
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95428

Front half of Le Blanc's pillow case.
Bring the idol to bed~ ... you won't crush her, she's made though...
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No. 95438 ID: cc08c7

>>95428

Random question. How big would LeBlanc be compared to say, Hel? Not asking for something I wanna draw or anything just curious I swear.
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No. 95439 ID: 939c7f
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95439

>>95438
well here's my proportion guides, I usually use it. Hel I's just about kobold sized, so about three feet and Le Blanc is a little over six inches tall...
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No. 95442 ID: 939c7f
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95442

>>95438
here's a specific if you prefer...
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No. 95447 ID: cc08c7

>>95442

Okie dokie, thanks.
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No. 95479 ID: e18d6f

Missed the apparently too scary image in the Halloweener thread. You should put it up Somewhere for the sake of curiosity.
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No. 95481 ID: 939c7f

>>95479
https://e621.net/post/show/746796/blush-bone-boywiththebrokenhalo-breasts-candy-choc here you go
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No. 95482 ID: e18d6f

Lol that's actually a pretty good Halloween image in my opinion. Creepy without being gross. Guess it wasn't pg enough.
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No. 95508 ID: cc08c7

One more thing if you don't mind, well two.

1.You okay with explicit stuff with LeBlanc? If not I can easily make it goofy instead.

2.If yes, you got a nude reference or does the suit never come off?

Sorry if this is an inconvenience in any way.
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No. 95520 ID: 939c7f

>>95508
draw as much explicit as you want~ though I'm curious to see what goofy stuff you had in mind

the suit does come off, and I'll gladly offer up nude reference~ I meant to speak up about flutterkin biology recently. flutterkin are born gender neutral, they can change gender at will. kinda like some frogs or fish, le blanc sports a weird... gelatin underwear... it's weird and hard to explain...
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No. 95521 ID: 939c7f
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>>95520
basically something like this...
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No. 95524 ID: cc08c7

>>95520

Okie dokie, I'll get my ass in gear and start when I get the refs (unless that last post was the ref). I could probably do something goofy too since Hel's abilities can be used for shenanigans.
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No. 95530 ID: 939c7f
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>>95508
>>95524
Le Blanc is fun loving, blunt, action oriented and perverse, she's mostly fearless and is not one to back down from a challenge. She does not associate to either male or female, leaning towards female when need be. she does not distinguish male or female and has no sexual preference between the two, she does not shy away from play outside of her species, although mates her size are a plus, if push comes to shove, her titans are always fully loaded...

Her immense strength permits her to lift over 300 pounds above her head and her dwarven resilience permits her to resist crashing blunt weapons or the stomping feet of monsters... she's not one to be crushed in bed... piecing and slashing attacks cut her however... her modified internal organs grant her near endless stamina, held breath for over and hour, night vision, thermal vision, limited invisibility, temporary hemorrhage cease flow, near invulnerability to poisons, adrenaline dosses on command, can go several days without sleep depression...

flutterkin can sex change at will, although she is one to change her gender frequently, she prefers the cock for it's advantages. flutterkin can inflate like a balloon to then rapidly deflate to travel great distances, or float around as a balloon guiding their flight with their feathery tails. flutterkin's bones are rubbery and can dislocate universally like a rat, permitting them to slip into tight spots and land harmlessly from rapid deflations, being decendents of fairies, flutterkin have a strong resistance to the elements: being fire, ice, acid and electricity, they do feel these elements, although less than a human would, but they suffer notably less damage form them...

Le Blanc is mildly obsessed with tattoos and piercings. Flutterkin naturally recover extremely well, leaving no scars. making her hobbies more of an on going thing... piercing holes fill in over weeks and tattoos fade over months. she constantly re-inks and re-pierces, which lead to her obsession, she does how ever keep them mild most of the time...
Her augmented liver makes alcohol intoxication difficult as it filters out poison extremely well. And rather than not being drunk her solution is to drink more. often if possible by imbibing large quantities of alcohol via enema often wile bathing in said booze.
Le Blanc sports a bizarre bio slime instead of traditional underwear. this slime is in fact a living creature, though it is non sentient and incapable of thought, it does writhe and cling reflexively. the slime, known as "biowear", sticks to skin and it's self only, it is scooped and peeled of or dried with sand and scratched away when removed. it is edible and tastes like exotic unknown fruit, however it offers little in the way of sustenance... Le Blanc swears by biowear, wearing nothing less under her suit, claiming it offers better mobility, less chaffing, extremely hygienic, remarkable comfort, unparalleled formfitting (being a fluid), and mild arousal... biowear is manufactured via alchemy and feeds off of bodily fluids such as sweat... Le Blanc is naturally a brunet, thought she constantly dyes her hair, typically white. Her hair never grew on the left side of her head...

So for artists wanting to use this character... not saying who... just if anyone wants to... she's super strong, can't be crushed, prone to fucking who ever and always at least curious about the latest fetish, never gets tired, is either male or female as you see fit, capable of inflation fetish if that's you thing, fey resistance permits fun with fire, ice, acids and shocks, unnaturally flexible, her tattoos, although mandatory, can be what ever the artist see's fit, her piercings, although mandatory, can be what ever the artist see's fit, likes to be drunk, however this requires quite the dosage...

Le Blanc might seem a bit op... and she is to be honest. but she is a war hero after all... she's not exactly marry sue, being arrogant and self centered, aside from play she's hard to motivate and harder to get compliance, she'll often fight against something in the name of laziness, to the point of mediating the laziness to begin with... "I will work all night! ALL NIGHT! I will fight tooth and nail for the right to do absolutely nothing but jack off all day!! Fuck you! I'm gonna go tune my ride..."
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No. 95532 ID: cc08c7

Perfect, I'll see what I can do.
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No. 95712 ID: 939c7f

By the way, before anyone freaks out about forced romance... She's not asking you to love her, she's asking to feel loved, it doesn't have to be true love (besides, Gatling is currently incapable of true love) so long as she feels loved her pink mana will charge...
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No. 95835 ID: 939c7f

who should I draw for ass day?
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No. 95840 ID: 088824

>>95835
Ean
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No. 95841 ID: cc08c7

>>95835

Hel or Trixy. For no real reason.
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No. 95843 ID: d78b39

>>95835
Bold!Gatling, just to spice things up.
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No. 95846 ID: e18d6f

The royals: Eadoo and Shenzi in an ass-off with Roza and Martin
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No. 95850 ID: dbe554

>>95843
Double agree on the bold!gatling
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No. 95852 ID: 88e46e

>>95846
Agreed.
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No. 95896 ID: e18d6f

Voting for Shenzi here..
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No. 95897 ID: 88e46e

>>95896
Too late.
>>95893
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No. 95948 ID: ea0ad9

>>95897
Maybe that was a vote that was for who won.
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No. 95952 ID: 211d83

You might want to explain the naked class in a bit more detail here so that people do not get the wrong idea of what class to vote for.

Also would suggest making a strawpoll for the vote in this thread to not clutter up things.
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No. 95957 ID: 939c7f

1) what is a straw poll?

2) naked is not a class, It's nothing, no abilities no feats. It's putting all the class system aside and focusing just on knives, basically for those who disagree with having a body and don't want anything like attacking and spell casting distracting tg from the knife build...
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No. 95958 ID: 211d83

https://strawpoll.me/

Lets you make quick little surveys that you can link here. Makes tallying up the votes quick and easy.
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No. 95962 ID: 939c7f

I kinda like voting in quest because it lets me have a little bit of incite, as of to why you're voting and permits folks to change their votes or say: I vote for this so long as it's what I think it is...
But if people overwhelmingly want to use straw poll... we'll use it.
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No. 95971 ID: ff0c76

oh I thought Nude meant that we didn't specialize in any thing, like a blank slate that could become anything we wanted it to be like mixing the other Classes but it would just be harder for us.

Think like Brawn starts with high strength and innately knows how to not be a complete spaz with most weapons and a wizard is the same with high magic and skills in a few low level spells but both have the aptitude to progress in their class at a steady pace, But Nude means we start with nothing but have the ability to lean how to use magic, how to use a sword, how to use a bow, how to shape shift and so on with ability's unique to the other classes, it just takes us longer to learn and become proficient with them.
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No. 95982 ID: 939c7f

Shameless self endorsement!!!
~I've started a lets play channel~
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCW5Fumv86h7PelLc9uF0U0Q/videos
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No. 96061 ID: d4940a

So I want to bring up that the starting a religion for our class really flies in the face of the everyone is equal new Kingdom we are trying to make. I don't think at any point we've ever tried to make the whole quest about Gatling as a character, and making a new religion sort of superceeds everything else.

Honestly, I think as a whole no one really understood the consequences of being an Avatar of oneself (or any other God, since again Gatling is not the worshiping type).
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No. 96102 ID: 939c7f

>>96061
I won't disagree with you. But I confident you guys can make it work.
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No. 96105 ID: ad936f

>>96061
I agree, I think that even if we do decide on starting a religion we should wait until our kingdom is more established, so we don't get shoehorned into becoming a theocracy.

I think that the focus of this quest should be more on Eadoo than Gatling, his name is in the title of the quest. Plus, fully quest controlled protagonists tend to turn out bland.
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No. 96107 ID: ea0ad9

>>96105
I wanted to keep Richard being us a secret from most people so that we could have Richard mention "us" being a God but not pressure people into following. Without any enforcement or proof, the amount of worshippers will remain small, but we'll still gather some that way, and gain a bit of power.
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No. 96261 ID: f7a64f

We should probably throw all that discussion in here, so as to not clutter up the thread and so bwtbh doesn't make us start arguing with ourselves in front of everyone.
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No. 96296 ID: c6d510

So what's Gatling's charsheet like now?
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No. 96320 ID: f7a64f

I'm also curious, apparently I missed some of our last level up (which was pretty damn long).
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No. 96326 ID: 939c7f
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96326

>>96296
>>96320
Gatling
Level 14 male/female Sentient Shard
Level 2 male/female Avatar of Al'Gattaya

Weapon Skill:30
Agility:33
Ballistic Skill:26
Intelligence:47
Strength:32
Charisma:66
Constitution:42
Will Power:85
Dexterity:22
Fellowship:64

Mantra:17

--Sentient Shard--

-Telepathy [Communicate telepathically with allies within short range]

-Multy-possession 3 [Dominate up to 3 hosts at a time]

-Recal [instantly recall to an ally's hand within a short distance (same as telepathy)]

-Soul Eater [Gatling's voracious appetite permits him to eat and meld with his victims. But in this, Gatling can now control his hunger, to an extent (Gatling can roll to avoid devouring their prey entirely and can avoid corroding his host)]

-Inner contempt [Gatling can make a will save to ignore the effects of self loathing]

-Spiritually distant [any attempt to locate, spy upon or commune with Gatling via divination (scrying, tarot etcetera) is increased in -difficulty by two tiers. Gatling cannot yet prevent or control this]

-pleasure form pain [Gatling and those possessed by Gatling, are immune to pain and pain effects.]

-Blazing blade [Gatling can engulf its self in flames at will, this effect does not harm the wielder]

-Self loathing [HATE!! Burned into my mind like hot iron! On each inch of my memories written a thousand thousand times Hate hate hate, but for you... HATE!! HATE!!! (plus 15% critical hit chance, when rolling to wound yourself.)]

-Woundless [Gatling can elect to not cause injuries when inserted]

-Self control [+20 to resist devouring souls]

-Tongues [You vaguely understand any language]

-I... I think I love her? [I'm not going to say outright what this does, but when this ability is in affect, there will be a pink note]

-greater telepathy [you can now read the surface thoughts of others (I.E. when you actively think. like when you read...)]

--Avatar--

-You've got the touch! [The mojo is in you, what does that mean? It's kinda hard to explain...]

-Blessing of crossed race [Those who earn The gaze of Gatling are not divided by the barriers race, may their flesh be one in childbirth, amen~]

-Basic almighty spells [you know the basic spells for all of your domains [typically 2-3 per domain]]

-Orison [Gatling can cast a number of level 0 spells without using mantra]

~Spells~

Level 0 spells cost 0 mantra

-Community-
Fairness [Merchants cannot lie, gamblers cannot cheat]
Self sacrifice [you take damage instead of the target]
Pray [all allies worshiping you, everywhere, gain +10 to everything, so long as you do nothing but pray for their success]
Telepathic bond [touched targets share a telepathic channel, there can be any number of targets in a channel and any number of channels]

-knowledge-
Aid [+5 to int, cha and will for one skill check, does not stack]
Trivia [A trivial question is answered [such as, where is the capital, what year is it, is there a tavern nearby, who is the elected leader?]]

-lust-
Drive [Target possesses long lasting libido and stamina]
Pink wall [Target's sexual desires are temporarily, not factored by race or gender, being purely objective]

-Fertility-
Contraception [Render target temporarily infertile]
cleanse [make water safe to consume]

-general-
Torchlight [you shine like a torch]
Light Eater [Blow out all flames nearby]
Symbol Divine [Manifest a divine symbol]
Trick of the eyes [target cannot avoid your gaze]

Level 1 spells cost 1 mantra

-Community-
Back to back [Two targets gain +15 to [all], for as long as they work together]
King's cry [target becomes calm]
Rally [target squad looses the pined, panicked and confused conditions]
Moment of greatness [double targets moral bonuses]
attention [target can be heard by all in a large area]
Bells [all npc in a large area gain the [Martial weapon training] and [Medium armor training] perks]
the law [target is compelled to not commit crimes against his own people]

-knowledge-
Tongues [target can speak any language]
insight [target gains +15 to int, cha, wis for one skill check]
Diagnose [detect and identify target's injuries and illnesses]
Augury [A simple question is answered]

-lust-
Binding [Binds target in tight leathers, agi save negates]
White tentacles [summon weak grabbing tentacles, offering mild healing powers]
Enthrall [target seeks to serve, will save negates]
pink touch [Touched target is paralyzed with rapturous pleasure]

-Fertility-
Bless the fields [target land, body of water, or person becomes fertile and prosperous]
long live [target land, body of water or child resits the effects of weather]
The egg [one pregnant target lays an egg within three hours, child gestates normally within the egg]
destined birth [Target unborn persons's stats are raised and begins with a character class, target is marked from birth with your blessed sigil]

-general-
light and dark [target location is illuminated / is plunged in darkness]
black and clear, skies [weather improves / worsens slightly]
Bless and afflict [target gains or losses -/+ 10 to chosen skill]
Mend and wounds [stops bleeding and helps healing / worsens injury, causing bleeding and infection]
hellfire and holyflames [produce holy / hellish flames]

Things that need investigation:
Does woundeless work on your body?
Does possession work on your body?
Does Flaming work on your body?
Does Recal Work on your body?

~A kind god, presenting unison between the common folk, fond of Fellowship and respect. Teamwork is the favored weapon of Gatling! They are also a god of insight, oft to help spread guidance and secrets. Fond of pleasures and just rewards, they are not offended by the mutual enjoyment of their followers, if anything it pleases them. Rich and plentiful, Their blessing extends not only the farmers fields, but their wives bellies as well~
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No. 96331 ID: 939c7f
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96331

--Gatling's quests--

Main quests offer a lot of Exp to the individual tied to it while also gifting significant exp to others who helped. You can never gain less than one level from a main quest.

Side quests are less important and offer less exp, but form the bulk of the campaign, Some quests are time dependent! So plan your actions carefully...

Achievements don't offer any exp, but accomplishing them grants you special items.


-Main quests-


United in all
Tied to: Eadoo Gatling
"The world will follow in the light of the one marked by the Everything, The black fated prince, so goes the prophecy"
world united under one rule [>1%/80%]

The Dragons throne
Tied to: Eadoo Gatling
"The dragons rule will rise again, under the will and call of the Black fated princes. It is only a matter of time"
Crown of dragons [0/1] Scepter of Dragons [0/1] Throne of Dragons [0/1]

Out for Demon blood
Tied to: Gatling
"Gorister is out to get you, but maybe there's still time..."
Kill Gorister [0/1] opt: Change his corrupted heart [0/1]

The son must be Stopped
Tied to: Gatling and Eadoo
"Kaleb the Vile has plagued Eadoo's home and killed her family, He must face death..."
Son killed [0/1]

I want it all!!
Tied to: Eadoo
"I want Wealth, Women and Power... That is my wish little bunny rabbit, I want it all."
Square feet of riches [>1/10] - Harem girls/boys [3/50] - Loyal servants [16/300]

Together for ever
Tied to: Trixy
"In my deepest dreams, we never leave each others sides. Be mine my love"
Wed to Gatling [0/1]

Blood Brothers
Tied to: William
"I will kill him, even if it kills me. He will die with my hands on his throat!"
Brother killed [0/1]

To Heavens gate
Tied to: Ean
"I will see the golden gates in death. This I swear"
absolution [0/1]

A fathers death
Tied to: Pipo and Yulfa
"He must be avenged, he must, he will."
Father/husband avenged [0/1]

To rule once more
tied to: Sasha
"A witch has taken my form and rules in my place, I must have back what is rightfully mine"
Form returned [0/1] witch killed [0/1]


-side quests-


Take the Castle
"Clear the castle Arimasho of the foul undead that haunt our town and it's walls are yours, these people your servants, this land your kingdom"
Castle taken [0/1]
Time: irrelevant

A map to Treasure
"Banzai's map leads to a relic who's military worth is greater than an army... but it's path is treacherous indeed..."
Treasure found in the blighted path [0/1]
Time: irrelevant

Gnomish taxes
"Gnomes are being dicks to your peasants to be, kill the or Deal with them."
deal with the gnomish villages pacifically [0/2] opt: kill them all [0/2]
Time: irrelevant

Taken by trolls
"a little girl was abducted by trolls, kill them."
Little girl retrieved [0/1]
Time: Urgent

Iron Root Wall
"send emissaries to iron root to help smooth over trade roots with them."
trade roots [0/1]
Time: ongoing

Strange soldiers
"strange soldiers have been seen on the outskirts of a near by farm. investigate them."
soldier groups scouted [0/1]
Time: expired

find mah chickens
"chickens have been taken by orcs. Save them."
Chickens remaining [21/30]
Time: Urgent

Fey moods
"the dwarven smith has fallen to a fey mood and needs copper cables, bones and star metal. The first two are abundant, but star metal is rare."
unites of star metal [0/1]
Time: Still Time

spooky scary
"there are skeletons in the grave yard that dance at night. Kill them."
Skeletons killed [0/4]
Time: Plenty of time

Love for a goblin
"rekindle trade roots with the goblins so that some fool can get off with a goblin"
Trade route [0/2]
Time: irrelevant

dire situation
"there are dire boars in the forest. kill them. Disperse the miasma for optimal results."
Dire boars killed [0/4] opt: find miasma and stop the source. [0/1]
Time: Difficulty grows with time

Can I fuck her?
"Concu desperately wants Alanna all to her self... maybe you should step in..."
Charm spells undone [0/1] Opt: Convince Alanna to accept Concu's new feelings, potentially pedophilic off screen sex? [0/1]
Time: irrelevant

Gone mining
"A dwarf wants his son back from the mines, go get him"
Return the Dwarf named Qwern to his mother
Time: Difficulty grows with time

But the Jacket though...
"Carl is likely to die in his jacket, maybe he should stop wearing it..."
Jacket worn [1/1]
Time: Uncertain

Give the little guy a chance
"A young elf in town wants to be a merc and claims to be a master swords man"
interview [0/1]
Time: irrelevant

The mask The mask The mask The mask
"get to the bottom of that mask"
Bottoms got of the mask [0/1]
Time: irrelevant


-Achievements-


Ten tomes in
"Reach 10 chapters in total"
Reward: Valor's sword

Take a little journey
"group traveled a total 3000 miles"
Reward: Golden steeds.

Take a long journey
"Group traveled a total 15000 miles"
Reward: Seven leagues Boots

Don't take this Journey...
"Group traveled a total 300000 miles"
Reward: Steel dragon Ragnaros

I need help
"acquire 25 soldiers"
Reward: captains sword

I need an army
"Acquire 100 soldiers"
Reward: Captains vest

one to rule them all
"acquire 500 soldiers"
Reward: captains hat

EIGHT
"EIGHT"
Reward:EIGHT

Quite rich
"Gain 10 gold"
Reward: Beacon of light

more than enough
"Gain 50 gold"
Reward: gold sniffing nose

Swimming in it
"Gain 300 gold"
Reward: Gold grieves of stepping

Monster attacker
"slay 10 monsters"
Reward: Vile bane weasel

Monster hunter
"Slay 30 monsters"
Reward: Dragon bone greatsword

Master hunter
"slay 75 monsters"
Reward: Golden hunting dog

Monster's nightmare
"Slay 100 monsters"
Reward: Monster bane greatsword

Don't make this a habbit
"1 named team member dies"
Reward: Heartless sword

Just the beginning
"3 named team members die"
Reward: ghost calling collar

You should of tried harder
"5 named team members die"
Reward: unicorns blood

you're trying at this point
"25 named team members die"
Reward: immortalizing flask

High card
"Just you and her, if you know what I mean! Kobolds that is..."
Reward: cuffing lace

Two pair
"Two on one, if you know what I mean~ Kobolds that is..."
Reward: fitting lace

Three of a kind
"All three and all for you, if you know what I mean~ Kobolds that is..."
Reward: loves red lace

Flush
"Four on one, wouldn't be fair otherwise, if you know what I mean~ Kobolds that is..."
Reward: lace of gold

Full house
"Sexual innuendo involving having sex with five Named Kobolds, if you know what I mean~ Kobolds that is..."
Reward: lace of irresistible desires

New Faith
"15 religious followers"
Reward: staff of faith

Now we're talking
"45 religious followers"
Reward: pendant of true faith

A proper following
"300 religious followers"
Reward: Robes of the martyr

Wide spread
"750 religious followers"
Reward: Mitre of divine grace

Like a plague
"2000 religious followers"
Reward: new prestige class for Gatling

Total sell out
"subscribe to coffeefueledgaming patreon"
Reward: five levels distributed as you see fit.

seven rings in hand
"acquire seven magical rings in total"
Reward: Arrowed heart's fire

true identity
"name all of the stories over arching villains"
Reward: Foe slayer

Nod to Vlamibad
"kill all the bitches, be king, fuck bitches"
Reward: kings foil

Fuck the king and fuck kings landing
"Who needs heros!"
Reward: lone wanderer perk

--More quests and achievements are sure to come--
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No. 96333 ID: ad936f

Boy, you've been playing too much World of Warcraft.

>Gone mining
>"A dwarf wants his son back from the mines, go get him"
>Return the Dwarf named Qwern to his mother
>Time: Difficulty grows with time
What? How did we get this quest? Would it be out of character to drop everything to go do this? Watch this kid turn out to be one of Qwern's descendants, or like, his great great great grand nephew.
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No. 96337 ID: fa8f9d

What about the quest for the dwarf that needs metal? Also I feel the need to focus on something William related; he has gotten little to no love in the story considering he was one of the original 5... I mean geez... He isn't even involved in the war council stuff.
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No. 96339 ID: f7a64f

Now that we are corporeal we should abandon all our companions and go on the road, just so we can get the achievement for it. Well spread gatlingity to the globe.
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No. 96340 ID: ea0ad9

>"EIGHT"
EIGHT!
>All three and all for you, if you know what I mean~
Wait, there's a thir--It's Eclipse isn't it.
>Four on one, wouldn't be fair otherwise,
Four?! Are we bringing the Son in on this?!
>five Named Kobolds
...Now I'm just flat out lost. I think we need to find an unnamed Kobold, give them a name, and then bed them?
>Convince Alanna to accept Concu's new feelings, potentially pedophilic off screen sex? [0/1]
Wasn't Concu of age, though? She's married! ...Or was Alanna underaged?
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No. 96341 ID: f7a64f

Is EIGHT a reference to the demo for the Stanley Parable?
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No. 96344 ID: c6d510

>>96341
I believe it's more reference to the achievement in the HD edition based off of the incident in the demo for the stanley parabke. Which means we'll probably be seeing a keypad sometime in the future.
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No. 96398 ID: bae3ea

guys, I just got an idea, if the soul surgery works out and 'richard' is still standing, then we can repeat the process and get a small army of gatlings
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No. 96403 ID: c6d510

>>96398
Very small army. We used up a blade to manifest Richard, remember?
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No. 97233 ID: 2ccbb3

Important question: What happens to souls that are unclaimed and do not die in the name of any?

Would like a percentage demographic plz
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No. 97449 ID: 939c7f

I feel a bit bad for not updating a lot lately, i know my update rate is already pretty low, but I've been tasked with a lot of extra hours at work lately since one of my coworkers took his vacation this week...
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No. 97450 ID: 939c7f

>>97233
oh and the souls that aren't claimed wander around between he afterlife... usually snatched up by devils looking for a quick meal or sometimes they find a door that lets them in, for better or for worst...
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No. 97453 ID: 665ed8

How does one get virginities, im assuming there are ways other than sending an avatar and actually taking it
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No. 97458 ID: 3663d3

>>97453
probably any followers can also lay claim.
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No. 97459 ID: 665ed8

Yeah but it said that they had to be sacrificed to us so that wouldn't make much sense
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No. 97462 ID: 3663d3

>>97459
a priest is given power to make sacrifices to their god.
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No. 97478 ID: 939c7f

Priests tend to actively try to gather roses for their god, as it usually gains their gods favor. However anyone can consummates the flower in the name of a deity, sometimes even, women will offer their flower to a deity directly. Virgin souls however require a small ritual and is best left to priests...
(Of note: the rose blooms around the age of 16, regardless of race or species. (so you can't grind a wealth of 2.6 year old kobold roses) only valued souls (sapient creatures) have roses worth mention. The breaking of the hymen is not required or relevant for gathering roses. Until a living penis penetrates, the rose is still within the maidens souls. (if anything it's an obstacle...)
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No. 97576 ID: 939c7f
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97576

Hey guys,
It's been a little over three years now I've been writing Eadoo quest, and I had a great time doing it! But I've got some problems with eadoo quest and I think it's about time I move on...

I'd like to point out that all of these problems are my fault, I'm not blaming anyone but myself.

For one, it's been three years and the plot only advanced 4 days... The game was supposed to be about empire building and resource management and the stagnation really didn't help the plot along, to put it into perspective: it'll be four days before the away team reached iron root, seven days before we storm the castle, nine days before we discover who tass's champion is... and if it continues as is, those days equate to years for us...
The other problem is that there's too many characters and too little spotlight... In trying to keep the story fresh I crammed in more characters, granted these characters would have arrived sooner or later but, still. I feel the characters don't get the love they deserve from me and that saddens me because I honestly really love all of my characters and world lore...
Finally we can all agree that the game mechanics are shit... I tried making my own thing and rolling with it, but it's very broken and unrefined in so many ways, and the fact that no actual resources exists makes it pretty hard for me, I'm pretty much out of inspiration for it...

so I'm gonna put Eadoo quest down for now... I promise to myself that at some point, the next quest I wright will be a return to Eadoo, but given that amount of time I'll rewrite the game mechanics and have a new approach... For now I'll write a simpler, less politic and empire driven story.

How I'm gonna not gonna fall into the same traps...
First off the story wont be very time oriented, it happens when it happens, and without having multiple groups, sometimes there will just be over world travel, or a time skip... but I'm not factoring in long term plans on in internal level...
I'm keeping to a short cast, and leaving one open slot dedicated for side characters at a time...
lastly, the game will run on pathfinder... no fancy custom made game rules, just pathfinder. for those who don't know, pathfinder is d&d 3.5, but newer... Yes I know that's not exactly true, but you can argue about that in another board...
You can find all the rules for pathfinder here http://www.d20pfsrd.com/

I'm making no grand illusion that this quest will fail me in new interesting ways, but I'm excited to see how it breaks down~ Here's hoping you guys stick with me for another three years!

For those wanting to know what my new story is about... I'll put it in spoiler warnings since it has a cold opening...

You play as a highly advanced learning AI who fell upon two siblings, a younger brother named Varonos and an older sister named Doukissa as well as their close friend, Prince... Your prime directive is study demi human emotions and culture in hopes of understanding or even integrating them...
The game takes place in pseudo fantasy setting with a bit of a modern twist to it... It's a romantic comedy with a eldritch call of Cthulhu style twist~

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No. 97578 ID: 665ed8

While I can't say I am happy you are leaving the quest I do approve. Your reasons are logical and I am more excited to see what you make next than see you stagnate in this one. Thank you for telling us and not just moving on.


Excited to see what you do next, Purpose~
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No. 97580 ID: cd886c

It'll be sad to see eadoo quest ending but in the end you should do whatever you think is best for your art.
Thanks for the story so far. Excited for what you do next.
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No. 97582 ID: e18d6f

Your reasons are sound, but I still wish you'd reconsider. There are a lot of loose plot threads that are going to be difficult to let go. And while it's true that the pace is very slow given the scope of the quest, the multitude of interesting characters is one of the quest's strengths. You could still speed up the pace artificially by withdrawing the viewpoint a little. Have Gatling begin feeling like a deity and all of a sudden not every single gear in the works of their empire will be important enough to learn every minutiae of their insignificant lives. That's how a common adventurer with absolutely no influence builds a power base. We now have that and it's pretty reasonable that the pace of the quest will now shift with the focal point being an immortal demigod rather than a charismatic fuzzbold. It could be explained away pretty reasonably by having something significant happen to Gat to cause this withdrawal. Either something revealed by our uncle or something happening that is painful enough emotionally that we embrace our inhumanity to escape being caught in the tangles of our followers' lives.
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No. 97583 ID: e18d6f

>>97582
In other words while I'd happily watch Eadoo quest Wheel of Time it for another 10 years, I'd sooner see Gat Dr. Manhatten it and have events unfold montage style apart from the key points of conflict and plot development. We don't need to Tolkien things and talk about every footstep as we head to the castle.
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No. 97584 ID: b17b81

I remember helping choose stats at the start of Eadoo quest. That was a fair bit ago I guess. I kinda fell off after a couple months. I genuinely look forward to your next quest.
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No. 97595 ID: 99a64d

>>97576
I stopped reading Eadoo a little while ago for pretty much exactly the reasons you listed. I could tell you were getting bored with it as more and more random, barely explicable shit started happening. Like suddenly Eadoo wasn't special and there were two of him?!? All of the cast seemed like they had the potential to be interesting characters, but they fell flat due to a complete lack of development. If you had kept the cast down to maybe, Gatling, Eadoo, Trix, Shenzi, Roland, and a few others then it would have been better. You also included a bunch of sidequests, and while I appreciate giving the suggestors more options, the story was slow enough without them. Eadoo quest could've been great, if it had just been a series of important events and battles with the suggestors making plans inbetween I would have loved it, but it got bogged down with minutia, fluff, minor characters, and other plot irrelevant things.
But that's just my two cents. If your next quest is anything like the good bits of Eadoo quest then I'll probably be reading.
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No. 97596 ID: 99a64d

Plus, considering Eadoo Quest's reputation, it's probably good to be getting a fresh start.
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No. 97598 ID: 665ed8

Though I am curious, given the way people reacted to the sex in Eadoo will the new one include such?
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No. 97635 ID: f7a64f

Sad to see it end, but I can't say I don't understand. It ran so long with such a huge cast of characters that alot of the characters and their development got lost just because it happened so long ago most of your suggestors wouldn't remember it. Thinking back on how different it was having corny adventures with Eadoo and the princess as compared to later on with our cast of dozens, it's like that stuff never happened.

I almost wish you wouldn't quit it. The story may be unfocused, but that's because it's broad and detailed. Maybe what's needed is just to make some broad strokes so that all the little conflicts we've been building to with no resolution turn into defined direct conflicts instead of overarching situations (I.E. force a confrontation with Gorrister, or the church of magnus, or hidden revolution).

Then again, if you aren't enjoying it anymore, you shouldn't do it, and you shouldn't worry about me or any other poster in your game.

Regardless, you are a great writer and I hope your next game turns out great. You work is top notch and a cut above most stuff on tgchan.
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No. 97642 ID: e18d6f

>>97596
I get what you're saying but I think you overestimate the number of people who have actually read the quest start to finish and think it's just a sex quest. Most of the detractors I believe are a vocal minority who never read much of the quest or are simply squeamish about the particulars of some of the sexual situations. While early on there was unnecessary nudity (which I personally don't care about), anyone who reads the quest can see how Flynn matured as an author. Sex is present at times, but it's all presented well within the context of the plot. And remember that it's the readers who chose almost all current instances of sex. We built Eadoo into a charismatic succubus, and we made Gatling a lust/fertility deity.

.02
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No. 97677 ID: 939c7f
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97677

>>97578
>>97580
>>97584
>>97595
>>97635
Thank you so much for the support, it means a lot to me and it's not easy to let go of Eadoo quest, so it's really nice to see you guys have my back~

>Regardless, you are a great writer and I hope your next game turns out great. You work is top notch and a cut above most stuff on tgchan.

This actually had me teary eyed...

>>97582
>>97583
This is a pretty good idea and I'll definitely consider it when I eventually come back to Eadoo quest. But that might be in a long time, I hope you'll still be interested in reading my quests when that time comes...

>>97598
>Though I am curious, given the way people reacted to the sex in Eadoo will the new one include such?

It wouldn't be a proper flynn quest if there wasn't controversial themes and nudity, But I'm going to tone it down significantly... There will be occasional breasts but I'm going to avoid giant floppy cocks all over the screen all the time... Nudity will not be forced and appear naturally if and when there would be nudity. Sex on the other hand will be more of a reward, something that doesn't just spawn because the author got a boner. All of the characters can end up having sex, but they're not destined to without TG's effort. Also sex scenes will be tame and sensual in stead of wild and sexual...

Characters from Eadoo quest might be making appearances, thought they may be modified or renamed, they won't be the literal same characters, but rather recycled faces...

I'm thinking, since I'm using the pathfinder system, there will be moments when you're asked to chose a feat or spell from a seemingly never ending list... in these cases, we'll settle the vote by first to 5 votes or most votes after a set time, I reserve the right to break a tie with my own personal opinion... We may lower the vote count to 3 or raise it to 7 if need be, based on over or under whelming votes...

I'm hoping you guys like the next story... The slave, the thief and the slut / Rise of the Vile Bloods
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No. 97684 ID: e18d6f

>>97677
Booh, no giant floppy cocks? Preposterous. :P
Look forward to the next quest.
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No. 97686 ID: 3f9dc0

>>97576
My impression, especially recently, was that the pacing in Eadoo ground to a halt because every time we sat down to try and get stuff done, another thing crashed into the spotlight needing to be dealt with first. All you had to do was wait to introduce a new element until AFTER we had resolved an old one.
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No. 97688 ID: b17b81

Since I'm gonna miss at least one round of voting for stats or class, I'm putting my idea here.

Ranger Gnoll
Str 16 (+2) 10pt
Dex 12 2pt
Con 14 (+2) 5pt
Int 14 5pt
Wis 14 5pt
Cha 8 -2pt

Medium Int because it affects how many skill points you get per lvl (real important in pathfinder for skills) and also it would let us learn 2 languages (otherwise we are just stuck with gnoll)
Medium Wis because rangers are the Wis class
High Con and Str for rolling two weapon fighting ranger
Meh dex because we have a nat +2 to armor class and it's hard to make every stat great
And bad Cha because it is the best dump stat
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No. 97689 ID: 88e46e

>>97688
To be fair, that really depends on having a team. Unless we're guaranteed a few allies we can also reliably control, we can't really afford dump stats, since even Charisma is important for social stuff. TWF ranger is legit great as part of a team, but I'm somewhat concerned about how survivable it is solo.

Can we get some author input on how worried we should be about having to fill every role? Also, how do you feel about Dreamscarred Press's stuff, Broken Halo/rest of you guys?
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No. 97691 ID: 3f9dc0

>>97689
Nothing about Dreamscarred specifically, but I have never looked in to a pathfinder 3rd Party Publisher write-up and found it not to be broken in some way. Either overpowered, or badly put together.

I mean yes, you can break the game with the core rules too, but you have to kinda work at it. No sense making it easier by including 3PP.
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No. 97693 ID: 88e46e

>>97691
That's why I said DSP specifically, they're actually excellent and much better balanced than actual core. Most of their stuff is on par with bards, inquisitors, magi, and so on. The only things that might actually be problems are some of the full-manifesting psions since they ported Astral Seed and Psychic Reformation from 3.5e, but the rest is generally as powerful as a sorcerer. Some of the Path of War stuff also does a bit much damage at very low levels, like 1-3, but they're actually working to fix that. I legitimately consider them to be much better than Paizo, especially where taking feedback is concerned.
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No. 97710 ID: 939c7f

>>97689
you have two allies that are npc controlled but not stupid, and a dedicated slot for side characters that come and go as they please. (like in kingdom hearts) one of your allies is a jack of all trades does everything (not saying what class yet) and the other is going to base it's self on your character to fill out the team so we don't die horribly.

as for third party rules, I generally stay away from them, there's already a little over too much to process in the vanilla rules, and I have a completely biased opinion of third party vs first party and balancing issues, (once again, it's biased and I stand by it) I do how ever use the advanced bestiary guide.
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No. 97711 ID: 939c7f

oh also, hands raised, no lying... who voted for gnoll just to have a dick girl?
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No. 97713 ID: 40c6ad

>>97711

Well, I was the one who suggested NOT a spotted-hyena-like gnoll, so not me. Really there's nothing to say gnoll ladies have to be dickgirls in any case, they have other non-hyena traits. The original D&D gnoll (at least, after the "cross between a gnome and a troll") was just a human with fur and a hyena head, like most beastmen-esque races.

Also striped hyenas and aardwolves are cute and there should be more gnolls based on them.
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No. 97714 ID: 99a64d

Will the new quest be getting its own disthread?
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No. 97717 ID: 47160d

Also are we the slave, the thief, or the slut?
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No. 97718 ID: 939c7f

>>97713
agreed
>>97714
yes
>>97717
no
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No. 97719 ID: e18d6f

>>97711
Is dickgirl ever a bad choice?
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No. 97720 ID: 0cdf95

>>97719

Well, there are various biological and social ramifications, many of which could be negative, so yes.
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No. 97722 ID: fbed30

>>97720
Well in the case of a gnoll, if it's a hyena style pseudo-peen, biological ramifications aren't as major as in the case of a trans like Roz was. And socially it might actually be a hindrance to be the only gnoll chick without one (assuming the gnolls in this setting are the same as in Eadoo's). That said it could be explained away with our bloodline; and I will admit that I mainly want it because when we do get fanservice or fanart, that's my personal taste in soda pop.
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No. 97723 ID: 0cdf95

>>97722
>if it's a hyena style pseudo-peen, biological ramifications aren't as major

Depends on if you want your firstborn child to actually manage to take a breath.

>And socially it might actually be a hindrance to be the only gnoll chick without one

I don't think hyena social rituals would really apply to gnolls. The spotted hyena dominance ritual is about displaying your genitals for your superior to have a sniff and taste of and to threaten with their big jaws, and that whole thing becomes waaay more awkward for a bipedal species that wears, for example, loincloths to protect their junk from getting frozen off and/or bitten by the wild animals they're hunting.

And if there isn't a social dominance reason to have a pseudoschlong then it's really only a big hassle and a threat to their health. In fact, even if you assume some magical melding of humanoid traits with a hyena to explain it in place of some kind of evolution, this being a fantasy setting, then it might actually be a situation where some female "circumcision", in the sense of a ritual surgery to open things up down there, would actually make some degree of sense, for reasons of the previously mentioned stillbirths and et cetera.

I don't think spotted hyena females even ever use their dicks as dicks, it's only there for the submission display.
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No. 97724 ID: 0cdf95

>>97723

Now that I think of it, actually, just being bipedal by itself makes giving birth a lot harder, because of the different hip structure you have to have. Humans have a lot harder time than quadrupedal mammals, death by childbrith was the leading cause of death for women through most of history. If you combined that and the spotted hyena biology, which can also kill the mother quite often as well as almost always killing the first child, then you might well end up with something that doesn't really work at all.
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No. 97725 ID: 7178cd

>>97724
They do occasionally somewhat use it in mounting dominance displays actually, but I fail to see what that has to do with what a sapient female might do with one. Or what that has to do with whether it should be an option or not. You also seem to be arguing using both "evolution must be kept in mind" and "fantasy setting so magic explains all", so I'll just ignore those bits except to say that using hyena social rituals or biology as a direct map of what gnolls would be or do seems silly. It's like seeing chimps groom each other by eating each others parasites then getting upset because humans give each other backrubs instead of picking off bugs. Same goes with the physiological concerns of a pseudo-penis. If Flynn does decide it's an option then there are plenty of ways to explain it scientifically. Gnoll babies could run small, or the canals run large - or not - just as in hyenas the actual genital configuration could be an example of social dictates deciding evolution's course. Or it could be a genetic throwback that only a percentage of females possess.

Regardless I'll find my justifications just as you'll find yours, so it boils down to preferences. If Flynn gives the option, it will come down to votes. He's about the only author here who provides that particular brand of girl, so I hope he does.
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No. 97726 ID: 939c7f

>>97723
I'm a futa lover myself so it comes as no supersize that my gnoll ladies have pseudo dicks, but I also like the matriarchal attitude that it gives them. still I leave it up to vote and thank you >>97723 for the brilliant suggestion. If we vote against having a pseudo phallus on our gnoll it's due to a ritualistic circumcision to help with child birth, assuming the alpha females don't go though this process to maintain their superiority. also it could vary from clan to clan tribe to tribe... in pathfinder not all gnoll tribes are matriarchal, some are lead my alpha males, other by blond gnolls named flinds. But the females tend to be larger and more dominant like their hyena counterpart, hense my suspicion of their lady junk, but pathfinder never Ever Ever touches base on such sexuality, so ultimately it comes down to preference...

>>97688
given that he wanted a ranger gnoll should I post the stats for him?
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No. 97727 ID: b17b81

>>97726
Nah, different stats for different classes. Just trying to make whatever we go with(personal preference) viable/good. (trying to mix roleplaying and rollplaying) Given enough time I can make most things work well. (it's what I did for my Forest gnome fighter)
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No. 97730 ID: b17b81

>who voted for gnoll just...
Going with the flow.
Also, if I had realized sooner that kitsune was an option, I would have voted for that. (cause fox chicks are my thing)
The new stats I came up with are the same, just wis and cha swapped. Took a little to see what affects what in this class.
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No. 97735 ID: e18d6f

>>97711
It definitely factored in. It's one of the things I like in your quests and your take on gnolls.
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No. 97780 ID: 939c7f

I'm thinking I'll roll between posts instead of in the posts themselves... would tg trust me to roll off screen and not cheat?
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No. 97782 ID: 7b82a3

Sure, and maybe you'll show us some mercy from time to time.
We're pretty shit at rolls.
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No. 97787 ID: e18d6f

>>97782
Truth
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No. 97936 ID: f7a64f

I've seen you fudge rolls before to protect us, but I with the crazy number of rolls you put out nothing else will work
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No. 97942 ID: b17b81

You're the Dm behind the Dm's screen. You are allowed to fudge any roll you want so long as you have a good reason. (story or mechanics reason) I trust that you'll be fair, not that you'll be honest. It's fine for us to have shit luck sometimes (or the majority of times), we're used to it; just give us a break every once in a while if it's for an important roll.
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No. 97946 ID: 939c7f

>>97942
That is my intent, also it makes posting quite easier... But yeah, the goal is to be a fair dm... But for the record, I did not fudge any rolls in the chase scene, since there's an entirely alternative path if you fail the chase~
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No. 97947 ID: 939c7f

for those who are curious...
You're serendipitously saved by one of the main villains who's trying to get the artifact... you escape as he kills off the hellknights and are blamed for their murder since you're the only survivors... one way or another you end up falling into the pit when you escape...
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