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48633 No. 48633 ID: 0a1dbb

okay, you can dump your criticism here. And if you don't have crit- i also accept fanart. And if you don't have fanart, then discuss my crappy quests. And if you don't have anything to want to discuss about, you can't talk to my crappy quest characters. And finally, if you don't want any of these, then go somewhere else.
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No. 48634 ID: 0a1dbb

Current running quests
The Jobquest
http://tgchan.org/kusaba/quest/res/373951.html

[[DOOBIE]]
http://tgchan.org/kusaba/quest/res/381274.html

Moria
http://tgchan.org/kusaba/quest/res/367145.html
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No. 48635 ID: 0a1dbb

>>358433
when I say you can't talk to my quest characters, i actually mean you are able to as long as you buy them dinner.
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No. 48646 ID: 938efa

I've got five bucks, that'll buy a couple of things off the dollar menu. Does that count?
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No. 48663 ID: 0a1dbb

>>358446
depends who your wine and dining.
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No. 48692 ID: 0a1dbb
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48692

i will be posting the doobie stat cards now
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No. 48693 ID: 0a1dbb
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48693

npc stat card 1
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No. 48706 ID: 0a1dbb
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48706

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No. 48721 ID: 1b0f2f
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48721

>>358506
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No. 48722 ID: 0a1dbb
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48722

>>358521
that's so funny that due to some crazy doobie shenanigans i made this. In order to play this character you have to type "Ashy, stand up" at any time there is a pile of ashes on the field.
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No. 48723 ID: 0a1dbb

alrighty, so if anyone has a deep need to chat with me on irc, go to rizon and find #bamump . It'll be up when i'm online, but other then that i still need to find other op people... or give op to whoever is on before i call it a night.

but anywho, go to that, rizon/#bamump, chat with me or ask questions or whatever you want.
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No. 48824 ID: 0a1dbb
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48824

In recent news, A long awaiting update is coming.

Crusade time will continue after the moria intermission. Also moria will end in the intermission and the snippits lost in the story will be able to be unlocked during the play through of crusade time. So expect to see some spidercats soon guys.
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No. 48943 ID: d12795

so i need a vote, continue sexiness in job quest or go back to cute.
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No. 48944 ID: 86fe4d

>>358743

have your quest take a level in badass because cute, sexy and badass are the three pieces that make up the triforce of awesomeness. well, some humor doesn't hurt either, but that's another story.
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No. 48945 ID: 7c31d2

Sexiness. Because lesbians.
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No. 48946 ID: fcf88e

cute. We have enough lesbians as is.
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No. 48947 ID: 31afe3

>>358746
THERE ARE NEVER ENOUGH
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No. 48948 ID: 1b0f2f

>>358747

Every single man in the world disagrees with you right now.
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No. 48955 ID: d12795

>>358748
i mean i agree that i disagree
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No. 48959 ID: 1e300e

there shuold be more bisexual women, case closed
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No. 48960 ID: d12795

>>358759
for both sides, indeed
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No. 49054 ID: d12795

nothing better then recycling characters, but what if i didn't change their personality? Ohohoho!
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No. 49327 ID: 9933f7
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49327

so yeah, it's valentines day.
Here's a jobquest valentine.
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No. 49329 ID: 8b538b

>>359127

...why don't they bloom down there?
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No. 49346 ID: 40cb26

>>359129
Maybe it's just out of season?
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No. 49352 ID: 1b0f2f

>>359129

obv. their vaginas are on their heads
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No. 49360 ID: 40cb26

Oh wait, it's obvious. They just don't bloom where the sun don't shine.
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No. 49361 ID: 8b538b

>>359152

skullfucking has never been s-

actually, that wouldn't be anything new.
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No. 49390 ID: 9933f7
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49390

>>359146
>>359152
>>359161
laughed so hard when i read these.

>They just don't bloom where the sun don't shine
this is pretty much why the crotch doesn't bloom, plus most krobin girls trim down there for aesthetic reasons.

A good explanation is this, the girls bloom the way a plant grows. Nails is a sort of lime tree person, so she would bloom like a lime tree. If there was a girl who was a grape tree or something similar that girl would bloom like a grape tree. For nails there would be just leaves and such, but for a grape girl there would be vines. Imagine what a guy would think if they ran across a grape girl who didn't trim her crotch? It'd be some pretty interesting situations.
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No. 49467 ID: 9933f7

alright guys, if you want to chatter about krobin physiology, ask here. Don't want to clutter up the irc with melodramatic banter
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No. 49469 ID: 00303c

Do they come from Dallas and carry multipasses?
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No. 49478 ID: bdb3f8

>>359269
That is one of my favorite movies, I have thought of the similarity myself, and it STILL took me a minute to figure out what the hell you were talking about. Congratulations on the obscure joke presentation.
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No. 49671 ID: 53aede
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49671

...fifth element is a decent bruce willis movie.

cus ya know, Bruce Willis is my god-hero
I love bruce willis, LOVE LOVE LOVE HIM
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No. 49691 ID: c4a1fc

Okay, so since Bamump asked us not to shit up the quest,

Krobin views on homosexuality, sexual perversion, and the like. Nails was considered acceptable whore material after having her organs harvested, so it doesn't seem like their standards are high.

Likelihood of the Doc giving Matches' dad back. Professional kidnappers would never do that, but Doc seems less "professional" and more "crazy kidnapper". He's still not likely to let a girl go, though.

Whose help we should enlist, if anyone.

Should we hand over Nails or not? It probably won't help, and Nails could be useful.
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No. 49754 ID: 53aede

so uh, yeah... i've been busy. will try to update soon, but chances are it will be later than soonish. Since i'm not getting a whole lotta people demanding updates it won't be till i get more free time that they will come.

So til then, see ya guys soonish--- i hope.
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No. 58083 ID: 34cbef

You can discuss any of my quests in this thread Accept for Kingsmen. For those of you who haven't yet realised it yet I am bamump, so i'm bumping this thread because it could be relevant.
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No. 58095 ID: 4a328b

CHIRPS HELLO!

I didn't know you had other quests!
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No. 58106 ID: 4a328b
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58106

>>439337
Fanart/suggestion/baseless guessing
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No. 58110 ID: 34cbef
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58110

>>58106
Welp, now it's canon. Why the hell not. Lets give him a goofy martian antennae aswell. that is an awesome picture btw.
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No. 58115 ID: 4a328b
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58115

Head bobbly! <3
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No. 58135 ID: 12c19f
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58135

Laaaarva.
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No. 58222 ID: 6a1ec2

>>58135

D'aww!
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No. 58224 ID: 34cbef

>>58135
>>58115
quint is getting some love- warms my heart. Hopefully we'll do some Actual Bounty Hunting but who knows.
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No. 58225 ID: bf3f27

> Actual Bounty Hunting
I've already lost hope.
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No. 58226 ID: 4a328b

>>58225
nooo don't lose hope we can make it

I mean if nothing else we could always turn in regina

y'know

if we got desperate for bounties
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No. 58227 ID: 34cbef

>>58225
HAVE NO FEAR, after be stuffs we will definitelly get this quest on the track it's intended to be on, right after food, chores, and a quick nap
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No. 58231 ID: dd287a

Yeah, this is just pre-hunting 'Driving regina nuts with shenanigans' obviously we should do something like this everytime we turn in a bounty.
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No. 58265 ID: 34cbef

alright, for some odd reason i'm making a side project that relates to Huner in my spare time
A regi smutt comic, don't tell anyone

If people are interested in me either uploading my progress or wanting a finished hard copy you can send me make a mention in this thread
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No. 58266 ID: 4a328b

>>58126

WEREN'T YOU GOING TO PROVE THEM WRONG?
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No. 58267 ID: 34cbef
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58267

>>58266
well this is going in a different direction...
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No. 58268 ID: dd287a

ahahahah, this is Tgchan, we always want to see the result of smut.
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No. 58336 ID: 34cbef

alright so i'm in need of much needed sleepy time- with my current spree of never sleeping. Gotta dedicate the next day or two with what i call beauty sleep. Updates late sunday or early monday. Count on them
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No. 58374 ID: 4a328b

>>58336
pssssssssssh sleep
Who needs it!
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No. 58566 ID: 34cbef
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58566

well damn, i'm kinda well rested- guess it's time for updates.
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No. 58581 ID: 4a328b

Update! DETAILS OF QUINT'S PRE-BOUNTY-HUNTER LIFE EMERGE IN YON TRADER'S TONGUE!

>[Quint] ... twisted fallacy, sister element, neon histrings and finally fate. The mailman is a Sis. E.

I'm going to theorize that Sister Element is either the name of Quint's species or Quint itself in Trader's Tongue

Fate is probably a person or organization. The others could be people, places, things, events, etc., no idea.
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No. 58582 ID: 34cbef

>>58581
I can divulge the delightfully horrible secret or you could ask him in the ITQ threads. Or for a third option you guys can still hypothesize, whichever is up to you guys- but the truth you have to work to find out.
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No. 58583 ID: 4a328b

>>58582
No spoilers plz!

This sounds like fun :D

THEORIES AWAY
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No. 58620 ID: 34cbef
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58620

[Liar] It seems we are born.

[Nature] You know who you must kill. I shall be the first to hunt.

[Machine] You are diligent, but do not be too sudden. Take heed that an Inevitable disappears as suddenly as it is born once there is no use for it.

[Death] My sense tells me I am going to repair the damage of one who does not die, but I am filled with fear to complete this and then realise that the persona I have made will become too attached to life. How can you, Nature, not have the same fear?

[Nature] I have this fear, but for one who is named Death you should realize also that nothing is permanent, not even us. But if I am lucky, I will figure out a new purpose before my current one is complete.

[Machine] Very smart, then good bye Nature. May your hunt be fulfilling.
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No. 58631 ID: 34cbef

Traders tongue is a complex language of context covered up by phrases and sayings. This language is used heavily by underground organizations and alumni of very dark upbringing.

This is a quick lesson on how to translate Traders tongue. Now traders tongue uses phrases and sayings known by everyone and if taken out of context can be construed as a normal conversation about the day or current events. Sometimes information that can be said in one sentence is said as two seemingly different topics aswell. Due to the nature of Traders Tongue it is always changing based on the times and what's common to that period.

Now to get to the actual teaching, I will set forth a few examples of traders tongue and give you their translated variants. I will also explain how to process it in your own head.

We will start with an easy sentence:

Remember Tommy J? He does so much work and yet doesn't get any recognition. Well I believe that we should do something nice for him, like sending him on a long trip or something. But it should be a surprise vacation, don't want anyone to find out.

Explanation: Now to you or me it seems like a boss talking about one of his employees. But in Traders Tongue it comes out like this:

Tommy J is causing trouble and needs to die, I don't want to be blamed for his untimely demise.

This is how you translate this particular sentence. The story starts out with the subject- Tommy J. Then it goes on with the issue, criminals never exalt or praise anyone. So in this case it is really an obvius fallacy who's meaning has to be the opposite of what's said. "He doesn't do any work and everyone know's about it." the part where it's a hassle is implied. Finally it's the objective, where the story teller is asking the listener to "take Tommy J on a long trip." Anything after that is miscellaneous notes, where he says that he doesn't want anyone to know it was him. This is an easily translateable hitman request in Traders Tongue. Two things you should notice. First is that the story is longer then the actual translation. And second is that it follows a format.

The next post I will translate the Grandfather story Bern told Quint.
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No. 58632 ID: 34cbef

Well it started a while back when he was working at Grey Mage. The old man took some time off to explore the building for infrastrature damage and to check the layout of the grounds. One day, he fell in deep into a hole and just vanished for a while. Me and my men went looking for him and found the hole. We found his body, along with alot of skeletons that were buried in there. It turns out that before that Grey Mage contracted there to be renovations to the buildings setup and they dug that deep pit, but people kept falling into it and were unnable to get back out. We went over and talked to one of the heads and they did eventually cover it up. But you see, Regi did not have any direct parentage so she only had her grandfather.

Translation:
The old man went snooping around the inner workings of Grey Mage, sneaking in or doing undercover work. He went in too deep that he couldn't escape. We had to go in and see if we could do a rescue mission but it was too late. It turns out he uncovered alot of incriminating things against Grey Mage that they didn't want uncovered. We went in to expose them but they figured out how to cover it up.

Alright, I leave it up to you to point out the key phrases used in this that connects the story with the translation.
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No. 58668 ID: 4a328b

Ok, gonna take a stab at it.

The first sentance introduces Grey Mage as the location, and when combined with the next sentence where he is "[exploring] the building for infrastrature damage and to check the layout of the grounds." we can conclude that what he was doing at Grey Mage was snooping around to see how the place was set up/how it worked (inner workings).
"He fell into a hole and just vanished for a while" sounds very much like it should translate to "He discovered something he shouldn't have and was never seen again~~~", so yeah, Grey Mage killed him. Bern "went looking for him" so they obviously knew he was working on something here, and hadn't heard from him since he "fell into the hole", so the implication is a rescue attempt. They found out he was dead and some other "skeletons" (like "skeletons in the closet" type skeletons, probably including actual bodies). "They did eventually cover it up" means they couldn't expose it when they tried to.

Did I mess anything up?
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No. 58679 ID: 34cbef

>>58668
yeah you got it. it's not a hard language to pick up on- but the common phrases change all the time. so does slang. And using slang is definitelly a thing.
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No. 58683 ID: 6808dd

i just wanted to drop in to say that your quest is lovely and i like it a lot and when i see that it has been updated my heart sings a happy little song
okay bye
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No. 58684 ID: 34cbef
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58684

>>58683
well hey, thanks. And a hearty dog pile right back atcha cus you rock also.
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No. 58686 ID: 4a328b
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58686

Animated! :D
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No. 58688 ID: 34cbef
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58688

>>58686
i like it... but it reminds me of something... i can't seem to think of it at this very moment, but it does strongly remind me of something.

Thanks man, this rocks
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No. 58695 ID: 34cbef
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58695

a sneak peek at Rerk's little brother. He may or may not show up in the quest.
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No. 58697 ID: bf54a8

oh my god he has a tail!! SQUEEEEE
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No. 58734 ID: 6808dd
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58734

i don't know whether this should go in the big fanart thread or here but everyone is posting stuff here

so
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No. 58745 ID: 34cbef

>>58734
i looked at it... then i looked at it again... then a third time. This is awesome, you are totally... i can't even think of a word better then awesome.
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No. 58859 ID: 34cbef
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58859

more frog family
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No. 58919 ID: 34cbef

Taking a small hiatus for real life shenanigans. When I get back we'll finish the heartwarming stuff and do some kickass bounty hunting, I promise.
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No. 59015 ID: 34cbef
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59015

just a thing i drew

nothing special
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No. 59114 ID: 34cbef

okay, so watching soul eater and i think i'm getting great personality references for potential characters. this show kinda sucks with all the repetition, but jesus christ black star is f-ing awesome.
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No. 59251 ID: 34cbef
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59251

baboom, a twist. This was actually a thing before i made rerk a character.
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No. 59602 ID: 34cbef

I had a strange dream, so i'm making a quick one shot.
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No. 59696 ID: 34cbef
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59696

i find myself staying up at 4 or 5 in the morning... usually it affects the way i think, that's why i try to refrain from updating when i don't get any sleep
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No. 59840 ID: 34cbef

I guess for anyone who really cares about my quests i decided to put down my general updating schedule. Now keep in mind this schedule is based on my habit of updating at these times and don't take into account those few times that I'm up earlier or later then these times.


TCSG: Kingsmen- usually once a day, i will either bump or update based on how many suggestions there are
Hunter - i tend to update this quest around midnight central pacific and at least thrice a day unless i'm really tired
Generally anything else- Falls into the once every other day around the 10 pm to 5 am time period


Also, if anyone has any suggestions of quests that they don't wanna run but want to be apart of you can make them here and i'll see how I'll run the ideas.
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No. 60157 ID: 34cbef
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60157

Alright, this is sort of a small chart representing the names i've used around these parts. Some of them are recognized, one of them i don't want to really dive into and all of them were definitelly different stages of my mental health (but also the styles i've become savvy with). One of these days I'll compile a list of all the quests that i've ever done here... but it's not gonna be right now...
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No. 60165 ID: 97cff2

>>60157
i liked bamump V.2, becusa it looked cool
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No. 60191 ID: 061a93

I like chirps.
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No. 60328 ID: 34cbef

time to make that incomprehensible list of quests.

cookie mafia:
http://tgchan.org/kusaba/graveyard/res/280920.html
Epic Survival:
http://tgchan.org/kusaba/graveyard/res/281126.html
short questquest:
http://tgchan.org/kusaba/questarch/res/285936.html
short questquest2: http://tgchan.org/kusaba/graveyard/res/300142.html
Speedzoom Quest:
http://tgchan.org/kusaba/questarch/res/292150.html
speedzoom quest z:
http://tgchan.org/kusaba/graveyard/res/341587.html
justice quest:
http://tgchan.org/kusaba/questarch/res/296032.html
justice quest2:
http://tgchan.org/kusaba/questarch/res/325056.html
justice quest3: http://tgchan.org/kusaba/graveyard/res/355537.html
justice quest4: http://tgchan.org/kusaba/quest/res/424031.html
persona quest:
http://tgchan.org/kusaba/graveyard/res/353129.html
wierd1: http://tgchan.org/kusaba/graveyard/res/329510.html
wierd2: http://tgchan.org/kusaba/graveyard/res/395156.html
wierd3: http://tgchan.org/kusaba/questarch/res/435639.html
wierd4: http://tgchan.org/kusaba/quest/res/415884.html
Grey Mage quest: http://tgchan.org/kusaba/graveyard/res/338080.html
wiggle quest: http://tgchan.org/kusaba/graveyard/res/362107.html
cueball quest: http://tgchan.org/kusaba/graveyard/res/348217.html
Crusade Time: http://tgchan.org/kusaba/graveyard/res/356790.html
Moria: http://tgchan.org/kusaba/graveyard/res/367145.html
[[DOOBIE]]: http://tgchan.org/kusaba/graveyard/res/381274.html
the job quest: http://tgchan.org/kusaba/graveyard/res/373951.html
Another Potential: http://tgchan.org/kusaba/questarch/res/427308.html
Hunter Prologue: http://tgchan.org/kusaba/questarch/res/437229.html
Hunter: http://tgchan.org/kusaba/quest/res/447334.html
croc pit: http://tgchan.org/kusaba/quest/res/449000.html
2chirp: http://tgchan.org/kusaba/quest/res/415884.html
faster then a tweet: http://tgchan.org/kusaba/quest/res/423034.html
space peeps: http://tgchan.org/kusaba/quest/res/423372.html
ratblade: http://tgchan.org/kusaba/quest/res/422299.html
Dirge of Lamentations: http://tgchan.org/kusaba/graveyard/res/312748.html
dirge of lamentations reboot: http://tgchan.org/kusaba/quest/res/444976.html
seducing the possessed: http://tgchan.org/kusaba/graveyard/res/310586.html

and that's all of them so far
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No. 60330 ID: 34cbef

Alright, popularity poll time. Now that i have this list of all my quests you can dive right into them at your liesure- noted that not all of them are finished and the majority of them are shorter then 10 updates, but there are a few enjoyable ones.

This is a poll to see who should get a cameo in my current running quest Hunter. Just list your top four or five in descending order, from most liked to fourth most liked, and whoever is listed the most times will get an appearance in Hunter.
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No. 60331 ID: ecfcdc

>>60157
>>60328
You know, this stuff ought to be on the wiki.
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No. 60332 ID: 34cbef

>>60331
one of these days when i have free time i'll sit down and figure out how to put my page together coherently.
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No. 60345 ID: 4a328b

#1 forever: Nails from THE JOB

Runners-ups:
Greymage of Greymage
Girl with the knife in her head from shortquestquest
Franklin D. Pompadour of SpeedZoom quest
Moria of Moria
Spacepeeps
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No. 60456 ID: b6edd6
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60456

Coincidence?
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No. 60673 ID: 34cbef

>>60456
cute

>>60345
>>60330
Still holding that poll for cameo character
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No. 60674 ID: 788f24

>>60456

Haha
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No. 60675 ID: c31f72

>>60345
This guy's list is identical to the one I was going to type. Its amazing.
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No. 60676 ID: 34cbef

well it'd break cannon if nails were to spontaneously be alive again... but if anyone else wants it then i could change canon
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No. 60677 ID: 4a328b

>>60676
we can call THE JOB an alternate reality where Nails reeeeeeeeeeeally f'd up on her first day xD
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No. 60678 ID: 34cbef
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60678

well i guess nails wins the cameo, here's a few doodles- not sure what hairstyle she be showing up in yet.
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No. 60858 ID: 27d5ae

I'm working on updating Bamump related wiki things
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No. 60869 ID: 34cbef

>>60858
this guy is a cool guy and should feel cool cus he is
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No. 60901 ID: 34cbef

alright guys, sorry i haven't updated yet but my sleep shedule is really off balance this weekend. I gotta get this sucka working, updates will probably be late sunday or late monday
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No. 60910 ID: 34cbef
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Just wanted to do a setting related story
I hope you enjoy this little story of Harold and his time in the factory.
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On a little planet, far from the cotton candy dreams of our little boys and girls, there is a place where bunbuns live. The bunbuns are the ever so adorable and innocent people that live out their days without a care in the world... that is since before the factory came. A place as interesting as it is tall, with the very tops that puff puff cloudy grey clouds. It is unknown when or how exaclty the factory got there, or why now the bunbuns work so devotedly at it but they do.
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All the little bunbuns were devoted workers, not really knowing why or really caring what they were doing or why they were doing it, and they had lived like this for many lifetimes. There were many roles in the factory, and each seemingly important. There were packagin roles, there were delivering roles, there were cleaning up roles and then there was the most important role of all- Feeding the factory! Oh yes, sometimes the bunbuns got careless and littered the floor with many things that which fed the factory through the thing called "The Mouth". From garbage to cardboard to the meat that they delivered and on some instances(if they were not careful) Bunbuns- all these things they would feed to the factory.
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All the bunbuns would work throughout the day tirelessly, and they all loved it... that is to say all but one. Harold was an odd bunbun, never like the others. Harold was a sensitive bunbun, one who was not raised like the rest because unlike the other bunbuns he was "different".
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Harold had always been afraid of the factory, ever since he was born he had felt that there was something deeper- something not pleasant about the factory. Everyday he worked the assembly lines and he would listen to something that no one else could hear, To harold it seemed like the boxes or maybe it was the things inside were trying to talk to him. He couldn't tell enyone else about this, because even though he was afraid of the factory he was more afraid of not being normal. And then he was one of two bunbun assigned to clean the belts after all the bunbuns had left. His first day he was so afraid to show up, but when he did he was pleasantly surprised that the other bunbun assigned was a cute bunbun girl. This made his job all the more pleasant, and as time went on and the more after hour shifts he had worked around the girl bun bun he had learned to enjoy working at the factory.
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Af a matter of fact, if he ignored the voices he would get to actually love his job. And it was like this for quite some time.
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Until one evening, he had found one of the piglet heads just lying around on the ground. It seemed odd to him that no one had gotten around to throwing it into "the Mouth" of the factory during the day. Harold would take it upon himself to do it for whoever should have, that might get someone to like him atleast, he thought.
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Harold took it straight to "the mouth" but had gotten a small mess on his favorite shirt. He was disappointed in his clumsiness, but then something strange happened. The head spoke, harold was startled by this. The pig's head spoke, "Bunbun, i say, bunbun- what is your name?"
Harold replied that he is Harold, the Night belt cleaner. He was tasked to clean the belts, and that it is abnormal for a head to be talking- or that's what he thinks doesn't happen too frequently.
The pigs head spoke again, "Harold, I was once a person as you are now. I had walked, I had talked, but yet now you package us up after we have been slaughtered and are willing to throw our heads to feed the devils machine. Do you know why you even do this?"
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>Animated

Harold replies that he didn't know why the bunbuns work in the factory, they just do.
"Then think on this, Harold," says the head "It could be the other way around. Some horrid beasts could find you delicious to eat, and it would be me packaging your meat in boxes- and I would be holding your bloody dismembered head in my hooves ready to toss it into the maw of the beast. Harold, when you throw me into that thing i want you to listen. Listen carefully, do not make a peep or a squeal, and you will hear what the mouth of the devil says to you."
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And so harold threw the piglet head into "the Mouth" and listened carefully, oh so carefully that he could hear the crickets outside over the sounds of grinding. At first he could not hear anything but the grinding of the machine, but soon he heard it. A faint little whisper, "Blood and flesh fill my gut, but if I starve then I will hunt."
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That night harold would have nightmares of the devils mouth coming to gobble him up, and would witness in his dreams how his bones would crack and his skin would mangle. Harold would not have a good sleep from this point on.


And that's the end of part one, there's more coming.
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No. 60922 ID: 55d8f6

nice
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No. 61024 ID: 34cbef

so there is most likely going to be a hiatus for Hunter till i can get the time to work on the update. it's a long one
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It is another day at the factory. It is currently lunchtime, and as usual harold is eating a delicious nothing sandwhich.
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It has been a few months since harold has had a decent nights rest. He looks to one of his co-workers and asks himself how do these bunbuns stand eating if they knew what was right underneath them? You see harold isn't eating not because he is poor or because he doesn't have food- it's because he would become sick if he were to think about the factory while he eats.
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Recently the factory has taken up a new policy, and to harold it is one that will drive his stomach to churn if he were to dwell on it while he was trying to consume something. He is having a hard time as it is watching everyone else eat.
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The factory heads, whoever they are, have decided that instead of investing in cemetaries or burial for a bunbun, they could profit by feeding the dead to "the mouth." And so every day those in charge of feeding the factory head out to grab the currently deceased and piling them around the mouth while feeding it as they go along the day. Because of this, harold refuses to eat anything while thinking about the horrible thing eating his people.
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But as determined a bunbun he is, his mental health is waning. Harold is haunted by the voices of the factory, and day by day they keep getting louder and more intrusive to him.
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Harold finds himself on this day questioning everything around him. Who is he, why is he here, why is anyone here, and who is keeping us here.
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He looks at the bunbuns around him, the belligerantly ignorant masses who go along without a care in the world. That stupid carefree look on their faces- If only they knew what harold knew. Then they would understand, they would understand harold... but alas harold is the black sheep here. These... stupid bunbuns... all of them are the same, it angers harold to no end how they treat him like he's some wierdo.
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But there is someone else who is also different. Just like harold, the only bunbun who keeps harold here both mentally and physically. She doesn't know it yet but harold loves this bunbun more then even himself. At the end of the day she is his everything, and he is whole every time he glances at her.
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Harold can feel himself losing the battle between sanity and the devil, that's why he must have this silver lining.
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yes, he must have her...
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"What is the matter with you," bursts the bunbun of harolds dreams. Harold briskly apologizes and turns away... but his heart tells him that he must push forward, he must go on the offensive and capture this silver lining before it escapes.
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Without knowing it harold opens his mouth and lets loose with three little words.
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Harold does not know what to make of the awkward expression so he continues explaining that she is the most important part of harolds day. He keeps tolerating everything, the tedious work/ the subjugation and murder of other sentient creatures/ even the immoral act of throwing the bodies in the devils mouth, he tolerates it all only because he gets a chance to work beside her.
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And then she replies with the unthinkable, she starts berating harold and insulting him. She comes out bluntly and states that there is no way she could ever care for such a wierdo as harold, she finds it disgusting that such a freak would have a crush on her.
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And then, as if she didn't just crush harolds heart into a fine grain, she takes her leave from work. Leaving harold there, by himself, to listen to the ghosts of the building.
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Harolds adled brain is hit hard, he is bombarded by a series of emotions all of which crumble and reform into more harsh versions of themselves. Eventually all of the emotions turn into a sort of hatred, a realization that just like everyone else- the girl of harolds dreams turns out to be just like everyone else.


and then the factory talks to him. The mouth asks for an audience.
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"Hello harold," says the mouth.
Harold cannot reply because he has been crushed.
"Harold," the mouth coos, "You are tired... you are hungry... you are weak."
Harold does not know where he is anymore, but he still realizes that he is talking with the devil personally and so he replies that he will not be devoured- not even if you sway his weak bunbun brain, he is not gonna let himself become the same as the pig.
"No harold," mourns the mouth, "I don't want to eat you. I want you to eat them."

harold is suddenly empty. His brain is nothing. And so he asks, what does the machine mean by "Them?"
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"Look at them harold," the mouth says, "The dead bunbuns that look like yourself. The very people that cast you out of their world everyday."
Harolds mind is weak, he looks at the dead littered around the mouth. His anger is harsh and screaming. The pig is calculating and rationalizing. And the devils mouth is whispering and consoling. They are all telling harold to eat.
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Today harold grabs a thing that looks like him, but he doesn't see himself in it anymore.
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And so today, the devil wins. Harold eats the bunbun without much care, he is a messy eater and gets the blood on himself.

This is the end of part 2, more still to come.
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Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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No. 61159 ID: 34cbef

oh... uh... well... it's cute, thanks
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Warning, this section is the first part of the downward spiral. In these next few parts there will be some themes that may cause some discomfort.

Welcome to the factory. If you go down this hallway, past the breakroom all the way down beyond the exit sign and take a left.
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You will find a door, and behind this door is the devils mouth. Recently there have been some maintenance issues with The mouth and so the owners of the factory (whoever they are) have seen fit to designate a sort of "Mouth Supreviser."
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Say hello to Harold, he is in charge of what goes into the mouth. I believe he has been working this position for... about a few years. He is an odd bunbun, some rumors have been thrown around, but don't pay him or the rumors any mind.
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More folks who take care of cemetary clean up have arrived, but today they don't know that it is a very special day. It is the 5th year anniversery of when harold first started working for the factory!
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But nobody really cares about harold, he's just that bunbun who needs to supervise what goes into the mouth.

"Does he have a name?"

"maybe, dunno... didn't have a grave made yet when we picked him up."

"Then throw him in."
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It seems that harold does not care either... pity, because if he were to find joy in anything lately his mind may have been saved.
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Harold has formed a new set of habits lately. Some of which are questionable at best. It starts with him waking in the morning, maybe pushing a corpse off of him that may of tumbled atop of his sleeping self. Then it goes on through the day saying yes or no to bodies and then watching them get ground up. Then later that day when there is no chance a bunbun would interupt him he would have dinner, mostly of the corpses that littered the floor. Then after that harold would argue with himself, debating the justification of eating his fellow bunbuns- sortof a three pronged debate between his rage, the pig's head, and the devils mouth itself. And if Harold felt bold enough he would spend fifteen minutes of the night watching her... just watching her work... then finally he would crawl beside a corpse pile and go to bed.

This routine has gone uninterrupted for three years because the factory managers (shapeless, nameless, and omnipotent) have decreed that harold is the perfect superviser of the mouth.
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But today is harold's anniversary, and on a day like this something "special" will always happen. Harold seems to have lost the debate against his rage, but has also lost his coherence in the process. Today it seems that harold has become oh so bold that he will not just watch the silver lining work today but he will attempt to woo her.
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And so as if he is inebriated by insanity he presents his gift, a simple bunbun's head- a snack for them to enjoy. She is startled beyond words
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He moves in closer, hoping that maybe proximity is why he hasn't been successful. He explains that he has been enlightened by the factory- that there are things that he wishes to share with her, and experiences that he wants them both to share. Harold tries to impress her with how he has endured such things, such as the long nights of sleeping with the dead and eating the elderly. He wants only to love and to be loved, yet his words are lost in the sheer terror that the female bunbun is stricken with.
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She attempts to take her leave immediately. Harold is dumbfounded by this, he has offered his heart YET AGAIN and she wants nothing to do with it.
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But not today, he thinks to himself as he shoves her to the ground.
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He attempts to offer pittance again, and in return she scolds him with harshness and threats. He is finding this debate very taxing on his very enfeebled brain and likewise is finding it hard to make sense of what is travelling through it.
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He is suddenly stricken with another debate between his anger and the pigs rationlization. He wants the female to love him, but he doesn't know how to make her love harold voluntarilly... so he comes to a point where he starts believing that force must be used. Yes, thinks harold, he must force her to love him... harold does not know how this is done, but a thought suddenly bursts into his head.
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Harold must forcefully love her in order for her to know how to love harold.
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A caucophony of sounds through the factory, but to harold it sounds like a choir of beautiful angels.
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And the choir sang throughout the night.

This is the end of part 3, it will only get worse from here.
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for those of you guys who are wondering, yes harold is important to the plot. That's why i'm running through his backstory before i introduce him in quest.
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No. 61296 ID: 34cbef

before i update hunter i need to finish the harold story, so updates in that area probably won't be til i get past part 5
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Hello mary, how have you enjoyed your promotion to supervisors assistant? Management, whatever manner of thing they may be, has decided you are a perfect asset for harold. They believe that whatever he is doing will be more efficient if you are with him along the way. This is the perfect job for any bunbun, says the people who no bunbun has ever met nor seen.
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Mary... if you can bear with the factory, it will take you places. Currently you are a sad pile of rubbish, used and discarded like trash. You keep questioning what is happening, but if you wait long enough you will find out.
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He has hurt you, and he will keep hurting you... but just be patient, hold on for just a little longer. If you can wait, you will live.
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He is happy now, but if you slip up he will be angry... and you know what happens when he gets angry.
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Mary, calm yourself. It is only one of the bunbuns from the floor, they have brought you some garbage that was left on the floor. Soon it will be closing time mary, but even though you know this is the worst time to endure you still must.
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[animated]

No mary, don't look at the garbage. It will only try to seduce you into believing something that you shouldn't...
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Oh no... mary... why do you cling to the lier as a loved one. You shouldn't believe what it says, even though it's pleasing to the ears- it will only lead you astray...

why mary
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I'm sorry mary, but you will not wait. You cannot be patient. You cannot endure. And now it is closing time, and He knows aswell.

I'm sorry mary, i can no longer help you. But even though that is true, i will be here watching over you.
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You do not fight, you cannot fight, because it's worse if you do. Uses you, and then you wonder what sort of god there might be who watches this unfold. I love you so much, mary, but i will not help. I can not help, because you did not wait- you you listened to the pig instead of being patient and listening for me.

Now you are deaf to me, and as much power I have, i cannot save you from your own choices. I cannot save you who chose to listen to someone else.
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I cannot save you from the him.
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You take his communion as he offers, and you cannot feel me.
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You raise his sword to fight with 'Honor', and no... you cannot hear me.
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And you wear his face to commit his slaughter... i'm sorry mary, but no- you cannot even see me.
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I'm sorry mary, but because of these sins you've put on yourself you have become dead. You are nothing in my eyes, and I love you but i cannot save you.

Mary, you are dead, and I love you... and i cry for you. I mourn the death of mary.
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But mary... she mourns for no one.

The hammer comes down many times, the female bunbun slams the skull on harolds face as hard as she can.
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But she isn't strong enough, and harold overpowers her. He puts a firm grip around the females neck and begins to squeeze.
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Harold thinks to himself, What stupid ignorance! How can she still not love him, and so harold continues his offensive. This time, he thought, this time she will get it- she will understand how much i love her.

She tries her best to fight harold off, and also to breathe. But even though she is able to breath haltingly, harold wins.
because harold always wins.
It was said at the beginning-
and to the female bunbun-
it will always be so.
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And harold leaves her there. She coughs and sputters, but she lives. She continues on in this hell that someone made for her, while the denizens of it mock her and the king of it marks her. Harold walks off to grab something to replace his now empty jaws.
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Harold returns with some jagged pieces of metal debris. Though the recent scuffle he forces the female bunbun to help him with his new choice of mouth, But he always keeps a hand around her neck.
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Harold would like to ask her what she thinks of the new display, but it seems harold has forfeited his right to speak. But he does not mind, for what he lacks in speech he now can make up for eating efficiency.
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and so harold is off now, not to work but to plan. He is now closer to being that which he idolizes. He is now one step closer to being "The devils Mouth."

Now harold must learn how to usurp the throne of the current mouth, and begin his reign.

This is the end of part 4, the next part is going to be the last of the downward spiral. But it's not for the feint of heart.

More to come.
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it always feels like i have to have a seperater for these parts. Anyway, here's an evolution chart of harold the bunbun drawn in what he'd look like in quest
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Quite a peculiar mask...
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well i had to edit my story a bit, so if any of this loses you don't be afraid to mention something. I'm just hoping it still makes sense.

Today is a special day, not just for harold but for everyone. But harold is especially happy, today his favorite gave him clothes she made with her own hands.
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Harold has not had an issue with clothing until just recenty, fo you see he is now large. Very large, much larger then any bunbun could possibly grow to.
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this has caused harold to think... well think productively. He has had time to think due to his not being able to communicate with anyone.
He has thought of many things, such as who is management. Or why the bunbuns come to the factory. Or even why has harold grown so large and why is he different from all the other bunbuns. Due to his many hours and days going through routine he has been able to bounce these questions around in his head, and he has come up with answers to them all.
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Who is management? They are the people who control the factory.
What is the factory? It is a small domain of control, a sort of world that management rules over.
What is Harold? Harold had a hard time answering this question, and the longer he thought the harder it got. He realized the answer was simple. Since management would always act out the wishes harold had, even the ones that harold had only thought of, things would happen. So harold learned that He is management.
And the factory was his world... which he created... so the factory was also him.
Even though it sounded odd to harold he was content in believing this.
But he wasn't only content, he was overjoyed. He was the ruler of this, of all the bunbuns, he controlled them and could do whatever he wanted with them- as long as they were in the factory.

Harold had to tell everyone.
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Oh yes, harold ran around the factory- waving his arms and signalling everryone to gather at the room of the mouth. He had glorious things to say, so many things to do and to teach. It was as if he was a god, and he had to tell every bunbun about this.
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And today, for harold, is going to be a special day.
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And then he tried to talk, poor harold.
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Harold, just a bit frustrated, convinces his favorite to talk for him while he dictates. She agrees and steps forward.
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Harold gestures at her to try to explain that he is management of the factory and that he controls all the bunbuns lives that relate to the factory.

Mary nods at the gesture, but instead she explains to the bunbuns that if they wish to die a horrible death that they need only keep working at the factory. The monster that now stands over them will kill everyone and she hopes it will kill her. It has used her, and it also eats the dead... flee now or you will be used and eaten.
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Mary understands what the consequences were, but she wanted to show everyone what she is. What the giant red monster made her. she wants to push him to the limit, only to find a quick end... and she doesn't care what gives her the opportunity, she will take it.
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The bunbuns are terrified, some flee and others are frozen in place.
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Mary whimpers, but she is able to ask them to look at the face of a monster. Harold on the other hand is beyond any sort of anger.
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He looses himself and for a second he becomes the factory, his mouth opens wide ready to devour one of the onlookers.
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But it was only for a second, he shuts his mouth harshly.
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The bunbun that was caught in harolds grasp starts to aplogize, she even offers herself to harold in the hopes that harold doesn't kill her. Harold pauses... he does not know what to make of this.
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Harold is very confused by this, this causes him to think. He usually forces his love onto his favorite, but this one is strange... it's offering that harold love her...
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harold is very confused, he needs to take a rest. It has been a full day with of thinking, too much thinking, and harold would need to practice this if he were to rule over anything.
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Harold is not the only one who is confused. Mary starts to think aswell. She has been used yet again, and nothing. She tried to make harold act the monster that he is, but she's still alive. The other girl was practically offering herself to be used, but she goes unmolested. It hurts mary's brain to think this hard. She comes to a belief that she is not meant to be happy. And this drives her mad.
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She verbally assaults harold, not caring about repercussions this time. She yells out a chant, "use her- eat her," as she is fumbling over her words. She screams at harold why he doesn't treat the other bunbun like he treated mary.
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Mary screams and yells, she lists off all the things she has endured. She states that she was turned into a thing that was forced to eat the dead also, and she was mated with forceably, and all the bad bad bad bad things that she has seen. She made cloting for harold out of the skins of dead bunbuns...
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she wants to die and yet the monster that makes her want to die doesn't want to be the one to kill her.
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Harold would say that he never wanted to hurt her, he just wanted to love her, but harold is mute.

Mary, not being of sound mind, believes that she will show all of them. She even says so verbally as she takes control of her short life and makes the choice to end it.
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harold recognizes this, this is not good, it's a thing he knows... what was it, oh yes it's madness. Harold does not know where he came up with that word but he knows it as if it were himself. He moves as swiftly as he can to intercept, but he is still a lumbering giant of a bunbun.
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Mary doesn't even feel the machine as it rips and shreds her. She just accepts everything involved with the end of her life, and she does so laughing. Laughing when it starts eating her torso. laughing even when she can't laugh.
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And she's gone. Just what she wanted.

Harold is in a mixture between crushing and crying. The devil's mouth just ate up his only silver lining... It must go
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Everything must go- the factory, the bodies, haro- wait... where's the hole... this thing is supposed to lead to hell, it's a mouth. It's a mouth that's supposed to be the devil's, but where is the rest of him that's supposed to be connected.
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Harold is so confused he begins to vomit, and from his mouth is mary... because the devil's mouth is the mouth of the factory, and harold is the factory.
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because harold is the factory...

and this is the end of part 5. I think it makes sense, but if you guy's don't get it just post a comment.
More to come.
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and the seperating pic for this one is the cult of the maw. It's an all female religion of ... well you'll find out in the next part.
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No. 61417 ID: bf54a8

those are cute bun girls.
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No. 61421 ID: 6a1ec2

>>61417

Yeah, cute until they feed you into the meat grinder.
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No. 61422 ID: c99cad

>>61421

Hey now, Harold and his "special" friends need to eat too!
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It is bright outside.
It is warm outside.
Today harold gives up on the factory, and himself- he has no real meaning to exist.
Harold decides to take a walk, because what else is there in an empty waste for a god to do?
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It is so bright outside harold has a hard time seeing.
That's right, he realizes, he hasn't been outside for so long... Harold is surprised how much he misses the outside, it makes him sad that all harold sees is not under his control.

But there is naught but scenery and old feelings, so harold continues walking.
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And he walks, far beyond his factory- so far beyond anything it seems like he's walking to the very end of the world.

There is nothing at the end of the world, just land under your feet and hills to occasionally cut the horizon. But harold doesn't mind, it's still warm and inviting... to harold it even seems like this would be the perfect afterlife if he were to drop at his own feet right now.
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The irony of this is that the first person to meet him on his journey to nowhere is death himself.
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And in return harold holds nothing but malice towards the creature.
Death looks harold over quickly and says that death himself did not think he would meet anyone out here in the land of purgatory. For death has walked a very long time in the hopes to walk right out of the land of the dead. He asks harold if he is anywhere near the land of the living, for he misses the warmth of the living and the sight of joy that any group of people can have.
Harold only frowns.
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And then others come, each one travellers from a place beyond their own imaginings. One of them calls out to harold and death saying that whatever handicaps they had in their homes are lifted as long as the four of them are together.

and for the first time in a long time harold speaks, "...who am I who is mute and finds only death in the desert?"
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and another replies, "Yes, who are we who were once innocent and yet are now a perverse mockery of what was birthed."

It is the last one that arrives that answers.
"We, as in everyone here in this atrium of orphans, are small gods."
Death grunts at this and asks, "we aren't gods, we can die... and we can feel... I feel less like a god and more like what god would banish."
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And then harold becomes ferocious, "YES, what manner of existence is a god if he only eats the dead and can only force his love onto other. This is not living, this isn't even existing!"
Death and the machine hearilly agree, and then all three of them detail the sufferings they have endured.
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The one known as nature yells out a mighty roar to calm them all down. He explains to them that it is never ascension without trials. He explains that each god must suffer his own... birth, per se. He explains the laws of their existence, about how they are only temporary gods who have been set down to destroy a mortal who has dared to defile the laws set down by their own creator. Nature goes on to say that their existence is only as long lived as their duty lasts, for once they have destroyed the blasphemer they will return to nothing that birthed them. He explains that each one of them are modeled after a law set down, nature himself is modeled after the law that one cannot control or sway the laws of men, planets, or the very cycles of nature itself. For death, he was modeled after the law that all things come to an end- no vein act will grant any mortal an immortal lifespan. For the machine, he is modeled after the law that all machine are the creation of men and none can earn the name of man by gaining the ability to feel, or to birth, or to even become god. And for harold, he is modeled after the law that governs lies. In this it states that no action, or word of untruth such as fallacies should ever become truth no matter how willed one may desire.
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harold replies, "... s-so ... it seems that we are born."
Nature replies that deep inside they know who to kill. The machine cautions with the reminder that these temporary gods will vanish after they have lost their purpose to live. To this Death mentions that even though he is the harbinger that he also is afraid to suddenly be no more.
Nature pauses for a moment and replies that he too is afraid of what will happen after his purpose is gone. But he schemes and plots that if he were to find a new purpose that he may not end as was planned. The machine takes note of it, and so do the rest.
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As he is the last one to arrive he is also the first one to leave, so nature departs. To harold, who is supposedly the god of lies, he finds the statement of them being gods somewhat... like a lie in itself. He is certain that none of them are gods, but he cannot say this for as soon as nature left he is yet again mute. Harold realizes that if the four of them begin to believe that they were gods that they themselves would be heretics...
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But because he has not the ability to speak he cannot warn them... or in honesty, he cannot justify why any of them shouldn't become heretics due to what they have all endured. And so harold is the next to leave, pondering how to be the best little heathen he can be.
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And so harold returns to the factory, expecting it to be all but empty. Harold did not enjoy anything that came from the factory so he had destroyed his resting area, throwing away the mockery of his own mouth and devouring most of the corpses in swiftness. It will not be today, or tomorrow, but soon harold believed he would grow hungry and lonely.
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But inside there was something that harold did not expect, it was a single bunbun. An odd one this bunbun.
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This is the same bunbun that offered herself for her life, harold is confused why she doesn't run away like all the other bunbuns. But in the meantime he just ignores her.
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The little bunbun girl gives harold a gift, it seems like a new face of some sort. Harold begrudgingly accepts it, but wonders why he would need something like this...
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This day was seemingly no act of difference to the little bunbun girl. She would leave at night to go home, but she would return in the day to watch harold. She would go through this routine of leaving at night and coming back during the day until she eventually never left.
There were times in which the little bunbun made harold very uncomfortable and very confused.
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At times harold would eat at she would stand there watching. Just watching harold rip and mangle the dead as if it were bread.
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and while harold did this she would occasionally lean over harolds knee and ask to try some. She did not want to eat out of harolds hand she wanted from his mouth, and this harold could not do. Harold still ignored her.
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And at other times harold would have those... urges. But she was still there.
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And so he would commit to his urges in the hopes that this would scare her away, but she would stay and would watch.
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and would offer herself... This sometimes got harold angry, but then he just forgets his urges and goes back to ignoring her.
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One day harold is sitting, resting, when she comes up with the gift she gave harold a while back. Harold is completely flabbergassted as to why this little yellow bunbun is still here. He looks at her helplessly. Harold realizes that he eventually will have to force her away and he does not know how to do this, so he just frowns.
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61470

She senses that there is something amiss and so the little bunbun runs off for some time. But when she returns with another female bunbun.
She is ecstatic in the belief that this is what harold needs.
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She explains that harold is running out of food, and that mating with a dead thing can't be too pleasant. So she offers up her best friend and says that if harold likes it enough that she'll keep bringing other bunbun girls to please harold.
Harold is taken back, soe he declines the offer.
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61473

She doesn't seem to understand why harold keeps ignoring her or her offerings.
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She starts to think that maybe harold likes dead things. So she begins to strangle the life out of the other bunbun.
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Harold intervenes, he has no idea what is going through this bunbuns head, but he knows it does not please him. Harold surprises himself with a horrid gutteral growl as if he were some giant wolf, but it gets his displeasure across.
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The little bunbun apologizes and gives harolds arm a hug. She explains that she doesn't want to see harold angry or sad, and that she really cares for harold. She goes on in saying what harold wanted to hear from is silver lining.
She says that she likes harold.
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harold... is... stricken, he does not know what to say- even if he could speak. his head is filled with all sorts of emotions.
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Harold suddenly remembers the time he met the others like himself. It dawns on him that even though he isn't a god, this would be the perfect oppurtunity to spit in the face of his creator and be a god anyway.
Yes, harold thought, I will be a god to this little bunbun girl... and to all who want to believe me.
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And he accepts the first sacrifice of what will become many more.
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61480

Harold has not eaten a living bunbun before, especially one that he has just mated with. He wonders if it would taste any different from any of the dead bunbuns.
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Harold takes a brief moment to think over his whole life, from becoming a bunbun who feared and hated the factory to a god who is about to eat a living creature. And then he begins eating.
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And so the church of the devourer was founded. In time there would be many more who shared some sort of twisted mentality as the little yellow bunbun, all of them female who loved harold in some twisted way. The cult is known by almost everyone as one which follows a monster for a god, that of which rapes and eats the women that the all female congregation offers up to him. Small pockets of these cultists are found everywhere and have been known to fondly regard immorallity that they practice frequently in orgies, canabilism, eating the dead, and murder. Many opposing forces have tried to squash this cult, but it seems that each follower is suicidally devoted. It's said that if anyone even dares attack the main church of the devil's maw that either the huge red monster comes out or the very factory that the church once was will become that of a hound and devour them.

And that's the end of the harold story, updates for Hunter will come sometime soon. I hope you enjoyed this little jaunt into the history of a bbeg, because i... well i really didn't, but i just hope you enjoyed it.
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No. 61493 ID: bf54a8

i'm surprised he doesn't snap them in half with his jumbo dick. h is huge so he has huge dick.
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No. 61495 ID: 34cbef

>>61493
i'll be honest, it is big. And the doodles may not be very... sizeably accurate. Still does not make it any less pleasent to be a sacrifice.
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No. 61496 ID: c99cad

I actually like Harold, sure he is a fucking monster, but it's not his fault, just the cards that he has been dealt, and he's making the best of them, Monstrous or not.

Even so, Harold is less of a Monster than any one of the cultists that flock to him, Harold was brought so low by fate, his own heart, and the demons that lurk at the edge of every conscious mind.

The Devourers' Wives? Not so much.
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No. 61596 ID: 34cbef

hey guys, here's a thought. Abel being a devourer wife- think on that one for a bit.
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No. 61631 ID: 34cbef

i can say that i am a little dissappointed that the story never got to the church. But i can wait on harold showing up in story, i mean you have to hunt him anyway- it just doesn't have to be right now.
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No. 61632 ID: 86c3a7

>never got to the church
It was the bunbun's fault, really. We were more than willing to walk right in the doors of the cannibal rape-cult until she made the mistake of making too hard a sell too early.
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No. 61634 ID: 6a1ec2

>>61631

Harold is the hunted? I thought he was one of the hunters. I even had a great guess who he's supposed to kill.
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No. 61635 ID: 4a328b

>>61634
I think he's a hunter, but isn't going to do his job 'cause he'll vanish. Thus Quint's supposed to kill him for shirking his duty
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No. 61666 ID: 34cbef

>>61634
i want to hear this guess
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No. 61679 ID: 34cbef

CHAPTER 1 IS OVERRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!

What did everyone think? I wanna hear all sorts of opinions and hey maybe some criticism also. Hit me with it!
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No. 61680 ID: e94f05

>>61679
First off your die roll was priceless.
Twas a fun quest, a bit stiff story-wise here and there, but not something to be considered an issue.
I was expecting to see the hunter mode HUD a bit more since it was introduced, but to be honest I'm relieved it wasn't the case as it seemed a bit cumbersome.
Love the characters and love the fact that quint is quite the prankster capable taking a joke.
Again, it was a fun quest and I can't wait for the next one (there's gonna be one, right?).
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No. 61681 ID: 34cbef

>there's gonna be one, right

of course.
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No. 61682 ID: 6a1ec2

You could have saved the story of Harold for after we've gotten thoroughly tangled up with that ghoulish cult. I can understand why you'd want to get it out there though. Not the thing you want to be the only one thinking about! (Especially not alone at night with the lights turned out.)

I expected the cultists to have a better reason for wanting such an expensive doctor. Harold being sick for instance. Actually that might still be the case...

You sure do have a way with characters. You seem to second guess yourself a lot though. Introduce Plipper, oh hey he's dying, Rerk is a throwaway character, oh hey actually he's central to the plot, this isn't about Nails wait no let's bring in that guy who was watching her back. This isn't going to be porny oh hey look Nails is blooming! The thing is, either way in these changes would have worked, so don't worry about needing to change the direction of your story just to stay entertaining.
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No. 61683 ID: 34cbef

>>61682
huh, you're right. I'll try to stay focused on one thing at a time then.
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61684

Fate of the cultists?
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No. 61685 ID: 34cbef

>>61684
This is pretty funny.

Welp Second Chapter has Officially started, I know- hate me for killing off quint, but that's what happened so please bare with me.
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No. 61686 ID: 4a328b

>>61685
Hey he came back differently right? s'all good
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No. 61688 ID: 86c3a7

>>61685
I'm more than happy to take the long road, so long as it eventually ends with us waiting with a gun at the foot of the cliff for piggy, who promptly shouts something about 'how did you get down here and shouldn't you be dead!' and then gets shot.

There are advantages to being able to respawn non-linearly.
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No. 61689 ID: 4a328b
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61689

I realized seconds after drawing this that it's obviously not at all what he looks like now--all the bun bun's ears go down, not up!

what a fool I was
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No. 61692 ID: e94f05
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61692

...SO, since this new hunter took on the shape of it's current target does that means this new hunter will get any of Harold's traits like the height or the crooked fingers?
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No. 61696 ID: 34cbef

>>61692
he will take on the same growth as harold did, yes. But he isn't harold, so some things won't be the same.
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No. 61697 ID: e94f05

>>61696
Ah, indeed he isn't harold I was just curious if the change of species carried another marker for the hunter to be aware of its current target considering what the oracle said when it was introduced.
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No. 61698 ID: 34cbef

>>61697
ehhhhhhh, i guess i can divulge this. Metatron is like the most powerful hunter. He takes on the form of his targets to better understand their weaknesses, but he also takes on that particular target's "special flaws." Harolds obvius flaws are his gangly fingers and monstrous physique, but his special flaw was that he heard the phantoms around him. So if our current protag were to ever fall into the same habits of harold, then yes he would be an exact copy of harold- but even though i'm open minded i don't believe anyone really wants our main character killing, raping, and eating everyone.
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No. 61699 ID: e94f05
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61699

>>61698
Don't tempt us.
Nah I'm joking. At least I am, can't speak for the rest but I HOPE they don't try to go that way.
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No. 61723 ID: 6a1ec2

So, I'm still not understanding why Harold is a target at all. Isn't he just one of the hunters? If he was Quint's target Quint would have just offed him at that meeting right there. Is it that Quint used to have a different target, but it somehow got changed to Harold? How is getting blown up by a piggy Harold's fault? Shouldn't Quint have turned into a piggy?
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No. 61725 ID: 34cbef

>>61723
it seems like you are missing some stuff. Lets start at that meating, that red thing that looks like Quint isn't quint- that is nature. Quint kinda has a doppelganger complex when it comes to hunting them down. The part where the piggy blew up quint is a totally different thing... orpus was originally going to be the target of us bounty hunting- and harold is sort of a divine hit. Lastly, the piggy is... well part of the shallow story concept- you are a bounty hunter and you wanted to hunt down orpus for money. Harold is the deeper in context thing- You are metatron, a super being who needs to find these guys and kill them.

I'm not sure where you see a connection about harold being blamed for killing quint, but quint changes to a form of an innevitable that he has had close contact with- harold almost swiped at his ship so in doppelganger logic that means quint will be looking like harold.
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No. 61726 ID: 34cbef

I guess i have to make a better explanation of what metatron and the innevitables are... where to start...

Okay, so it starts with this- god made man... and all other creatures that walk, talk, breathe, and screw. Then god saw that the men or peoples... all of them, alien and human and bearpeople and god knows what.... Well they were smart, maybe too smart, so he saw that they were not doing what he wanted. So he made these laws, these things to seperate them from being a god.
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No. 61727 ID: 34cbef

Now these laws were rediculous no-one-could-even-break laws that kept mortal peoples from actually being a god. You know, haven't heard of anyone controlling the weather or making babies from non living things. But God turned away for just one tiny unthinkably small unit of time and what happens? He finds out that some folks broke his impossible to break laws. At first he's like, "what? How coudl they even..." then he's like "Well i can't be havin this!" and so he puts down four creatures that were granted his ... powers i guess.
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No. 61729 ID: 34cbef

Each one of these four things, I call them innevitables, well they have a job to go and destroy these folks that went and made themselves gods (which are those folks who broke the impossible to break laws). But the innevitables came into existance and they were like, F-U god- I'm not gonna do what you say. And so god had to throw down a fifth innevitable to go kill the other four and then kill those dudes that the four were supposed to kill. I know, take it in slowly.
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No. 61731 ID: e94f05

>>61725
>>61726
>>61727
>>61729
...It, uh... It's kinda like power rangers meet higlander...
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No. 61732 ID: e94f05

>>61731
only Metatron doesn't have a megazord.
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No. 61733 ID: 86c3a7

So... there are 4 demigods to kill, 4 hunters to kill them who went rogue and turned demi-god themselves, and Quint Metatron, who's supposed to kill 'em all, and doppelgangers whichever one is closest or he last came into contact with or whatever.

As Quint he was hunting Nature, since being forcibly rebooted into Deave he's now hunting Harold.

And then there's fucking around with mortals and regular old bounty hunting for shits and giggles.
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No. 61735 ID: 34cbef

>>61733
yes, I had a longer version I typed up but yes that is it right there.
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No. 61736 ID: 4a328b

>>61733
Long term goal: find a way to say F-U god! and keep running around doing what we want without him sending down ANOTHER inevitable to get rid of us. Maybe we can go and become a god ourselves or something
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No. 61750 ID: 6a1ec2

Oh I get it. That meeting in Quint's flashback wasn't a flashback at all. Quint just looks like whoever he's hunting, and got bored with Nature or something and explosions, and now has an eye on Liar. Makes perfect sense.
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No. 61979 ID: 34cbef
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61979

folks are always wondering how big harold is, so i made this. Now there are some deviants who are wondering how 'big' harold is, and that's a trade secret.
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No. 62005 ID: 34cbef
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62005

[Deave] THIS ISN'T EVEN MY FINAL FORM!!!!!!!!
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No. 62007 ID: e94f05

>>62005
...Now I regret not suggesting that he turns into the guyver for the current dream sequence.
Heck, even kamen rider and make him scream "JUSTICE!" every now and then.
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No. 62238 ID: 34cbef
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62238

sneak peek at potential story arcs
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No. 62257 ID: 34cbef
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62257

my hair choice template, i made this so i don't keep using the same dry hairstyle. This isn't all the styles i could think of either. If anyone thinks a style is neat and they want to use one themselves go right ahead.
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62260

this is a selection of my favorite hair styles. I'm saving these for those special types of folks
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No. 62355 ID: 34cbef

alright, so i seem to have some authoring issues. I'm starting a new quest to see if i can focus- now i know this is just gonnna be another issue i've had before but i'm hoping to get this quest started, learn what i need to learn, and then finish the quest.
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No. 62517 ID: 34cbef
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62517

I've decided to illustrate in a comic what i'm seeing the suggestions are in Hunter. I'm not sure if it's bad storytelling on my part or the lack of imagination from my audience but jeez.
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No. 62518 ID: 44f93b

>>62517
Seems pretty apt. I really have no idea what we're doing at the moment. (From the player's perspective, we can't tell where the cliff is! Or, there a cliffs everywhere? Kind of hard to tell).

Honestly, the problem is we're messing with relationship drama, uncertain precognition, and unintelligibly cryptic spirit guide, and protect the friendly npc from death all at the same time. As a collective, we're not particularly skilled at handling any of those, really. All at once is kind of maddening.
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No. 62519 ID: bf54a8

i pick FUCK THE UNIVERSE, get some sweet regi lovin.
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No. 62520 ID: 12c19f
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62520

This is my apt reiteration and biography of chirps' strife in storytelling.

Directed by M. Night Shamallamadingdong.
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No. 62522 ID: c31f72

So wait, we're gonna get Regi killed because of a faked documentary?
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No. 62524 ID: f2c20c

>>62517
For crap's sake, dude. You tell us she's destined to die, and if we try to fight destiny it would be an UNFORGIVABLE SIN AGAINST GOD. So naturally the reasonable thing to do is to let her die but try to make it pleasant. Then you have the genie stop us before we do the thing we were supposed to do and tempt us to commit that sin.

You are trying to convince your readers to behave in a certain way so that you can drive the story towards having Metatron get hunted by the God Eater, aren't you?

Knock it off!
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No. 62526 ID: 34cbef
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62526

>>62524
blast, foiled again by you astute do-gooders. BUT DON'T THINK YOU HEARD THE LAST OF ME!!!
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>>62520
wait, this isn't mine- WAHAHAHAHA
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No. 62532 ID: cd74ce

I wonder what cosmetical changes Asheron will cause once Deave wakes up.
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No. 62536 ID: 12c19f

Same stupid question from the latest hunter story thread.

Do all of Metatron's incarnations lack... assets?
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No. 62537 ID: 34cbef

>>62536
this current one has a dick. I just don't draw it cus i'd have to put a censor on it or use the spoiler box.
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62543

just a thing so as to not confuse people. When whimsical uses kobold as a term he's only using it's appearance as descriptive identity.

This is a visual for if it were just one spirit.
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No. 62549 ID: f2c20c

>>62543
He didn't have as much of a snout before Asheron though.
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No. 62550 ID: 34cbef

>>62549
gradual change, not gonna grow huge overnight- not even harold did that. Some of the wierder genie features haven't kicked in yet.
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No. 62552 ID: 12c19f

>>62537
That sure didn't stop you with the cuddlebee.
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No. 62554 ID: f2c20c

>>62537
You aren't required to use spoiler images for adult content. They were implemented just to hide really objectionable stuff.

"This site may not be suitable for minors." is on the front page, after all.
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No. 62555 ID: f2c20c

>>62537
You aren't required to use spoiler images for adult content. They were implemented just to hide really objectionable stuff.

"This site may not be suitable for minors." is on the front page, after all.
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No. 62556 ID: 12c19f

It was more or less implemented for really obscene adultry and violence. You're free to give back everyone's wieners and boobs, chirps.
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No. 62566 ID: 34cbef

alright, then nips and sausage for everyone.
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No. 62574 ID: 12c19f

Does Metatron's personality and demeanor change depending on his body or is he an overall goober?
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No. 62577 ID: 34cbef

>>62574
well it's based on how his current life was raised, so far he's been a goober.
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No. 62596 ID: b7169d

Considering his parents and brother, not really surprised that he's been a goober. Not that that's a bad thing, but they are pretty nice.
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No. 62614 ID: 34cbef
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62614

a quick pic on the death story arc. For those of you who want to see what to look forward to here is a link.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Asclepius
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No. 62700 ID: f2c20c

...why would Mary go on a rampage against people she doesn't know?
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No. 62716 ID: 34cbef

>>62700
dangerous ghost sociopath who wants nothing but to make life miserable for deave.
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No. 62720 ID: 44f93b

>>62700
Psychotic vengeful ghosts aren't much known for their rationality. Besides, she still thinks we're Harold, anyways.
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No. 62724 ID: f2c20c

>>62716
I think it would become immediately obvious that he's not Harold, since she's now possessing the body of a young boy, and not anywhere near the church.
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62733

>>62724
>the body of a young boy
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No. 62765 ID: 34cbef

I'd update more lately if i could guys- but i've found that stuff keeps getting in my way. Updates will be happening infrequently now that there are things relating to voting temp jobs around here. Sorry guys, but I'll try to update when i can- and hopefully I can bang out the erratic transitions to make them less hectic.
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No. 62797 ID: f2c20c

>Don't worry, you're not turning into a lizard.
Was the dino-spirit lying to us? Because we did turn into a lizard after the second dream.

So... why is Asheron no longer in two places at once, by the way?

How did a ghost manage to break the rules and possess Deave to summon a Devil? Mary wasn't a Shaman, and we had to agree to link to the genie and dino-spirit to get them to do any transformations.
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No. 62798 ID: 34cbef

>>62797
shaman need to accept ghosts as guardian spirits to get the connection so the shaman's soul doesn't get shredded by the invading soul.
The transformations is the spirits sort of pushing out deave's soul and it's agreeing with hanging off deave's body.

Now when a bad ghost, example mary, who does not have acceptance from deave tries to do the same thing it wrecks his shit. This causes instant demonification- which in turn summoned the horrid hydra.
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No. 62799 ID: 34cbef

>why is Asheron no longer in two places at once, by the way

He is, that's why the hydra got split.

>Was the dino-spirit lying to us? Because we did turn into a lizard after the second dream

Yes, and yes
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No. 62810 ID: 34cbef
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62810

this is the current warp chart for nightmare factory. As you can see you have 1 notch in bloodlust because you saw that killing someone who deserved it was right. But the zero mark said "Killing is wrong, even if they deserve it"

based on your choices you will be influencing deave's morality. If you throw your beliefs in killing murderers at him then he will believe the same thing. If you suggest that killing in self defense is okay, then his morality will indicate this. Same with sanity and perversion, this will be influenced by your decisions and if some of you have a warped sense of right and wrong then it will affect his sense of right and wrong. You see? He is becoming more like you instead of you wanting to be him, so watch what you suggest, it might be something that will affect his outlook on things he he he
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No. 62811 ID: f2c20c

>>62810
Dude. We ARE him. Don't bring meta into absolutely everything, goddamn it. That's fucking stupid.

Plus, loss of innocence doesn't make you warped. I find it hard to believe, also, that Deave started at complete 0 Bloodlust. He wasn't a pacifist before! Did he forget all about killing Death just because he spent 10-odd years as a little boy?
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No. 62812 ID: f2c20c

>>62799
>he is
Wait, you're saying he's part of the hydra?

That's fucking ridiculous. Mary would have to be forcing Asheron into the mix. Since when was she a Shaman? Since when could she overpower a spirit that's as old as the fucking universe?
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No. 62813 ID: 34cbef

>>62811
yes, i get it, bad story telling. I know, the thinking I had at the time was that being raised by a nice family would pacify him again making him weak sauce that needed to harden up again. And that's what i'm going with, the wogs really didn't do any more bounty hunting after they found the kid, and in 16 years of having the perfect life he fell into the non combatant life. Now that it seems folks want him to be some badass from square one because he's supposedly some supernatural badass from the beginning it forces me to try to make him like that after every death- but then I got this other rule were he is as soft as the ones who raised him. And as i said they became soft.
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No. 62815 ID: f2c20c

>>62813
Meh. I have a different question now. Since I hadn't read most of the first couple threads I didn't realize that Metatron knew his purpose a long-ass time ago.

>[Quint] Yes, a construct tasked with correcting the fabric of reality. Last we met I was just born in a body resembling my target. It was the inevitable known as death and it had failed it's task.
From http://tgchan.org/kusaba/questarch/res/437229.html#443745

Why'd we have to relearn this?
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No. 62816 ID: 34cbef

>>62812
the hydra is using the genie- the genie can be many places at once, the hydra is many places at once. A demon is an amalgamation of souls, the genie is a soul, so is lizard father, and when deave isn't using his body so is deave, and so is mary. Mary is possessing deave, which is what happened when LF went dino form and Genie went full nether beast form.

Mary, this part will be new, has been the leader of the souls that harold has devoured. Her soul has an overpowering will- Deave the shaman has a weak will that has a hard time controlling full possession. Deave has attempted 2 voluntary full posessions and 1 voluntary demon summoning.

This makes deave weaker and succeptable to a haunting, which guess what- is a form of possession. Mary inserted herself into deave, wrecking his soul and haunting him- because mary has an overpowering will she dominated deave's soul forcing her and him to meld into summoning a different demon- genie and dino got sucked in because of their connection to deave.

The skinny- Deave is a ghost conduit, he has been haunted by mary and her entourage. Deave just obtained guardians to be a shaman- he lets the ghosts possess him to become dino or monster. Mary- who is also a ghost- wrecks him and becomes his involuntary ghost guardian and possesses him. dino,all of genie, deave and mary meld together to make hydra.

Nightmare factory- Hydra is currently wrecking deave's shit, deave needs to get said shit together to kick hydra and mary out.

Is this a better explanation?
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No. 62817 ID: 34cbef

>>62815
well the figuring out that he is a construct is the first part, people are trying to figure out how important that was. that's why it was redundant. This was another bad story quirk
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No. 62818 ID: f2c20c

>>62816
That still doesn't explain how Mary is able to use Asheron for the summoning.
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No. 62820 ID: 34cbef

>>62818
this probably will be hard to digest, but she overpowered him. Probably ate him. eating a soul isn't a permanent thing, it's not like they can be digested it's just the powers inherent are passed on. once deave kicks the crap outta the nightmare factory she'll spit genie back and dino back out.
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No. 62821 ID: f2c20c

>>62820
She overpowered a spiritual entity constructed by God, capable of rewriting reality at will? What.
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No. 62822 ID: 6a1ec2

>>62821

Man, what a bitch.
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No. 62823 ID: 34cbef
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62823

here is a chart of how strong everyone is based on their soul power... humor me.

It starts off with metatron, which is one soul times infinity lives. It is still only one soul.

Then it is Dino, which is one Strong Soul- his will power is domineering to average mortal souls. He has no life so he is just counted as a strong willed soul.

Then there is Genie, He has 20 souls. 20 average human souls invested into him and I forgot to put down that he gains a soul if people give up their soul to him.

Then there is mary who is one strong soul and alot more normal souls then genie has, and this number keeps increasing.

Then there is Gods soul, who is infinite amount of strong souls. There is no end to the souls, he just hands them out to vessels because he's god.

This here explains that Even though he is a god construct he is considered just one soul, same with genie who only has 20 souls. She is stronger then all of them except god and is only becoming stronger.
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No. 62824 ID: f2c20c

...where is she getting souls from? I thought you said souls can't be digested, and it wasn't permanent.

I would've expected Asheron to start with one strong soul and if he gains souls from deals, then wouldn't he have had waaaaaaaaaaaaay more than 20 from all his time making deals with mortals?
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No. 62827 ID: f2c20c

>>62826
...why does Mary get the souls Harold eats?

Why does Harold even capture souls when he eats someone, that's all kinds of weird. That seems like more of a power Death would wield.
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No. 62828 ID: 34cbef

>>62824
soul digestion isn't permanent, that is what i said. Don't think of them as food, think of them as... soldiers per say.

Genie has the same thing. And a side note is that he's a genie, souls must be given to him. Not every deal requires him to take a soul- most of his deals are just lives. Soul and life are not the same. When he is given an extra life he is able to live another life longer, he doesn't lose a soul.
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No. 62829 ID: f2c20c

>>62828
Yeah, I know that not all of his deals involve souls. My point was that he's been around for like, tens of thousands of years, or however long mortals have been around and making deals with him. This is a very high tech quest, so he must be very very old. With that amount of time, it stands to reason that a lot of people gave him souls, even if it was very rare.
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No. 62830 ID: 34cbef

>>62829
you are correct, he has been around for a while. You are also correct that he shoul have a strong soul. I am going to put all hunter related quests on hiatus until i can restructure canon to something that makes more sense.
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No. 62835 ID: 12c19f

Does that mean the cringe-inducing author-insert segment will get a re-glazing?
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No. 62837 ID: 34cbef

>>62835
it is currently being worked on, the new dis thread is up.
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63323

trying a new art style, since it's one of my quests it's chances of survival are the same.
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No. 63324 ID: 98378e

>Inb4 package is a baby.

Ha! I'm psychic!
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No. 63403 ID: 34cbef
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63403

Alrighty, So it's thanksgiving/christmas time and due to the holidays i'll be putting the creepy pasta on hiatus until the holidays are over. I will still be updating ayam and kingsmen, and depending on when current engagement is over there may be holiday related events in kingsmen coming up.

Keep an eye out for the updates.
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No. 63408 ID: 1e72ae

>>63403
Wow, king's quest has been going on for 3 months and like 10 days. Nice job keeping at it Chirps. It's pretty fun.
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No. 63623 ID: 34cbef

mkay, so my questing career as come to an abrupt end following the the destruction of my computer.

Yesterday my laptop, which is my main source of the internet, had stopped working. I checked it out and it turns out the battery doesn't take a charge anymore, and the power adapter has broken soldering. I'm currently using a throwback laptop- but this one is worse off then what I was regularly using.

What all this means: I can no longer author quests, or even go on the internet on a regular basis anymore. This leads to my no longer being able to update or participate in quests until I have a new computer... which will not be likely based on my current situation. If I can get money for rent first I'd also be very happy.

But anywho, it was nice tagging along with tgchan again. If I can get my cash loots to work themselves out to pay rent and get a new computer I'll be back.

If you wish to help me get a new computer you can donate by using this garble of a link:

https://www.paypal.com/cgi-bin/webscr?cmd=_donations&business=HXP4TH4Q9MUMQ&lc=US&item_name=Bamump%20stuff&cur
rency_code=USD&bn=PP%2dDonationsBF%3abtn_donateCC_LG%2egif%3aNonHosted
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No. 63627 ID: 70c0f2

Well, that's unfortunate to hear. Good luck with raising funds and making rent, and we hope to have you back someday soon. All the best, buddy.

If you're fortunate enough to meet your other needs but still can't afford to replace your machine, you could always buy a new power adapter (or attempt repairs, if you feel like splicing wires), and do without the battery. I made do that way for a while a few years back.
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66156

this is that guillotine list i wrote up.
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No. 66158 ID: bf54a8

>>66156
so...
KILL FRENZY
CLEAN ALL THE THINGS!
MONEY!!!
i can't find sex weird enough for me!
i cant throw anything out!
HURT ME MOOORE!
DIIIICKS!!
FIRE YO!!
uhhh... hair... something...
can i taste you?
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No. 66159 ID: 8b749a

>>63623
Why not just buy a new charger? And if that didn't fix it, buy a new battery? Or, unless you're using a mac, have it sent to the manufacturer to have a look at? All cheaper than buying an entirely new computer.
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No. 66161 ID: be7fd9

>>66156
Huh. You know, the vast the majority of those are things that might have come from us, anyways. XD

But how does this guillotine thing work, anyways? There's a roll to see if it triggers, then a roll to see which trait kicks in, and then we do something crazy and impossible with the selected deviancy?
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No. 66166 ID: bf54a8

naw i think one was picked at start. doesn't have greed cause otherwise 'gold' would of set them off.
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No. 66172 ID: 34cbef

>>66159
old issue is old, i have found compromises

>>66158
you got the gist of most of it.

>>66161
>>66166
yes, the quirk was already picked at the creation of the character.
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No. 66176 ID: be7fd9

Oh, so the fun is going to be guessing the quirk, or trying to put her in situations that would set her off to test.

Yeah, not wanting the gold rules out greed. Probably not homicidal maniac either, or we'd have just killed the librarian when he gave us shit. Pretty much everything else is still on the table, though.
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No. 66185 ID: 81723b

>>66156
Guessing now based on the last few posts: Phallic obsession.

This could also explain her hat, and how her teleport mishap landed her atop a tall spire..
not to mention dat Polymorph.
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No. 70154 ID: 34cbef

so i've been busy lately, i've been lucky in actually finding a decent amount of time to use a computer. Lately i've been trying to do all sorts of stuff, but in my spare time i think about quests. When i get something situated i wanna work on some of the quests i've done, specifically hunter. I want to rework most of it because it... is sloppy. I'm not gonna restart it, but what i'm planning on doing is restarting the story right after the Hunter thread.
So the actual canon parts will be the first thread: http://tgchan.org/kusaba/questarch/res/437229.html
And the second thread: http://tgchan.org/kusaba/questarch/res/447334.html
Everything else is being scrapped and redone once i come up with a more solid version that doesn't have wishy washy story telling.
Yes you are still going to be the 5 eyed creature.
No regina will not be dead or kill herself.
Yes the harold story will be scrapped and redone.
I will try to avoid doing huge time skips unless it is interractive character backstory.

I don't have much planned out for what I'm redoing, but alot of it centers around the background info on the mc and all things related to that. This isn't a notice saying that i will update soon, but it's a notice that Hunter 2 through 4 and nightmare factory is no longer being considered "actual events."

It looks like it will be a long while before I can actually update, but don't expect hunter to die out as badly as it did.

I hope to settle my issues and get back to questing asap
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No. 70160 ID: d6ef5d

Sounds interesting!

Yeah, the weakest part of Hunter was the pacing- the sudden time and premise skips. It felt like you had good ideas, but weren't giving the quest time to grow between one and the other, or for us to maneuver at each step. (Okay you're bounty hunting, no you're actually hunting demigods, nope you're dead, nope you're a bunny, nope spiritual stuff everywhere, now choose how your friends die D=<). Like, maybe we should have got a normal bounty or few in before we moved up to hunting demigods.

The characters were pretty interesting and fun, and really felt like the strongest aspect of the quest. But we kept skipping past interactions. (Never found out what happened to the bee girl, Regi skipped practically right from first meeting to death- we saw almost no friendship or working relation, we didn't really get to see Rerk and Quint work together, didn't get a chance to see what happened to the 'rescued' bunny cultists, Plipper and Rerk and Abel grew up too fast, etc).

The other problem was with information. Either we had no clue what the was going on or even how to function (Regina and the Shadowman) or we were told everything way too quickly. (For instance, you didn't need to spoil all the demigods and reincarnation stuff as soon as it came up- you could have let the information trickle out slower and more organically in quest. We buy into the story more, sometime, if we have to struggle to figure it out). Fixing pacing would probably go a long way towards fixing this, but it's something to be aware of.

...hopefully that came across as constructive criticism and not a bunch of whining. :p I really did enjoy Hunter, and would be glad to see it return.
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No. 70162 ID: 91c1b3

I really liked the characters too. The only issue that I felt was a big problem was the wishy-washy part. (back pedaling when the readers didn't like the consequence of an action they chose) It would have been nice to have the general goal of what we're doing the same for more than two chapters. (ex. being a bounty hunter and killing a guy each chapter) The tone changed so fast it was confusing.
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No. 70300 ID: 34cbef

So I finally realized that I have a usb drive, and most libraries have computers with mspaint. So expect updates.
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No. 70743 ID: 34cbef

sorry for the long pauses between updates, i've been busy. And I just can muster up alot of motivation to work on the updates. It's getting harder and harder to get excited about updating...
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No. 71973 ID: 34cbef

i'm in your main board, ruining all your fun with a julia quest

just distracting myself with something til i can get motivated with the main story
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No. 72624 ID: 34cbef

put peep commander banter here, that is all
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No. 72631 ID: 34cbef
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72631

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No. 72633 ID: 19b3c3

>>72631
It's okay, the pointless silly star trek parody is fun. No need to try and force serious stuff!
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No. 72636 ID: 34cbef
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72636

part 2, and that's my routine on /quest/
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No. 72637 ID: 735f4f

I like your quests Chirps. Both the silly and the edgy. So keep up the good work.
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No. 72650 ID: bf54a8

run two quests, edgy quest and silly quest. if you want silly then update the silly one, if you are feeling edgy then update the edgy one.
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No. 72653 ID: 34cbef

i just made the comics cus i feel kinda silly about making the edgy quests... turns out i can't do edgy very well, it's very abrasive to my personality. i'm still trying to find a way to transform all my hunter things into lighthearted funtime quests- it's just... soooooo course, it rubs against my brain so hard I can almost scream
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No. 72654 ID: 735f4f

Don't try to force yourself to be "edgy" or "silly". Just go with the flow and write the characters like they would act.
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No. 72673 ID: 2645fa

>>72654

yup.
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No. 73989 ID: 34cbef

so peep commander updated, wohoo
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No. 74128 ID: 34cbef
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74128

the 3 different bun races in any of my settings

Poplebuns are sorta the throwbacks to the other two. With black eyes and feet similar to elephants they are the most durable and hearty of the 3 bun races. Because they have a higher body temperature they opt to not wear clothing. Males and females are on equal levels in poplebun culture. Poplebuns isolate themselves away from the other bun societies due to different gender beliefs.

Bunbuns are the second prevalent species of bun in number of population on their world. Evolved from poples they have a dominant pair of front teeth used to slice up vegetables and on some occasions have been known to grow canines if a high meat diet. Similar to the poples they have elephant like feet, but unlike them they have claws for toes and on their hands. The clothing favor ability is similar to that of humans. Bunbuns are socially dependent, meaning that if they were to be isolated for a long period of time they will suffer and maybe die. Their society is based on their social dependence and they have created sentient creatures to cater to the needs of the populace. Due to strange genetic composition the populace of bunbuns are a high majority of females. The species is also highly impressionable due to the social dependence which inadvertently makes them gullible. Male and female standings are on equal level in this society, though their society is flimsy and lead by many.

Curebuns are the most prevalent of the bun species, with fingers and toes they can manipulate tools more easily then either bunbuns or poplebuns. Their genetic structure has shown that females are less prevalent in populace, but more muscular then the males. Curebuns are the strongest of the three species aswell as more proportioned. The curebun culture is deep and rooted in the belief that female curebuns are a separate and more perfect race. Due to this belief the order is maintained and governed by females, all forms of legislation by females, generally any important roles are taken by females. Males are not on the same standing as females due to the curebuns belief causing the males to become treated as interiors, often treated as pets and slaves. Due to the strange 'dominatrix' like culture curebun society rarely recieves outside influence from the other two bun species.
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No. 74143 ID: 01531c

>>72653
You are really good at grimbright storytelling.

Everything seems good or at least alright at first glance, but there's so much amoral fuckery underlying everything that happens and everyone's personalities it feels like a living universe with real people.

Thanks for writing them!
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No. 74207 ID: e1609c
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74207

Woah look I drew something by hand!!!
Harold is a good villian character, and his story is equal parts horrific and tragedy.
Good work, m'man. I have no clue what quest he is from, but that sordid tale holds up incredibly well on its own.
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No. 74210 ID: c95833

>>74207
Harold's story is a side story to Hunter. ...which has a lot of side stories, actually.
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No. 74216 ID: 34cbef

thanks guys, it actually helped to read some of this- having lotsa mental issues lately
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No. 74330 ID: 34cbef

welp, i'm going crazy- but hey at least i'm still coherent. trying to update quests as well as i can
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No. 74342 ID: 91c1b3

Crazy is kind of a sliding scale. What do you mean by going crazy?
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No. 74344 ID: 34cbef

>>74342
well i had a minor stroke, not even really that just some bad brain thing thats really set me awkward. I'm fine physically and all my functions er function- but my mental health is kinda waning due to certain circumstances. Ii'm told if i eat right and get a better sleep schedule i'll be just fine, but the worst the doctors said is that i'll just have a few moments of jumbled up thoughts- my deductive reasoning will be slower then it normally was
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No. 74346 ID: 91c1b3

A stroke is way over my head. I've had messed up logic-ing from something I've taken before and it really sucks. The only advice I can give on that is to speak out loud trains of thought you are having trouble with. I hope you get better man, and feel free to take some time off if you need to.
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No. 74511 ID: e1609c
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74511

>>74346
This. I have SEVERE adhd, and talking out loud really helps me keep my thoughts in order.
Also, I drew lil miss crazy for ya. Get well soon, dog
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No. 74845 ID: 34cbef

wohoo, i've started yet another quest
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No. 74846 ID: beeca1

And it is awesome.
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No. 82608 ID: df793f

Listen all ye faithful, however few of you there are, lets us vote to see which of my deady dead quests i will update!

any by me chirpsp, and old bamumb stuff. Vote vote vote, nya vote
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No. 82619 ID: c3ad33

HUNTER. HUNTER. HUNTER.
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No. 82620 ID: e1609c

Buoyant reality, as if I'd say anything different :v
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No. 82634 ID: befc95

BR please
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No. 82648 ID: 0ee153

>>74845
Apparently I liked whichever one this was, so voting for it.
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No. 82685 ID: df793f

i don't even remember
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No. 82686 ID: 50338d

[+] !
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No. 82691 ID: 2fc3e9

>>82685
Doobie quest, then. The one with Spessdood and Arduubien.
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No. 82692 ID: a36601

[+]
Cute as fuck.
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No. 82750 ID: f7aa74

so 2 for [+] and 2 for buoyant reality, the two will play an epic game of rock, paper, scissors to see who will be updated
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No. 83032 ID: df793f

so i have an update ready for these, but i'm gonna wait til gamuch is done with before I update anything else
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No. 83050 ID: df793f
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83050

the update that everyone was hoping would happen.
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No. 83066 ID: 6b7ea4
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83066

i want a gamuch of my very own
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No. 83068 ID: df793f

>>83066
i love it
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No. 83384 ID: df793f

glub glub, been busy with work and such.... oh yeah, i got a job!

also was wondering if people were still interested in buoyant reality, since i only got one response in the update... if not i had another idea in mind
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No. 83386 ID: ef7fd2

>>83384
finish buoyant u butt
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No. 83424 ID: df793f
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83424

you sure? I've got these two interesting peeps in mind
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No. 83425 ID: ef7fd2
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83425

>>83424
the left one puts me in mind of this
(but seriosly man, please finish buoyant. You tend to let a lot of quests die, I dont wanna see that happen to BR, you feel me? Like, do whatcha wanna, but please)
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No. 83478 ID: df793f

hrumph... i've had no time to update... hopefully i'll find some soon
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No. 84076 ID: df793f

i just had my appendix removed, try to update sometime soon... when i can
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No. 84078 ID: ef7fd2

shit dude, for real?
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No. 84084 ID: df793f

tis true, felt a pain in my gut and they found it to be early appendicitis or whatever... it wasn't too bad since it was caught early, but i'm on a weeks worth of bedrest
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No. 84971 ID: dff0a8

i'm finally updating again, my job seems to take up my free time so i haven't been able to until today- might go back to being quiet til the next day off i have
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No. 85126 ID: dff0a8

dang, i keep getting distracted
not sure when i'll update next
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No. 85818 ID: dff0a8

lets assume i have died and this is my ghost typing from beyond the grave. not sure when i'll get back into the swing of thigns again, but it might be still pretty far off
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No. 85828 ID: 61771b

>>85818
oh no, RIP Chirps.

It's cool to take a break for a bit man. Will be waiting for you when you get your groove back.

(also you have/had so many things happening to you that I didn't see/comment on. Just hope you're doing well overall man.)
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No. 87071 ID: dff0a8

so, there's not gonna be any rhyme or reason on when i will update next. Basically i work a lot, and to get my motivational art juices flowing i need a day where i am not working... but get inspired to doodle stuff... i guess what i want to say is that i'm lazy and need one of my days off to update. Not knowing when this amazing blue moon will rise but when it does i'll make an update.

I guess keep your eyes peeled for one.
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No. 87525 ID: dff0a8
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87525

guess who's finally got a scanner again!!!!
*points to self* THIS GUY RIGHT HERE, now i can get all my doodles done even faster and don't have to murder my hand using the mouse anymore.

though... maybe i'll still use the mouse
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No. 88204 ID: dff0a8
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88204

Horse Notes
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No. 88205 ID: dff0a8
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88205

More Horse Notes
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No. 88206 ID: dff0a8
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88206

Not Horse Notes
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No. 88210 ID: 5f402f

>say no to mark
>get killed
>mark comments on changing tactics
>instant new quest, kid in mark-faced mask offers unspecified gift
I think I see a pattern here.
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No. 88211 ID: dbe554

>>88210
Though mostly at this point I'm pretty much against helping that 'god' at any point, he's such an infuriating beeing.
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No. 88349 ID: dff0a8

just a reminder that any questions about my quest settings and suchersuch go here.

Also requests for any revivals of my quests can go here, if there is a large clamoring for a particular one i will take care of it.
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No. 88352 ID: a19cd5

update buoyant reality you butt you left us on a cliffhanger
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No. 88353 ID: b8ceae

Revive JusticeQuest, because that was fun.
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No. 88368 ID: dd4ed3

[+]

Slimes forever.
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No. 88489 ID: dff0a8
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88489

i'm drawing and editing pictures for the next 7nth update, goddamn did it take me forever- not just to draw them but to scan them, do simple autofill, crop the images, resize, etc etc etc... I'm dead, my eyes are bleeding. And I haven't even uploaded it yet- alright folks, this next one is a long one and it might have to wait til tomorrow if i don't get the motivation to do it tonight
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No. 88679 ID: dff0a8

don't worry, updates are coming hopefully soon
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No. 88762 ID: dff0a8
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88762

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGHHHHHHH
UPDATES TAKE FOREVERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR-


updating coming up soon after this posting, after i download them to my computer- re-size the images, separate the panels, add color to a few, and than jimmy up a decent script that goes with the notes i whipped up a long time ago.


I'M GOING TO DIE- AAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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No. 88767 ID: 9ddf68

>>88762
it's ok chirps, the updates are amazing and I can wait if I must, Just hang in there chirps I know you can make it.
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No. 88949 ID: dff0a8

ther is a hiatus on 7nth since i'm moving this week. Bought a trailer suddenly and hopefully getting it all moved in by this friday.
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No. 88966 ID: a19cd5
88966

>>88949
S'cool. Good luck with the move chirps!
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No. 89074 ID: 324890

blugh, still looking for time to update anything- so far i've got nadda time. i'm doing the best i can to scare up some time but a new house is a lot of work itself
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No. 89202 ID: 324890

it's my day off tomorrow and i don't wanna do nuthin, not even update- i've worked hard and now i'm gonna laze hard. an update will come at a later time, ffor now i willl do jack-diddilly.
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No. 89209 ID: 5d2f8c

>>89202
Enjoy that rest bub. You've (probably) earned it.
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No. 89317 ID: 324890

i have the day off monday, i will be working on cleaning and doing the update. So get ready for an update... that'll... be... something?
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No. 89364 ID: 324890

remember when i said there'd be an update, well i lied... and i don't have one whipped up yet....this is taking a lot longer than i though.

I dunno when there will be an update.
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No. 89678 ID: 324890

so yeah hey, it's me again. Remember that thing that I do, you know- the thing where I lose motivation in continuing a quest that i've started? Well the 7nth has caught that too now, i'm getting alot of work lately because my job is merging stores. These few weeks have been just me doing full week, six hour shifts with only one day off- and my next day off isn't until the 28th. Not only that, but I need to come up with an easier way to manage my expenses- i have gob awful sums of money but since we bought a trailer and need furniture I have to plan out my money and save a lot. Than there's... blugh... I want to do a webcomic someday, like an actual long term thing, but I don't seem to have the focus to do one.

I've got my pockets full of mud and I can't seem to do anything right now... But hey, i've gotten addicted to magic- bah enough blabbering for me.

So the skinny of it is that expectations should be low on me updating anything, I may throw out a new quest that also goes nowhere... or I won't... maybe I need some pills for this lack of focus...

well that's all from me for now, you guys have a good night and to all the new quest authors out there- Don't end up being like me in that you should finish your quests and be preemo coolio cus you did and get all the fans and whatever.

g'night
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No. 89684 ID: 52a46d

Aww whaaaaaaat
Noooooooo
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No. 89691 ID: cf91e4

>maybe I need some pills for this lack of focus
Take it from me that pills don't help with that kind of focus. The only thing that helps(and I'm still shit at it too) is discipline. I don't really know how to fix that but hopefully we both get it eventually.

For expenses you could set them into wants, needs, and savings. Depending on how much free cash you have, put a certain amount of your paycheck into savings each check you get and dont touch it for anything. Mine ends up being like $30. It adds up kinda quickly. Whatever's left ends up going towards whatever; bills, car repairs, or it just sits there.

Goodluck man!
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No. 89801 ID: 324890

my two best supporters, you two are awesome. Sorry i keep lettin you down
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No. 92555 ID: 324890
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92555

so, it's been a bit without a trace from me.
Welp, i'm over on 4chan committing pony suicide, if I survive this phase i'm going through I should be back will a good helping of renew bamump and demon do
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No. 92574 ID: 3009b4

How does one commit pony suicide?
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No. 92602 ID: 324890

>>92574
well first you grab an mlp unicorn by it's hind legs, then you jab it's horn directly into your stomach and drag sideways- kinda like seppuku
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No. 92765 ID: 3009b4

>well first you grab an mlp unicorn by it's hind legs, then you jab it's horn directly into your stomach and drag sideways- kinda like seppuku

Wouldn't it be easier and more effective to grab it by its front legs?
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